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Reviewer: arselover Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2020 6:17 AM Title: Ending B: Found in a Toilet Bowl?

how are you man? any plans on maybe youd write something like this again? I am honestly crossing my fingers youll do again !!

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Date: September 30 2020 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: Nikki

Really hope you will write another plot like this with a dark cruel ending and plot. I am such a fan of nasty vulgaric plots with ass scat and lost isnide an ass, becoming shrunk to mite size or smaller. Hope youre writing soon again your stories are amazing!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Like I said before I will write more stories like that. It may not be the very next thing I do, but it'll happen.

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2020 10:35 PM Title: Ending B: Found in a Toilet Bowl?

pure and pure evil hot and amazing. please more like this!



Author's Response:

Seems like people like the cruelty, I'll keep that in mind.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2020 3:27 PM Title: Ending B: Found in a Toilet Bowl?

NO it was perfect like that, that was totally what I loved the most in this story, how her actions mare it hell worse without knowing it. THAT was the entire thing driving me horny! I liked your other stories already but not to 100% to my likings, this was way more to what I love! A mix of unaware dark humor but also cruel irony and then detailed stuff lile here, with how she peeded and you decribed how it came out of her vagina and the droplets and all... wonderful! I even would love a plot like this again with the micro speck ging through a girl peeing shitting and him be the size of a dirt particle, glued to one of her tiny hairs next to her anus, but shes shaved. I like a shaved butt and vagina more. Please write a plot again like this story, was awesome!



Author's Response:

Okay I understand what you mean, thanks for explaining what you like! There will be more unaware cruel micro misfortunes in the future!

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2020 3:16 AM Title: Ending B: Found in a Toilet Bowl?

Absolutely fantastic chapter. I would had loved it even more if maybe he had sent up again by the splash back of her turd and now he was glued to the side of her anus closing. I just love cruel dark unaware ass plots more than anything if combined with dark irony like here. Would love to see more to come in the future, especially something going horrible wrong is so hot, and how there are kinda "oops" moments and such.



Author's Response:

As a plot device in these types of stories I feel like splash back is used quite often. Is it bad? No, but I wanted to try something else with this story. Glad you liked it anyways, I had a lot of fun with writing the scenarios. Nikki's insignificant actions being much more harmful to Mark than she realized was the sort of "cruel twist" I was going for.

Reviewer: Randomguy47 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2020 8:53 PM Title: Ending C: Avoiding a Worse Fate

Love the updates and stay safe



Author's Response:

Thank you for the concern! You stay safe as well!

Reviewer: Omanahan88 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2020 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: Nikki

Love this franchise! I wasn't expecting this story to be continued but I'm so glad it was!!



Author's Response:

I surprised you! I'm trying to give some closure on some of the old stories I left hanging. This is just the start!

Reviewer: teradonk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2020 5:49 PM Title: Ending B: Found in a Toilet Bowl?

Amazing chapter. hell yes!



Author's Response:

Thank you as always! ^_^

Reviewer: zhangkui Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2020 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: Nikki

great story When is the next update

Author's Response:

Shit, I should really get on that shouldn't I? It might take a while longer, but I will continue this story!

Reviewer: Randomguy47 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2020 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 7: Still Deep Inside

When is the next update?

Reviewer: Themysterious Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 31 2018 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: Nikki

I was on writing.com and always loved your chapters. I knew that whenever you would write a chapter, it was going to be amazing. Now that your on giantessworld, I can read your amazing stories without being charged on writing.com. I hope to be seeing more of your incredible stoires here sir. Thank you very much

Author's Response:

Thank YOU very much! The means a lot! Don't worry, after I finish adding my old stuff I've got more coming!

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