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Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 10 2022 11:11 AM Title: Constipation Relief

To begin with, many thanks for your review on my creative writing.


Writing about an absorbing interest - such as coprophilia could be challenging.  For that reason, I appreciate your endeavour and courage.  Allow me to highlight that it is worthwhile to create a sensible narrative as a foundation of your works of fiction. 


In my works, I would base my narratives on various episodes of my day-to-day life.  For instance, squat toilets are common in many Asian societies.  Incidentally, my friend, Laura was constipated, which led to the imaginary narrative.  

 https://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10324&chapter=15&textsize=3


Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2018 6:17 PM Title: Constipation Relief

Im so glad to hear that. I will read your stories. Im not using caps because I love being diffrent. I used to care of the reviews. I just backed off and made it for myself and the reviews started rolling in.

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed star [Report This]
Date: April 28 2018 4:08 AM Title: Constipation Relief

You need in a story a conection between the characters. When I started writing I kept with a plot and kept going. It should be about your fetishes. It takes a long time to get fans. They like to see where you are going with your stories.
You shouldn't base it off what poeple want it should be about what you want. Get what im saying?

Author's Response:

Funny you say it that way.  My first story posted here was in responce to a challange posted.  I simply wanted to see if I could write a story along the lines of what the outline was, though not exact.  I also wanted to contribute to this site for all the great stories, such as some of yours I read, enjoyed, and commented on in the past.  When I went to post it on this site it would not allow me {Kept getting the empty grey page of nothingness} so I posted it in this general section.  Since it was a completed story, for purposes of the challenge, it went through the "Most Recent" post system quickly with few readings yet four very good reviews.

That's when I became curious what it takes to get a well received story here.  I really want to contribute back into this community.  That's why I wrote this short story out to see if people really want developement or just straight to the point and, well, raunchy.

You don't have to read my last story.  It flopped, I know already.  But as a thank you to those four reviewers I am writing a story for them, "French Weave", you may find that one more likeable than this one.  Then again maybe not.

Your advice is well taken.  I actually have my own stories, though I need to refine them before posting here.  In the future I shall do as you suggest and just write for myself.  If there are people who like them, that's fine.  If not, also fine.

Again, thank you giantess jessica {Shouldn't those be in caps???}

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2018 8:25 PM Title: Constipation Relief

The diarrhea parts kind of grossed me out.

Author's Response:

FINALLY A RESPONCE!  Thank you giantess jessica for being the first, and only person to repond.  The reason I wrote this story was as an experiment, which I mentioned in the story notes.  This is my second story.  My first story was a flop and I kinda put a bit of effort into it. 

So I wrote this one to try and find out what people really want from their stories here at this site.  Obviously we all want fast paced stories; but I'm guessing people do not want too much character development nor do they want quick and dirty {e.g. this story}.  They also prefer semi-harsh, nothing amazingly brutal nor "gross".  In any future story I write for this site I will just make it simple with limited character development; kinda of a cross between "Dick and Jane" and the Brothers Grimms' Fairy Tales.

Thank you for your responce!

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