Date: June 18 2018 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session
I believe I have sent you an e-mail (to the one listed on your profile here). I should send a second one now that I can give you the link that you wanted. Probably shoiuld have thought that through better.
Author's Response: Got them, thanks!
Date: June 16 2018 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session
I think I may have been subconsciously ridiculing Katie because of the moronic decision that she made – despite the fact she is a fictional character. I just think that she is stupid for paying Sara. Yes, it’s fictional, and I would that if such a scenario was happening in the real world I’d hope somebody would give the likes of Sara a stern talking to for taking advantage of such a vulnerable person. Of course, me scorning somebody in Katie’s situation doesn’t help the situation at all and deep down it saddens me that Katie feels this way about herself.
I haven't been doing much reading on the website at all this year. As a result, my ranking in the ‘top ten most prolific reviewers’ has slipped. I do hope to read more though and catch up on some stories I may have missed. I have not clicked on any of your other stories I am sorry to inform. Ten to fifteen pages in a day is very commendable, especially given that your writing is at a higher level than many on this website.
As you have provided it on your profile page, I'll likely e-mail you with some further thoughts or ideas. Additionally, should you wish to join, I can send you a link through e-mail to the giantess story authors' Discord server which I made (many well-known authors are already on it).
Author's Response: Yes, I’d be interested. Thanks again for the reviews, thoughts, and interactions.
Date: June 15 2018 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Cumming to Katie
I’ve been keeping ‘an eye on’ on this story a while. I haven’t read all of the chapters though I must admit. The (I assume) B.D.S.M. is not something I necessarily enjoy, and I have mixed feelings regarding people who pay others to abuse them – after all what they chose to do with their lives is none of my concern (unless it directly impacts my own life of course). I think I came back to this story because there is a distinct lack of grammatically sound stories recently and your style of writing is one that I enjoy.
If somebody inflicts self harm upon themselves it is suggested that they get counselling, or see psychicist. However, if they get somebody else to inflict the pain upon them instead, it is viewed as a “fetish” - and the person isn’t automatically viewed as somebody who needs help. I really believe that Katie’s money and time would be better spent on either seeing therapist or getting a personal trainer (preferably both if she can afford both) and perhaps she could join some sort of club/group related to things that she enjoys too.
The sessions that Katie has with Sara seem to me to be counterproductive as only appear to reinforce the negative thoughts that she is having problems with. She doesn’t “deserve” to be abused as she’s done nothing wrong. Obesity is not a crime, and she should ideally be working on her poor social skills and pessimistic outlook.
It’s as if she doesn’t really want to do anything about her sitation at the same time as wanting to do something about it. She’s clearly depressed but her solutuion is to pay somebody reinforce her negative emotions? It’s confusing to me.
But that rant aside, I think you’ve made a decent effort of blending the macrophile fetish with this other fetish. Macrophila has a broad spectrum sub-gernes and they co-exist nicely on websites such as Giantess World.
The accounts you’ve written seem very vivid, as though you’ve had lived experience of such things. I could sense the passion in your writing. We need more passionate writers on this website!
I hope my analysis hasn’t put you off in anyway. If you wanted, I’d be happy to do some kind of art trade as I could create some visual aids – one or more renders of Sara perhaps. Despite my lack of interest in this whole “mistress” thing I found Sara to be an intriguing character, exciting even. If people wanted to pay me to inflict pain upon then I’d give it some serious thought (despite my ethical objections) as there are days when I get so annoyed with humanity that I wish I had a proper outlet for all of my anger and it would be like a stress toy for when I’m listening to all of the crap in the day’s news. Plus, it also sounds like easy money and a really easy job. Of course, I’d never wish harm on a “good person”.
In summary: a decently well written story, good pacing and talk to me regarding potential art trade if you like. Brevity is not something I’m good at. Apologies for the long review!
Author's Response: I appreciate the honesty. Keep in mind that this is fantasy fetish fiction. You’re absolutely right about a real-world scenario for Katie regarding the need personal psychiatric evaluation. Good writing takes time and passion. It seems to come pretty naturally at times. I can pop out 10-15 pages in an afternoon if I’m really in the zone. Though this specific aspect of my writing (bdsm) may not be your forte, I hope you are enjoying the renewed Phoebe series. I have other thoughts in my head for storylines but they’re still in development. You’re welcome to message me through the account section if you have additional thoughts. Always welcome to dialogue.
[Report This]Date: June 12 2018 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session
Been a while since I’ve read something I really enjoyed. Thanks for your contribution and I look forward to future chapters!
[Report This]Date: June 12 2018 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Shelby's Second Session
Great to see Ms. Sara back
Author's Response: Having 2 series going allows for me to take a break when I get burned out with one. I might work on some other material too. Hope you enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: May 26 2018 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session
Bravo
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: May 23 2018 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Cameron's Escape
keep it going! this is heating up to be a great story
Author's Response: Thanks! I’m working on a couple of ideas for this as well as Phoebe Under Foot
Date: May 19 2018 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session
Wow! I’m genuinely impressed by the quality of this story :) Can’t wait to see more.
And maybe... someone taking off the collar... ;)
Author's Response: Hmmm...I might need to alter Andrea’s experience in chapter 2. Good idea!
[Report This]Date: May 16 2018 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Agony of Da Feet
I agree with AdamX, big jock goddesses rule!
I absolutely love the whole idea of giantess softball players. I would love to see one of her sessions with a person who paid to smell her sweaty feet, socks and cleats after her game as punishment. This story has a lot of potential and I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: May 15 2018 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session
great updates so far.after reading puf1 and puf2 i personally think you should write more about phoebe and her mother.also to introduce her grandma too.you are very very very talented and i cant wait to read more and the family foot slave when you upload it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I suspect I’ll revisit the PUF universe again soon.
Date: May 15 2018 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Agony of Da Feet
Wow! I'm happy to see you used my idea. I love where you ended up taking the scenario. I'm so surprised at how fast you wrote the chapter. Can't wait to see what's next!
Author's Response:
To be honest, it was such a great idea I was very excited to pop it out. It's half as long as ch 1, but it's hard to make hours trapped in a softball cleat interesting beyond a handful of times of passing out.
Date: May 15 2018 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session
Wow absolutely excellent writing here! The descriptions, the dialogue, the glow, everything is just top notch.
Question, would you be open to accepting commissions set in this universe/series? Because if so idI be extremely interested to talk to you about one
Author's Response: I’d be open to it; email me at charlesfinley4273@gmail.com
[Report This]Date: May 14 2018 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Agony of Da Feet
Sara sounds amazing, big jock Goddesses are the best.
Author's Response:
She's a heckuva softball player, too. I chose wisely.
Date: May 13 2018 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session
This is a name I have my seen in a while. Glad to see you are back and happy to see you will be reloading your previous stories!
Really like the concept and look forward to the upcoming chapters. An idea for an upcoming chapter could be she gets a first time client who decides they don't want a safe word. They either vastly underestimate how much the pressure/smell/tastes/heat/etc can get or they just wanted a feeling of completr helplessness. It then turns out they do not like it at all, but now must suffer through the (multi-hour?) session. Sara can either leave the mic on to hear their suffering or has it off and is oblivious to their plight. Anyways, just an idea! Cant wait to see where you take this story.
Author's Response: Love this idea!!!!
Date: May 11 2018 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session
hey please answer...i found out that you have amazing stories but they are not here.why?and i would really love to see the story my family's footslave(i cant find it anywhere it is your old story so i thought you post it)and any other stories about giantess mother that are old and write the new ones.please sorry for bad english.
Author's Response:
Hello,
At this time, my copies of Family Foot Slave are on an HDD that is currently packed up, but I hope to get to within a few months. I'm in the prcess of reposting Phoebe Underfoot and its sequel. Hope you enjoyed this, and PUF/PUF2 when I get them reposted.
Dil
[Report This]Date: May 11 2018 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session
This story is outstanding much like your others!
Random question but any chance of you reposting your older stories? Sorry if I'm overstepping by asking but they were incredible!
Author's Response:
I found PUF & PUF2 on pastebin, and am in the process of removing the HTML code that is still there. Additionally, I'm going to expand upon some of the later chapters of the first PUF. Other stories of mine are sitting on an old hard drive that I hope to resurrect in the future, but my focus is on restoring the PUF series along with this new story.
Date: May 11 2018 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session
"exclaimed Shelby as the insole lessened" :D
Seriously now, before saying anything about the story it's great to have you back, when you deleted your old stories I didn't think we'd hear from you ever again
Author's Response:
Thanks, there was a "GAASP" missing there.
Yeh, I have no easy way to explain what happened, but I think I tried to deny that this is part of who I am, and well, yeh, I'm tired of doing that. So, here we go again. And other than my Phoebe Under Foot series, I feel that a lot of my stuff was junk compared to that series. I feel I set a very high bar of what my mind can create. It's a scary place :)
[Report This]Date: May 10 2018 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session
A very cool concept, I'd love to see more.
Author's Response:
Any ideas or suggestions as to what you'd like to see?
[Report This]Date: May 10 2018 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session
Fantastic story! I'm really excited to see such a nice story that combines d/s and GTS so well! Also, could you please add some about treating sub like object(toe ring, insole) or sharing sub with other dom? Thanks!
Author's Response: I think we can make that happen
[Report This]Date: May 10 2018 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session
I absolutely love scenarios like this one, with someone paying to be shrunk down and dominated, and you've absolutely aced it so far. Every single part of this was amazing. As far as things to be seen in future chapters, I'm a huge fan of insertion, especially anal insertion, so seeing some of that would be absolutely perfect.
Author's Response: Ill look to work it, and Shelby or some other sub, in :)