Very nice, cute and sweet with likable characters.

There a few problems though: it's too short with no conflict, Neliar doesn't get enough action or dialogue, and the "Couples" tag is misleading since the story never says they were anything more than good friends.

I wish you would continue this story and show Neliar coming out of his shell and developing feelings for Almineria. There is a lot of potential for character and relationship development here and I'd like to see a puppy love romance for once.