Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2018 3:15 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

Yes!!! This was everything I had been waiting for from this story! Definitely my favorite chapter of a giantess story ever!!! Thank you so much for delivering us this pure masterpiece. It’s disheartening to see so many want Melanie to finally get hers (as I’m not a fan of that in these kind of stories, but to each their own lol. I really hope you don’t go that route but I also know you gotta appease the majority and yourself). Hope you continue to turn the notch up on this story, which you seem to do after every chapter somehow! I can’t thank you enough for how awesome this chapter was and how perfect this story is as a whole. Can’t wait to see what torment Melanie dishes out, to her toys she has now and any newcomers that she may gather up!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! Indeed, the intensity keeps getting dialed up, doesn't it? But for now, I'm letting there be a bit of a breather while the story bridges into the next arc. Let it be known, though, the craziness isn't over just yet! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story~

Reviewer: DarkStarGoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2018 2:24 AM Title: Chapter One

So I want to start off by saying that this is an excelently written story; you manage to be detailed but without letting the story get bogged down.  The pacing of each chapter is mighty fast for their length, and the story really has me invested in the fate of these characters.  It's also just really refreshing to see a story that works well as an actual story and not just fetish material; it feels like an actual thriller honestly.

However things are beginning to feel a tad soap-opera-y after this chapter.  Honestly I knew how this chapter was going to end but I kept wishing Mel would have an actual threat to contend with (though I also like cat and mouse crime stories), but it's beginning to feel like the tired old story of the characters never getting a break or a win.  It makes reading less enjoyable; Chapter 12 was a well written chapter, but when the characters we want to root for keep losing you begin to expect that things will not go their way.  It made the twist a bit eye-rolling.  I feel like a better balance of giving victories to each side, even small victories for our small girls, would make the story less predictable and more engaging.

Not that I want to tell you how to write you story, you should write what you want, I'm just giving you my impressions as a reader in case you are interested in that.  I like the story a lot it is just beginning to become predictable.

But overall I like the story a lot and I want to support any author who writes awesome F/f content because there is not enough of that in the world!  I look forward to reading the next chapter.

On one last night... I know the story is all dark and serious, but for how much Mel is in love with Adrian we really do not get much, like, affection and love for Adrian... is that intentional?  In some ways not seeing it fits the story... but as a lover of F/f dub-con as fuffing rare as the genre is... just had to ask, heh.

Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

This! This is a good review! That's what I'm talking about.

It's music to my ears to hear folks enjoying Endless as something more than wank material. That's really what I wanted, a giantess story that captured both the eroticism and horror that comes with these kinds of situations. Crafted to my personal tastes, of course! I sometimes wonder if the elements that I find cute in this story are elements people are more spooked by, haha.

I understand your issue with Melanie not having a real opposition. She seems unstoppable, doesn't she? It can be discouraging to see these innocent people be knocked down, over and over. However, I think discouragement and degrade are a critical theme to this story. Melanie is oppressive and cruel, and she has all the chips on her side of the table. She controls the world of these people and she's savoring every second of it. Narratively, it would feel better to have some hope for our heroes -- a fighting chance. Unfortunately, Melanie really is that unstoppable. When everything looks like it could finally work out for Adrian and the others... it's depressing, isn't it? Everytime, there's nothing they can do. She either has something figured out, or a miracle happens for Melanie. The atmosphere of this story, truly, is despairing.

Perhaps that's what I want to ask from my readers. How long can something like this go on? Doesn't it stop? It's a question I like to see my readers thinking.

I'm glad I can bring some exciting F/f content to the site as well! It is unfortunate, however, that the theme of this story doesn't have a lot of room for the lovey affection parts that you (and I) crave. I actually do argue about where to include the softer scenes, but a lot of those ideas take a back seat as I try to focus more on the thrilling adventure parts. And, as the story has picked up pace, it's been hard to slow down and show more sincere moments. But with that said, I think Melanie's concept of affection is abstract. She really does love Adrian, in her own way. She'd kill for her! That much can be said, right? Melanie is a dark person and her one-track love is equally as dark.

Thank you again for this review, and thank you for reading! I really appreciate this critical input!

Reviewer: Marcarth Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2018 8:27 PM Title: Chapter One

I don't think I've ever wanted a villain to get there comeuppance more than reading this

I was certain you were ending it with the way twelve way going, but it seems like that sweet revenge is going to take a little longer

Author's Response:

I hope Melanie getting detective punch'd in the face can tide everyone over for now. I know a lot of you guys want to see Melanie put into her place, I hear you! I hope you continue to enjoy the series and thank you for the review!

Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2018 2:10 AM Title: Chapter Twelve

Ok so I wanna start off by saying that I’m mostly on this site to read just the “sexy” and more fetish related parts to these stories. But my goodness, was I hooked into this hardcore. This chapter was an absolute masterpiece, no exaggeration. It honestly legit felt like a movie. It’s crazy how much detail you put into this and I could feel the intensity so much it was insane. Was hoping Melanie was going to kill off one of her toys in a rage (vore would’ve been my choice) but in all honesty, with how great and absolutely perfect this chapter was, I’m not even mad lol. So excited of the prospect that Melanie doesn’t have to do the ritual and wait a whole day to shrink her victims now. The possibilities of what she can do now are limitless (or should I say endless hahah). I don’t think I’ve ever been more excited to see the next chapter!

Author's Response:

What a nice review! Thank you for such a positive response!

I'm glad to hear I can entice my readers with something more than just pure sexiness, haha. Endless has become a fun adventure to expand upon, I'm glad that it's found such an appreciative audience! Knowing that so many of my readers are awaiting the next chapter, it really encourages me to keep writing and try to do better. Looking back from when I first started this story... we've come a long way, haven't we! Seriously, thank you for reading~

Reviewer: Bobascher Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2018 2:18 AM Title: Chapter Ten

Wow! That was the most intense ride yet!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so! But the ride isn't over yet. I have a few more peak moments ahead that should keep you all at the edge of your seats. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2018 8:04 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Dear god, I'm rooting for somebody to make a run at stopping her.

 

An incredible villain all around.

Author's Response:

This latest chapter should be interesting to you then! I hope it is, anyway. Thank you again for this pleasant review.

Reviewer: MadHatter Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2018 4:05 PM Title: Chapter One

When I first read this one, I was like "Hmm..."

 

But after reading everything that's happened so far I find myself just wanting to see what happens next really. So good luck!

Author's Response:

Ah, the classic hmm. It means a lot to hear that you've been enjoying things thus far! Thank you for the review~

Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2018 11:29 PM Title: Chapter Nine

You sneaky devil...that was probably the cliff hanger to end all cliff hangers lol.  I can't wait to see how Melanie decides to play with Erin! Hoping the amount of times you mentioned Melanie's 'hunger' forshadows Erin's fate ;) sooo can't wait for this next chapter!!

Author's Response:

It's always a pleasure to read these reviews~ I love seeing what my readers are trying to guess at. I'm glad this has you so hooked! A hundred times, thank you!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2018 7:42 PM Title: Chapter Eight

You had me going there, I was fully expecting Adrian and Mel's nice day filled with delicious teas and clothes shopping to end without her getting a chance at escape.

 

But yet the plot thickens in the form of Erin, bravo good sir!

 

 

Author's Response:

Adrian has her chance...! It's suspenseful, isn't it? I wanted to make sure this light-hearted chapter still gave my readers that dark chill. Thank you for this review, I really appreciate all this support~

Reviewer: Bobascher Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2018 2:50 AM Title: Chapter Seven

I love these capture scenes! Kimberly’s was my favorite, but Nicky’s is a strong second!

Author's Response:

They are dramatic, aren't they? Perhaps I'm biased as the writer, but my favorites would be in the order they're written in, with Adrian first and Nicky last. Though, it's all tough competition! They're very fun to write and plan out, haha. Thank you thank you~