Quite a fan of your work! We chatted at length on a Discord server, but I'm sad to see you deleted your account! Good to see you're still writing, though! 

Great to see this back!

Sheldy conceedes that she's pathetic? I guess that's true. She enjoys putting herself in harm's way!

I suppose on some level I must enjoy seeing certain humans being tortured. I have written about gore and torture in somewhat graphic detail before, when the scene permitted. Though you'd never catch me dominating anyone, for three reasons:

1. I've always hated "authority" figures and I think it'd make me hypocrite.

2. I'm too nice to the people I meet.

3. If it was somebody I truly cared about I'd hate the thought of harming them.

Overall I enjoyed this chapter. It was nice see other characters – i.e. be outside Sara’s house. Ever since reading Crushing Cameron and the party I've been curious to explore more of those other party attendees.

I am thankful for writing in Kristine here (I assume the same one from your other story). Though all of the party goers were all quite enjoyable to read about. I did, of course, get the impression that you had a certain fondness for Samantha from our conversations. I hope we get to see more of Kristine in the future and that will help keep things fresh as she would have her own way of doing things. Not that Sara isn’t a well thought out character.

6.4ft seems a bit too tall for me but whatever. Sorry for not reviewing sooner. I got caught up with things. I'm seriously thinking I need to 'tie up any loose ends' and start writing again but I still don’t know if I want to. There’s some excellent inspiration on this website and I’ve recently helping out another author with designs for their characters.

Excellent stuff!

I'm been hoping to see this section for bit now.

I'd also like to if you based Sara on anyone. Assuming you did. I am curious.

I think the whole premise is very interesting, exciting and unique, and I can definitely imagine people who would be into this stuff if it were possible. If it were up to me, the only thing I'd want to change is getting to keep my clothes while I shrink and she's having her way with me under her sexy sandals and feet. Other than dropping my pants for a midget footjob and little things like that, I just wouldn't be able to enjoy the experience if I were naked and shoeless, because I'd feel like my exposed body defiles her natural beauty.

But whether her victims are naked or clothed, I think Sara would be the perfect kind of dominatrix to shrink a couple of big, tough, wealthy macho guys who challenge each other to a dare and have no idea what they're getting into, without a safe word. I picture them having their way with her feet and sucking her toes while she shrinks them little by little, but as she starts to gain the advantage on them, they start to freak out and demand to cancel, but it's too late and she simply jerks them off with her feet as they dwindle, just to "prove" they really like it deep inside even if they don't!

Then she'd head out in flip flops to get an expensive artsy pedicure while continuing to shrink her little victims bit by bit under her lovely feet and toes, show her slaves off to the other ladies, torture and humiliate the crap out of them. By the end, she'd have a female slave shrink down with the men in her palm just to make them even smaller than the usual limit, bugs to a bug lost on Sara's sole, making them watch this slave grow back to giga size while she worships Sara's feet. From the very beginning, once Sara has the men small enough to control with or without the remote, she would be telling them everything she's going to do with them throughout the day, just so they can struggle and fail to prevent it!

Definitely I think Sara needs to have a male slave do a session without safe words, regardless of how you prefer it to play out!

I don't know what "fet-life" is. I think I've heard it mentioned before somewhere but I've never gone onto that website. I was lucky enough to be introduced to this person (Goddess) on Deviantart, and – because I enjoy Her company – I make Her a lot of renders. I wouldn't necessarily refer to it as "D/S" - it's merely somebody who I enjoy talking to and we never really role play because...well...I don't know. I know She likes to role play but I've never had the urge to do so myself. I like that we’re good friends, that the friendship does not revolve solely around sexual things, and that I have enough charisma in order not to need to pay somebody to pay attention me. *cough* Katie. *cough*

I value your writing, which is perhaps why I became emotionally invested in it to an extent. The story has grown on me and definitely admire it for being a well written piece of literature. I think you're right to say that this sort of thing would go on. However, I'm of the impression that there'd be lots of legislation in place if shrinking was possible in order to attempt to prevent abuses of the technology.

If even the common person (such as a Sara) can have access to the technology, then what's stopping a jealous ex-partner, for example, from doing all kinds of crazy things with such a collar. Maybe you'd need a license to use it and Sara happens to be one of the lucky few (or those who can afford it)? If the technology is freely available then, sure, any old revenge plot could work, and it’d be fun to see Andrea break Sara (or at least try to?).

The thing with most authoritarians though, is that they are usually secretly weak and it’s all projection (videos of Nazis crying always amuse me). For example, you can watch a video of Donald Trump where he clings desperately to the secret service personnel when a protestor once managed to get on the stage at a political rally instead of acting like a “tough cookie” (sorry for the politics) and he also avoided serving in the Vietnam War because he lied and claimed he was too unfit to serve (and yet he insulted John McCain for being captured in Vietnam). It would certainly be exciting to see the tables turned but maybe you’d have Sara have the last laugh? Making it non-cannon would make more sense I’d imagine.

Source:

https://youtu.be/5Xu5lz4fS-Y

Maybe a more believable plot is another “dominant” person is jealous of Sara for some reason. Perhaps there is an intense rivalry, maybe something like “you stole my slave”. But perhaps Andrea is one of those people: you know, those people in out community that claim to worship giantesses and yet are happy to insult them when they don’t get exactly what they want? Andrea doesn’t automatically strike me as the revenge type but maybe she is two-faced after all, and she has a sort of job which could make her the pretentious type.

Yes, there is definitely "extreme" content out there. The voice actors for a main character in one of the shows that I love was found to be in a BDSM cult that had resulted in the death(s) of people in Japan. Upon discovering this, they re-wrote the entire plot going forward and the show was denied an arguably better plot (which ironically did involve cults) as wanted to (presumably) distance themselves from this individual.

In regards to this comment:

"I was hoping you could add another chapter like the one with Andrea in which the victim would be unwilling."

Maybe you could write some fan-fiction of your own story: an alternate dimension version of Sara where she does this, so that you don't contradict yourself. A story where Sara finds a neurotypical human (I mean to say one that may have never even heard of BDSM) and abuses them because she’s just sadistic like that. Perhaps there are consequences for her in that case because it was not consensual. It’s a thought. Another thing that might be fun to explore is: an unexpected role reversal where Sara is – against her will – shrunk and she has to experience "the other side".

On a related note, an idea for a similar sort of story might be a world in which it is the submissives that receive payment instead of the dominants. One where there are two races of “humans” one little and one large (or one is alien and the other human) and the only way for a person to live out their (macrophile) domination fantasies is to pay a little person to come ‘out of the woodwork’ so to speak and ultimately earn their trust, because there aren’t enough willing tinies to satisfy the demand from people who would wish to dominate them as many are too afraid.

Now, onto the crux of my review.

I think I've finally figured out what weirded me out about your story: it's the fact that the victims are willing rather than unwilling. I can't fathom why somebody would willingly subject themselves to such painful experiences, never mind pay somebody to inflict pain upon them (the CIA – and even certain police forces I’m sad to say – could torture you for free if you really wanted). Ergo, I find this BDSM stuff strange to say the least. But, admittedly. it has been fun to read about truly pathetic people being used/abused in such a way (you have a compelling cast of characters and the fact that they are fictional lessens the guilt). In reality. I would never which this kind of torture on people; golden rule and all that. However, I would be lying if I didn’t at least find it a little bit amusing to see my worst enemy tortured by somebody like a Sara.

With macrophillia it's all about fantasy (since size change can’t be real) and I know that many prefer to keep it personal and private and extending fetish to the real world, like BDSM does, is a step to0 far for them. Given the choice, I'd despise being small in a huge world as it presents many dangers. Maybe if somebody paid me a million US$ or more I’d do it. Since it’s all fictional here I feel less guilty about consuming and creating the content.

Having discussed this with a giantess-sized friend who use to be in Sara's kind of position, I will concede that the situation regarding Sara is perhaps more complex than it first appears, even if I find it hard to believe the dynamic is based on "love" rather simply one person offering a service that others desire. Admittedly, there is a level of trust involved. Don’t get the wrong idea though, I tend to switch between liking gentle and more violent content so, sure, I like indulge bit of gore as much as anybody else on this website.

My feeling is that Sara needs to earn a living after all so if a client keeps on paying then the relationship and sexual gratification continues because if they can’t pay then Sara will chose to spend time with those who can. Or am I mistaken? I don't want to compare it to prostitution, and yet I find myself doing just that even if it may be an unfair comparison. One line that struck me was this one:

“Most slaves seemed to focus on what they can get out of an experience with Mistress Sara.”

This is a problem that exists in the macrophile community: people talk about how this fetish involves domination, mostly female domination, and yet…people think that it is okay to abuse their role play partner and bad mouth them despite claiming to be for female empowerment. The amount of people on Giantess City stuck in the 1950s is shocking to me. So many users have no manners whatsoever.

I have a friend who happens to be a Goddess and She doesn’t like to admit that She’s important, so I do like to put Her on a pedestal. I never want it be just about me. We have this great friendship which I am exceedingly grateful for and the way other people in our community have treated Her is disgusting and sadly not surprising. They care about getting an orgasm more than truly getting to understand a person.

Wow, that was a long review! Over eight-hundred words!

I love this story, I'm not sure if its something you can do but I would love it if she could dominate a Rich teenager by putting her inside her nylons and wearing knee high boots, I would also love it if the collar broke 

This story is amazing. Every chapter is better than the last. Would love to see a scene where Sara and all her teammates are sitting around after their games, their tiny slaves hard at work serving their feet. I can't wait to see what Sara and Garth have in store for their tinies either. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: There will definitely be some giant male domination so everyone hold on.