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Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2018 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: Dream Come True

Great start

Reviewer: Jay-Bug Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2018 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Dream Come True

I'm usually into raw cruelty, but lately I've been all about giant ladies being teases and flirts.  Loving this so far.

Reviewer: etz Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2018 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Dream Come True

Sara has been shrunk before? I kinda want to know what her experience like.

And kinda hope it eventually use to goes, smaller, much, much smaller.

Reviewer: dingbing Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2018 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: Dream Come True

I'm glad to be able to give this story its first review. You're off to a great start here. The length of this first chapter was excellent. A lot of stories start out with an uneventful chapter a few hundred words long and leave off on a cliffhanger before any action really starts. You completely avoided that, and provided us with a meaty opening with great pace and got into the action before the end. I'm looking forward to see more of this one. 

Something I've thought about the shrinking device... I wonder if it actually can shrink people and their clothes simultaneously without any risks, and Sara just made Jacob remove his clothes as another way to tease him or to see if he would actually do it. She seems like she'd do something like that.

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