Reviewer: Try02 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2020 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Please shrunk mandy and humiliate her with alot farts and broke her sperit and tell as what is she think(monologue) like lost hear future and dreams and she know just buttblug fart for sadestic women That she enjoy humiliate and used tiny women

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2020 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 40

Yes! I'm so glad you are back! Damn, it's been a while, but hopefully that means you are working your way back to continuing this story. I really miss this story. Lots of great characters and I think we are at a really juicy part in the story. 

I had to look at the previous chapters a bit since I almost forgot what was going on. I even forgot who Bree was. Luckily, I didn't have to read much to catch up on her. So now it's all coming together as far was who gets shrunken and who plays with them. 

So Jess still gets Steve. Missy gets Chad and Gus. Bree will get Sam. Jax is still up for grabs and of course, Mandy doesn't have a toy yet. If she disappears, questions will show up, and people might expect Jess to have don't something to Mandy. I hope Mandy doesn't shrink. She still is my favorite giantes, but Jess has the best personality. 

You made an interesting point that you wanted more toys. I like the inclusion of more sons involved. Something about a younger guy being captured by these sexy milfs is kinda amazing. Only really young guy was Chad so I really enjoyed the moments where he was inside a giantess, especially Jess. The way Jess handled Chad was amazing, from the way she seduces him in the beginning, to keeping him inside her for days! I loved that scene. 

The video that Jess made was awesome. It will definitely make Mandy furious if Jess sends it to her. I wonder if Mandy is going to do something about it. She already tried the police, but we know that didn't work. I absolutely love the idea of Jess using a tiny guy as a peace offering. I'm not sure about it being Jax though. I mean, he would be a great toy, but for some reason, the fact that he is almost willing to be a human slave doesn't really make his shrinking that much satisfying. I don't know about you, but I like it when the guys are reluctant to be shrinken. Not like Gus who was happy about it. (I mean, if I was Gus, beck Id be happy too lol.) I think I like it when the tiny guys protest. Haha. Yeah, so if Mandy does get a toy, maybe it will be a reluctant young man. Hmm, maybe Jess has a young nephew or soemthing and Mandy somehow shrinks him. Idk. I'm just fantasizing.

Anyway, glad you are back! 

I can't wait for the next chapter!

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2020 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 39

Well, Gus is fucked. Clearly Jess and Missy are going to shrink Gus and give him to Bree so she won’t bother them anymore.

Man, I miss this story! It’s great to see you again. Jess being in control is hot, especially with Steve. Missy has Chad in her ass, and they both are living their perfect life. The only loophole is Mandy.

I’m curious that you had Jax told Mandy the story. I was surprised that actually happened. It almost feels as if you are progressing the story a little more which is good, but I also like the chapters where there was little progress and just more sexy scenes, haha.

But with Mandy aware of the shrinking epidemic, maybe she will get her own tiny. Of course, no one will be good enough to her compared to Steve, but I doubt she will get Steve soon.

Imagine Mandy sneaking into Jess or Missy’s house and she puts some pills or something into some drinks and leaves Jess and Missy unconscious. Then Mandy reaches into the butts of Jess and Missy and pulls out Chad and Steve. She really only wants Steve, but she feels bad for Chad so she takes him too. That would be some plot twist, right?

Anyway, I love this chapter and I can’t wait for the next one!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2019 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 37

Hmm. I like Jess’s plan, but there is one loophole, how would they know that Jax and Mandy would show up in his bedroom? It felt like Mandy wanted Jax more than Jax wanted Mandy so I was actually led to believe that they would fuck at Mandy’s house. Imagine that plot twist. No one shows up at Jax’s place and Jess misses her recording.

If Jess told Jax to bring Mandy to his place, wouldn’t he ask why? Ok, he might not, but who knows if Jax’s neighbors and stuff might see him with another woman. For Mandy’s neighbors it’s alright since people know her husband is gone.

I just had to point that out because I was imagining them fucking on Mandy’s bed, the same bed that Steve fucked Mandy for all these years, and recently when she used Steve as her own sex toy. I thought Jess was going to use that to make it more humiliating.

Speaking of Steve, it’s kind of weird to see him just accept being Jess’s toy. I always liked the rebel in Steve and how he fought back. I think the “truth” of Mandy starting all this really broke him down. Seems like it’s all downhill for Steve. Will he get a happy ending by reuniting with his wife and she notices him? I’m not sure if that’s your style since you and I both love it when Steve is with other women.

So Steve is back with Jess. Back where it all started. I’m so used to Chad being with Jess, that it feels kinda off for me, haha. I mean, I like Jess having Steve, but Chad just seems like better pair right now.

I like how you tried to make Chad seem like the perfect candidate for Missy. It’s funny because I think the last chapter I was trying to explain how Chad was perfect for Jess because of Jess’s daughter and how Jess got Chad’s mom and dad involved. So much devolved around Chad and Jess and now there’s this new story with Missy and Chad and while yes, they have a connection. I doubt it will be as strong as what Jess had with Chad.

Wait, so Missy is going to have 2 toys? Chad and Gus? I agree Gus is perfect for Missy, but I’m not sure about Chad. Maybe Missy will use Gus and teach Chad about worship and return Chad later. It’s hard for me to picture Chad with Missy for the long run. I’m already wondering who gets Chad next. Lol.

So Sam is going to be shrunk soon. Who gets Sam? Jess has Steve and I can’t tell if she likes Sam or Steve more. I was hoping Jess would shrink Sam and then she would pull Chad out of her pussy or something and force Sam to watch it.

Maybe Missy could do that since she has Chad now. But then Missy would have Chad, Sam and Gus. Hmm.

Then we still got Jax. Surely something will happen that will cause him to get shrunk. Jax is the only guy besides Gus that is aware of these shrunken guys. Maybe, he becomes a risk, I’m not sure. Or maybe he actually likes Mandy which makes Jess and Missy mad and they shrink him.

Hmm. Then Jax meets Steve and they fight. However, Jess records it and sends it to Mandy. Mandy watches it confused and in awe that she can see her husband before he “left” her. She thinks both guys are normal sized because when they fight, they are equal in size and there is nothing to compare their size with. (Ok, don’t add this part to the story, it was random. Haha.)

Yeah, overall, I wonder how long Chad will be with Missy. (Hopefully not too long, hehe.) and also how long will Jess hang onto Steve while she has to get Sam and help Missy get Gus.

Great chapter, I no longer wish to be in Chad’s position, haha. I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: G’day Bit of a mixed review but there haha, but I expected it, I did warn you that some parts may disappoint you, but I’m trying to make it exciting and interesting, I don’t want my story to be predictable, I like throwing twists in to keep you intrigued. When it comes to Mandy and Jax being at his house, Well Jess did arrange Jax to take her back there, she wanted Jax to cheat with another woman in his bed, so if she was ever to show his fiancée it would hurt that little bit more, also Krystal and Mandy’s kids were at her house so that would’ve been a bit awkward, just wanted to clear up the thoughts I had in my head, but now that I think about it, it would’ve hurt Steve more if she bedded Jax in her bed while the kids were home, but she wouldn’t have been able to be so loud haha. As for Steve he still has some fight in him, he hates being an arse toy and I think he will still protest about going in Jess’s arse when she wants to use him in that way, Jess will surely punish him for breaking his promise. As for Missy and Chad, I loved the idea of Missy getting her hands on the son of the two people who betrayed her, their son is now her dirty little fuck toy and Sam will be in for a treat in the upcoming chapters, it also looks like Missy is going to end up with two toys, she’s a whole lota woman and she might just need the extra toy to keep her satisfied. Jess is going to toy with Sam for a bit but it looks like he will be eventually shrunk down to size, but Sam is an arrogant arse hole and neither Missy or Jess really want him, so we’ll just have to see who ends up with him, I’m hoping to bring a few more characters into the story, I’m still in the process of who I can add and how they will fit, but I’m sure i’ll come up with something, in the meantime I hope you keep enjoying my story and i’ll chat with you after the next chapter. Thanks again for the feedback, always appreciate.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2019 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 35

So, I’m wondering about this deal now. Jess is probably going to exchange Chad for Steve. She did mention that Chad will end up with someone more worse than her, so Missy or Krystal seem to be the likely options now. Actually, I think this chapter just confirmed that.

Mandy....wow, I facepalmed just reading about her just letting Steve go like that. Like, she enjoyed the “dildo” so much that she just left it like that? She acted like Krystal’s dildo was something very special so I found it odd that she just gave it up easily. Also, getting it covering it poop doesn’t make a special disloyal worthless now. I’ve heard of people dig through poop to retrieve their cell phones back.

I was kinda hoping Jess trade with Mandy or something, dildo for dildo. That way we could see Mandy literally hand Steve over. Jess could say that Chad is a super dildo or dildo or something.

I did enjoy reading about Mandy telling Jess about how she used Steve. It was basically a recap of my favorite events the last few chapters. Then I liked how Jess was using Chad while she listened.

So now Jax and Mandy are going to be together but risk getting caught on camera by Jess. Maybe Jax will convince Mandy to help him or something. If he truly cares for his wife and baby, he would try to get out of this situation. Jax even knows about the shrunken guys, so maybe he might reveal something to Mandy for a plot twist. I don’t think Mandy will abuse Steve like Jess and Casey did, but I can see her just having Jax just fuck her a lot.

It would be cool to have Jess hold up a gagged Steve in view of Jax fucking Mandy. That sounds kinda hot to me. Hopefully Missy gives up Steve fast so we could get that scene soon.

So Jess gets to hold onto Chad for another day. If I was Chad, I would lick Jess to the center of her vagina. How many licks does it take to get to ...you get the idea. Haha. I imagine Jess will have her way with Chad in an unforgettable way.

Soon, Missy will have Chad. Missy will most likely just keep Chad in her panties. I never saw her as the creative type, so I doubt she would do anything to impress me. However, I know how forceful she is about keeping a sex toy down there so Chad may feel more like a prisoner with Missy than Jess.

Then there is still Sam. Where is he? I forgot about him. Is he with his wife? At Jess’s house? I forgot. I think Jess has to shrink him soon. I think Sam would be perfect for Missy. Likewise, Chad could have a go with Mandy, and Steve could return to Jess again.

Then there is Jax. Is he ever going to be shrunk, or is he going to be that guy with the big dick? Or is that Sam? One of them has to shrink. I feel like there is a lack of sex toys at the moment.

It’s funny because for most stories, I prefer there to be only 1 tiny guy, but with all these sexy ladies, I kinda want more so they all can have some fun. Imagine a world where every guy got shrunk and women could play Pokémon and collect all the guys. They could trade, share and experiment on ways to use them.

At first I enjoyed just having a shrunk Steve, but I actually like how this story just blossomed into all the guys at the mercy of these ladies.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Firstly I have to apologise for the late reply, my life became a bit busy but I’m back on track. I really like your idea of the Pokémon game for women, where every guy shrunk and all the women would run around collecting them & trading us, you’d have no idea who you would end up with & you would have no choice either, sounds great, someone should write a story about that lol While I’ve been busy I’ve had a bit of time to think about my story and where it might lead, I’ve got a few ideas that I might implement into the plot and see where it goes, but your right about needing more toys, I’m sure the women that are involved in this little secret want more play time, there seems to be a couple of naughty ladies missing out, so i’ll see what I can come up with in the next chapter, I know where I want to go with this story now, I just have to get there, so stay tuned, keep enjoying & i’ll keep writing. Thank again as always, I love your feedback & your enthusiasm in my writing, enjoy

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2019 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 34

I think our interests are very similar so you could easily figure out how to make me happy without changing much of what you want to write. Last thing I want to do is basically write a story for me that you are not even into. Usually, I write until I myself as turned on, and then I add stuff that others may like. It’s much easier when they like what you like which is probably how they wanted to review you story.

And that’s kinda how I feel. I agree that a woman holding another tiny guy captive is pretty hot. For me, it doesn’t matter who the guy is unless he is not biologically related. If he is, then I get turned off, but all the other guys I could picture had some intimate romance with a giantess.

The twist of having the tiny be related to another woman that is also related to the giantess is kinda hot, and it’s really entertaining. There is the milf neighbor who uses the boy while talking to his mother. There’s the teacher using a student while talking to his parents at a parent/teacher conference. A police woman punishing a criminal inside her while talking to the criminal’s lawyer. A nurse using a guy who is dating a doctor. A yoga instructor using a teenage boy while she teachers his mother some yoga. The hot mom of your best friend using you while she tells her son that his friend is “safe”.

Another aspect of giantess stories I don’t see often, but I love reading about are milfs. I see a fair share of mom stories, but sometimes it’s the actual mom, and step mom doesn’t really cut it for me. It helps, but still feels too close. So all these situations where it’s a slightly mature, but sexy experienced woman takes advantage of a young teen, I get really excited. Kinda why I love the Jess/Chad relationship.

You are right. There’s barely any bbw stories about anywhere and not just on this site. I just think it’s not that common as a fantasy that people are into. For me, I get turned on by the typical model, a little skinny, a little fit, sometimes I like the extra curves in the hips. But you probably knew that. What you probably didn’t know is that I’m not the biggest boobs fan despite my love for that female body that the general public seems to adore. While I do think a flat chest is unnactractive, I find a woman with enormous boobs also unappealing. Usually small to medium is what I’m into, but for giantess stories, I kind of treat it like the butt. It’s sexy, but not as sexy as the vagina.

Hmm. I never done this before, but if I had to rate body parts from 10 being super hot to 1 being not hot, I would have the vagina at 10. Then the butt at 8.5 and the boobs and 8. The mouth is a 6 and feet are a 3. A body part that is a 1 would probably be the shoulder. Hair, waist, hands, knees, etc are around 2.

You could probably guess, but the panties are my favorite piece of clothing for a woman to wear. I don’t really care if it’s a thong, g-string or any other name in it, but if the tiny could fit in the front, it works for me. So I loved how Jess just dropped Chad down her panties again. Amazing!

I’m going to write another review for this chapter since it’s like 3 am for me and I don’t think I can write much more without falling asleep. It was a really hot chapter and I will describe my thoughts soon.

Author's Response: I have to apologise for my lack of response, I did actually write a response last night, but in my sleep deprived state I must have deleted it instead of submitting it, i’ll get to writing another response soon.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2019 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 33

Wow! That was sexy!

My 2 favorite giantesses having their way with their men. Funny thing is that both giantesses have 1 tiny guy inside them while they interact with a larger man on the outside.

The teasing in the beginning with Jess and Sam was getting a little redundant when they flirt about how they want their cock in her and how they want to fuck and so on. Or maybe I just thought there was too much of it. Just a tad bit. Sam keeps saying he wants to put his cock in her and Jess keeps saying she wants his cock inside her again and again.

However, I did like how Jess put Sam’s ring on her pussy lips and take a pic of it. It basically shows how Jess has their whole family at her mercy, especially since Chad is still inside her. I gotta say, love that moment where you mentioned that Chad’s head was almost out, just enough to tease him, but then keeps him inside her. Also, the details of him struggling inside her is just fabulous. Jess should charge rent, but I guess she is by having Chad pleasure her in payment.

Then we have Mandy, who quickly became sad about Steve, but then quickly decided to drink wine and get horny again much to Steve’s dismay and our delight. The fact that Mandy is drunk actually plays out perfectly since she may forget that Steve is inside her even when she wakes up.

Probably the one time that I think Mandy’s ass seems like the better hole to put Steve in. Mandy is becoming the naughty girl and she wants to be more kinky. I like it. Even love her dialogue when she says “naughty boy” when Steve enters her anus. Haha! I can only imagine how Steve is reacting being shoved up his giantess wife’s ass and being left in there.

Then we got back to Jess and Sam and wow, I love how Jess had to work for this one. Sam wasn’t as easy to seduce as the young Chad. She had to make a deal and even suck his dick to tease him first. For Chad, she basically forced him to worship her from the beginning.

Sam played it perfectly. Enticed by Jess and her seductive tactics, but ultimately remembering his family. However, once he realized that things were going to far, he was tied up and sat and forced to eat her out. That’s my sexiest position to be in with a girl. Tied to a bed and a girl begins facesitting me forcing me to lick her pussy. I would have loved to be in Sam’s position at that moment.

Lastly, Jess goes into the 69 position and reveals that she has the ring deep within her large ass. Sam is disgusted at first, but can’t stop himself from cumming inside her, both onto Chad in her pussy and also on his ring in her ass. Then finally, Jess falls off to the side and goes to sleep with Sam tied up next to her. I would love to see Jess wake up and ride his face again. What a way to wake up!

I’m also guessing that Sam will be shrunk next chapter. Hmm. Will Sam be in her ass while Chad is in her pussy? That’s kinda hot. Imagine Jess talking to Sam’s wife while they are both inside her.

As for Mandy, I’m not sure how she will get Steve out without realizing that he is there. Maybe she will believe it’s her dildo and remove it casually. Maybe she will feel horny and shove Steve back inside.

Or maybe Mandy is still drunk when she wakes up. Maybe a hangover effect. She takes him out and all she sees is a tiny person, but she can’t really process that it’s a real person or that it’s Steve. She then names this tiny person as Jax and imagines that the tiny guy is now a tiny version of Jax. She talks dirty to it, imagining that Jax is listening, and decides to toy with him. Steve meanwhile is looking right at Mandy as she stares back at him and her words are turning him on. However, she mentions the name Jax and Steve is upset and confused. Mandy says that she wants Jax to fuck her all day but she has to go to work. So she decides to take some tape and with Steve, she tapes him to the pussy side of her panties, exactly in the wet spot that she created early. Steve’s back is against her panties and meanwhile, he is still tied up and gagged from Krystal when she mummified him earlier. Now Mandy is telling the tiny Jax (Steve) that he is going to pleasure her all day long and that there is no escape for her little man. Steve starts squirming as Mandy once again steps into the holes of her panties and Mandy gets excited saying that she wants him to squirm against her all day. She says that her pussy is hungry and just wants a taste and a tiny drop of her juices actually drops right onto Steve’s face. Steve tries to shake it off, and once his vision clears up he sees an up close view of his wife’s pussy ready to swallow him up. Then there was darkness and squish. He feels the wet kiss of her pussy lips lock onto his face. He feels her body heat and her pussy lips hugging and squeezing him. Her panties wrap her toned legs and butt nicely securing itself to Mandy’s shapely hips. Steve struggles in protest and Mandy enjoys it. She reaches her hand down to her panties and presses the back of Steve into her through the panties. Steve hears the tape stretching and one piece snaps. He worries that he might get lost in the deep cavern known as Mandy’s pussy. She moans and finishes dressing up, covering Steve into complete darkness, his other senses heightening. His wife’s aroma surrounds him with every inhale he takes. He can hear every step and moan she makes. He could even taste Mandy’s juices as they cascade down his face. Lastly, all he feels is Mandy. His body trapped against her with no escape. He feels her powerful legs as they move and her pussy tries to suck him inside. But none of these sense were any match to the mental thoughts that were going through Steve’s head. He was tied, gagged, and trapped inside the panties of his own giantess wife and he had no idea when he was going to be free. He felt as if this was some never ending cycle where she gets turned on and uses him over and over again. Maybe she would keep him inside these panties forever. While he is happy to be with his wife again, this is not how he imagined it. He was able to reason with the other giantesses since they were aware of him, but here his own wife believes that he is a simple sex toy that isn’t even alive. She might push him to new limits that no man could ever survive. Steve could only hope that Mandy realizes that it’s him sooner than never or he would be stuck as her sex toy forever.

As you can see, I love fanfiction of this story. I just can’t resist. I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Wow, I love reading your feedback as much as writing my story, you really need to write some more so then I’ve got something to read from another persons perspective on giantess, I know what I like and that’s what I write in my stories, but I haven’t been able to find any good stories to read, I absolutely loved “Tom’s story” by duggernaut, that was amazing and I was saddened when it eventually ended, I have read a few other great stories, but I started my giantess journey with the Valkyrie stories, that’s what got me hooked on this amazing fetish, it would be amazing if it could actually be possible. I’m glad you enjoyed my last chapter, but the next one might jump around the characters a bit and I hope you are able to follow it, I’ll be trying to give you the story from all the characters as the scenes all happen at the same time so then I can bring them all together, if that makes sense, I’m still trying to mix up my words and scenarios to keep it interesting and not the same stuff and as you said redundant, so bare with me I’m still learning and still trying my hardest to make it really good reading, I really appreciate your feedback and it’s your words that make me try harder to please in every next chapter. So again Thank You and I look forward to your next feedback after my next chapter. Enjoy.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2019 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 31

Wow, I think the next chapter might be the best one yet, because this might be one of the best setups I have seen on this site.

Thank you Krystal for being lazy and forgetting about Steve. Hopefully she doesn’t say anything to her mom, Missy, because I like the thought of Steve in the hands of Mandy.

Wow! Mandy is actually thinking about using Steve without knowing it is him. One good thing about Krystal is that she got Mandy in the mood. Mandy is horny and this is new, so I wonder how she is when she is turned on. Mandy has made every girl jealous because she was the one to marry Steve. So Steve might actually be turned on here. I bet he is scared and excited at the same time. I feel the same way thinking about it.

What happens when your giantess wife accidentally mistakes you for a sex toy? Not only that, but you are tied up and gagged with no way to tell her that it’s you. Fate is basically give a reward and punishment at the same time. So Steve is literally at the hands of his own sexy wife. He is very familiar with this pussy for the years that this couple has had sex, but now he is about to experience her pussy from a whole new perspective. This is very erotic and sensual.

I can only imagine Steve’s perspective during this whole situation. He slides out of Krystal and he is struggling to escape while drenched in her juices. Then Krystal leaves and he feels another woman enter the bed. He knows it’s his wife because she told Krystal to leave, but his wife doesn’t know that he is stuck on the bed. Suddenly, he sees her delicate hand reach over and grab him. He believes he is saved, but then she never bothers to look closely at him. Then, she takes him to the bathroom and cleans him up, giving Steve hope that she will eventually notice him. She doesn’t. Instead she takes him back to her room and leaves him on the table next to her bed with a clear view of her while she gets back into bed. Steve is confused and wonders what is going on. He watches Mandy take her phone in one hand and then begins playing with herself with the other. Steve is surprised and is also getting turned on. “Is she watching porn?” Steve thought, a little curious now as he watched his wife. She began typing and he saw her getting replies, the whole time her hand never left her pussy. Whoever she was talking to was turning her on and this made Steve mad. Every woman wants to use him as a sex toy and then his wife seems to have already forgotten him. Steve just wanted to shout and scream, but he was left helpless and forced to watch as his own wife continued to pleasure herself.

Man, I love writing fanfiction. I think Steve’s perspective in addition to Mandy’s might be pretty hot also. I could only wonder what happens next chapter.

Then we have Jess continuing what she does best. Making men serve her. Or I should say man and boy, because Chad is still a boy being taught female anatomy from a very sexy teacher we have as Jess. First he learned about a relationship with Casey, then Jess taught him how to cheat on her, then she taught him how it feels to be shrunk, then used as a sex toy, then all about her vagina and now all the way in her cervix. Chad is living the life.

I love how Casey asked Jess if Chad was still inside Jess and for how long. That’s kinda funny. He has been inside Jess’s pussy for a very long time and I love how she just keeps him inside her.

What I liked about Krystal was how she tied up Steve. I think it would be great if more of these giantess decided to tied up their little shrunken toys. Maybe Jess could squeeze Chad out, then explain how he is going to be stuck in her pussy forever as she is tying him up. Chad squirms and protests, but Jess gags him also. Jess then dangles the helpless Chad over her pussy, already opening itself up sensing that it’s favorite meal is returning. Chad watches in terror as her pussy opens up and he sees the dark hole that he is all too familiar with. Jess releases her grip and Chad slips right in between her pussy lips which close behind him, sealing him inside. Chad struggles even more knowing he can’t use his arms and legs like he used to. He squirms like a worm, giving Jess many delightful sensations. Jess doesn’t think she will ever let him out.

Then there was the scene where Casey and Mandy were texting each other. I’m not sure what I think of it. I think strategically, if Casey and Jess know that Mandy likes Jax, then they won’t think that Mandy has Steve. I kind of like that Steve is now Mandy’s little secret. If Mandy plays it off that she likes Jax, then no one will suspect her of having Steve.

I do like how Casey is posing as Jax. Girls know what girls like to hear so it must feel good for Casey to know how easy it is to manipulate her. I wonder if Casey is going to take a pic of Jax licking her out and send it. That would anger Mandy, but maybe it might turn on Mandy seeing a man licking a woman like that. After all, Jax has a fiancé, so maybe Mandy might get turned on to see Jax with another woman which she can easily put herself in Casey’s perspective. Mandy doesn’t seem to be so innocent after all, lusting after a man with a fiancé. Who knows, maybe Mandy has a kinky side?

After reading this chapter, I can’t tell which tiny is having the better time. Chad, being a 24/7 pussy prisoner for Jess, or Steve who has been in every woman’s pussy including the bad ones like Krystal, but now has a chance with his own wife. Hard to choose.

However, I will say that the Mandy/Steve dynamic might the most exciting thing now compared to the Jess/Chad group. Mostly because that Steve is immobile and gagged and his wife is about to use him as a sex toy without her knowing. That might be one of the sexiest situations I can think of. Man, imagine if Mandy leaves Steve stuck inside her while he is all tied up. The she goes to work and goes to sleep with him still inside. It might be overkill to have 2 giantess’s keep their toys inside their pussies but that’s what I like. Now I think Jess needs to spice it up with Sam getting involved or possibly getting Chad all tied up.

Things are looking great, and I absolutely love this chapter! I can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Wow that would have to be the best review I’ve ever received, Thank You So Much for liking my story, I’ve listened to your feedback and I’m trying to see what I can fit into my story without getting to far from my own personal preferences, I only started writing because there were no new stories that appealed to me, so instead of waiting for that off chance that maybe someone would write a story I liked, I decided I’d start to write my own stories with the content that I enjoy, I can’t match the length of your review but I hope you keep enjoying what I write, your feedback has given me a few ideas when my mind has gone blank, I try to keep it interesting by using different words to describe objects and scenarios, so I hope that is showing through, I know my grammar is still not the best, but I’m trying my hardest to make my stories easier to read so they become more enjoyable to all my readers, I hope I can keep this story going and keep the interest of my readers at the same time, so let’s see how the next chapter goes, thanks again for reading and thank you so much for your reviews and input, like I said I enjoy reading your reviews and I like to know how I’m doing. One other thing, have you read my story ‘Travelling Home’ if so what are your thoughts, it was a quick little story that I had in my head and had to write before I forgot it, let me know what your thoughts are on it. Once again Thank You

Reviewer: Lolpi Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2019 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hey! I’ve been reading your stories since the very first few uploads of “A Jealous Friend” I decided to comment now since you’ve requested for more readers to leave reviews. I love these stories you are, by far, my favorite author on this site. With the last few chapters you’ve done an amazing job keeping the story interesting and engaging which many stories on this site fall off after the first few chapters. Like TomSleedy, my only gripe recently is that Steve is no longer with Missy and instead with her daughter. Would love another chapter where he is returned to her and put through more torture from her. Also cannot wait to see what happens between Chad’s dad and Jess.

Also as a final request I hope you can get these stories out faster again similar to the rate you were at last year with multiple chapters on multiple stories almost everyday. I understand if that isn’t a possibility though.

I look forward to leaving more reviews soon!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, it’s great to hear from readers that enjoy my stories, Steve will continue his journeys, he doesn’t seem to be a one girl man, and I’m in the middle of setting up Jess & Chad’s Dad as we speak, I have to apologise for the slow response of chapters, but I’m getting them up as quick as I can, unlike my other stories I had quite a few chapters written before I posted them, so I could stay in front of the stories & post chapters quicker, but I took a bit of time off and fell behind in my writing, so like I said I’m getting each chapter up as soon as I finish it, but I’m glad your enjoying my story and it’s good to hear you’ve enjoyed my other stories, Thank You So Much for the response, it means a lot.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2019 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 28

First off, we need some spacing between those paragraphs. I mean, when I’m reading about Jess and Chad, it suddenly turns into Casey and Jax as if I missed something. But it seemed like a new paragraph which didn’t have a spade in between which confused me.

As far as the content goes, I love it! I love Jess playing with Chad again. I especially love that she stuck him in her push this time. She deserves the pleasure for all this teasing. Casey was great too, but Jess was the star.

Lol, Chad’s Dad is Missy’s ex? What a plot twist! I also am glad that Steve will be out of Missy’s hands. I prefer him with Jess or even better, his wife! If Jess is going to get Steve back, then maybe she can prank Mandy by giving Steve as a doll or something. Except he looks like a tiny sex doll. Mandy feeling horny without Steve will consider using the toy which happens to be Steve and that would be fun to watch.

So Missy gets Chad’s dad, Jess wants to trade for Steve, but I hope she doesn’t give up Chad. I always liked the Chad/Jess combo.

I love the abundance of slaves and can’t wait to see which giantess gets which guy.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, I enjoy reading your feedback as much as I do writing my story, i’m glad your still enjoying it, would be great to hear from other readers, but I look forward to your feedback, I’m sorry about the spacing & paragraphs, I haven’t been writing long and I’m still learning, so your feedback helps a lot. Thanks for reading & I hope you keep enjoying my story.