HOLY HELL, WHAT A HOT FUCKNG STORY!! I hope you write a sequel someday! :D

Very interesting chapter... And Kate is offically the cock-blocker of the year lmao

Sounds like things are about to get pretty interesting... ;)

OMG

Holy shit! Well this just got interesting... O.O

i love this kind of storys if you are to make a new one please have incest in it. i dont really vore (when the main character gets eaten) but i dont mind vore if the main character dosent get eaten but a side-character gets eaten but anyways i love this story its very sexy

Awsome work so far!

Nooo! I thought this story was just getting started and it was going to take at least 50 chapters or soemthing!

I should have known. The best writers tend to either never update their stories, or they finish way too fast. And wow, this story went by fast.

As far as Gloria's reaction, it was unexpected. I was hoping for a little bit of a shock, and maybe she decides to hide him and be sneaky. She seems like a different person and it doesn't feel the same.

Tatiana's plot was just a side plot to the story and nothing real happened between her and John. Kinda dissapointing to see Tatiana get involved becuase I wanted the focus on Gloria and I felt that Tatitiana was stealing the spotlight this chapter.

The whole spiritual thing at the end feels like it's part of some other story. There was never any hint that this whole story was just to get John to be stuck with these women. Part of me just wanted John to be stuck like this because the women wanted him to there, and not because they are obeying some command of some spiritual being.

The one sexy moment of this chapter was when Gloria proudly stated that John was going to be here and to serve her and give her pleasure. That line was amazing. Even Gloria talking about having some sexy fun is amazing.

The whole "choose" concept is kinda weird. Sure, I guess if I was in his position, a choice is good, but I think it's sexier if he was forced to please them and not hade a choice. Also, I'm not choosing Kate, Emma, or even Tatiana. If I get to choose, I'm choosing Gloria and Gloria exclusively.

If the story was just going to be 10-11 chapters, the first 4-5 should have been about John about to choose and the rest just be about Gloria having her way with John. Well, I guess that's how I would have done it. Seems like John will choose next chapter and then he only gets a small time with Gloria.

Please tell me there is a part 2 or something similar. You have set up a nice little story here and the fun looks like it's just getting started. I mean, so far it seems that Kate and Emma had the most time with John, which is alright I guess, but it seems that only 1 chapter was dedicated to Gloria and I would have loved to see more of her.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Your investment in the story means a lot, but pacing this particular one was difficult since I was just going by ear. I definitely plan to continue things, maybe this story, maybe not, this was just more of a test. The next story I write will definitely be more fleshed out, but I wanted to experiment with different characters and settings to see what I enjoyed writing most. I won't say this is the end of this story forever, but yeah updates will definitely be much for infrequent at best. 

Very good story! Thank you for writing it!

Seems like John is a really smooth talker, he'll get there eventually.

Also, it seems Gloria is somewhat blind, never noticeing the tiny John ;)

Just read all 5 chapter and it was a wild ride!

I was a little hesitant about reading this story at first because I thought it was going to be just about the daughters and lots of incest stuff. However, you surprised me, because you made these relatives so far apart, that it kind of feels like strangers, so it works out for me. Also, the best part of this story was the inclusion of Gloria which you didn't mention much in your story summary.

First off, welcome to giantess world. You definately belong here with your talented writing. Even the stuff that I'm not into is interesting because of how well you write. The flow is smooth and you have the characters involved with many tasks so the story doesn't get boring. You include many twists such as yoga, the missing husband, the other shrunken boy, the dreams, so it's all very creative.

Let's talk Gloria. What a milf! Your description of her in the first chapter made me excited. Late 30s, fit, light brown hair and blue eyes. Beautiful. She even sounds like a mom in the story which is great. I didn't want her to feel like a girly tennager so I'm glad you had the right dialogue for her. John even had a dream about her while he was under her during the yoga session. That was hot and I love his imagination about getting trapped within the bra cup and also in her pussy.

One thing im not too sure of is the two daughters. I believe they are too smart for their age. In the first chapter, I see the familiar young girl behavior where they assault John with questions about boys and such. Then they turn into girls with the minds of late teen girls already talking about boys as if they have dated plenty of times and act as if they are professionals. Not just Kate, but also Emma. You mention that Kate has physical differences with her curves, but mentally, both girls seem very similar with attitudes of 20 year olds in the later chapters. In addition to their age, I'm hoping nothing too sexual happens with them since they are very young. I like how instead you have them making schemes and planning how they can tease John. I enjoyed the part where Kate asked John if he liked being trapped under her mom's body. Makes me wonder what other ideas she has.

Questions: Does Gloria know that Kate can shrink people? Is Gloria aware of John being tiny? (I would love to see her be aware of him soon.) Can Gloria shrink people or is it just Kate? How small is John when he is shrunk? (I'm hoping around 3 inches). Or could Kate change John's size from 1 inch to 3 inches, to 6 inches, etc?

Ideas: this story has a great setup which leads to many possibilities that could happen. I would love the focus to be on Gloria, the hot mom since she is the goddess of this story. I'm not that fond of Kate or Emma, so most of these ideas will be about Gloria.

I liked the reviewer "chase"'s idea about Gloria's husband being gone so Gloria might have this longing for some sexual pleasure. While this may be easier with Gloria being aware of him, there are still many fun things to do while she is unaware. Kate could drop John on the driver seat of Gloria's car so she will sit on him. Perhaps, Gloria has her own favorite sex toy and Kate puts John inside it. Maybe the sex doll is a Ken doll, but Gloria likes to wrap it up like a mummy and imagine it as her husband. Now imagine Kate wrapping John up like a mummy and replacing him with the Ken doll in Gloria's fun drawer so Gloria has fun with John, but its still unaware.

Now if that's too much of a stretch, we could also have Kate sew, tie or tape John to the front part of the inside of Gloria's favorite panties in her underwear drawer so when Gloria decides to put them on, John gets trapped agasint the crotch of Gloria with his body lined up perfectly with her pussy. Gloria might feel horny while she wears him around as she goes to work, as she works out and also when she sleeps. Maybe this could be when Gloria discovers John being tiny and decides to keep him tiny and tells him how much she loves him stuck in her panties and admits how long it's been since she has been pleasured.

Of course, if Gloria is aware of John, I would love to see her decide to keep John as her personal toy and while John initially thinks it's sexy and alright, he starts wanting to escape and that's where Gloria decides to tie him up to her body and use him as a replacement for her husband. Kate and Emma will be happy to see their mom being happy and decide to let John stay alive as long as he satisfies Gloria. Together, they enjoy their life as a new happy family.

This story is fantastic and I wonder why there aren't that many review yet. Hopefully this review is what you are looking for to inspire and motivate your writing.

Apologies for the big review, but I just so into this story. Hopefully, you have a large response to this review so I won't feel as bad. I would love to see if you agree with some of my ideas.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey thanks so much for the review, I appreciate all of it! It started off with zero direction and I'm not sure how kosher it is to edit the description after already starting the story but I think the focus will be heavily on Gloria coming up. As for the girls, I'm leaning towards their innocent demeanor being more of a facade because, you know, once you start kidnapping and "disposing" of people you probably tend to mature a little faster but I think you're right - it's difficult separating a 9 year old's point of view with a teenager. I agree with most if not all of your ideas, eventually Gloria has to become aware of John right? I'm not sure when that will be yet since I'm not sure how long I want the story to go on for. You may have noted that John has yet to contact his family back home, that's being worked into something.