[Report This]Date: April 11 2018 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Exchange
Nice story! Thank you for writing it!
It seems Samantha is really good at crushing tiny's, but not as good as Lucy of course ;)
Wouldn't she soon have crushed the entire school? What will she do then?
Date: April 10 2018 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 5.5 - The New Power Couple
A really nice set up chapter. I can almost see the Spalding tatoo on the next chapter to come {volleyball reference}.
The way Samantha traps her tinies is always so exciting, such as the way she is holding the train with her fingers wrapped around it to prevent anyone from escaping. Samantha literally holds their fates in her hands; what a display of absolute power.
I love how you always throw in a tiny getting squashed or swallowed so nonchalantly by Samantha. It's like an ongoing joke that spices up every chapter.
It was a big sigh of relief that Samantha repreived Bree, and even better that they are hitting it off and share interests. That adds a human side of Samantha that makes her tiny classmates seem farther removed from her world; the difference between people like her, humans, and her schoolmates, bugs.
If I may humbly beg a favor of you Goddess-Lucy, I posted my first story "Rachelle's Sweat Pads" I would be greatly honored if you were to read it. You do not have to, that goes without saying; but I am begging you to please, please, please take some of your precious time to read my story. I would not be offended in the least if you said "NO!" and left it at that Goddess-Lucy.
Thank you calling me "pathetic little insect" in your last reply. Hopefully you feel such is the right circumstance to use "insect" appropriately when refering to me Goddess-Lucy. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: April 09 2018 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 5.5 - The New Power Couple
Pretty good. I'm enjoying this. Bree and Samantha make a deadly pair, I think together there will probably be more killing than if it were just Sam on her own.
Date: April 09 2018 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Crushing Climb
Incredible! I just read your next chapter, "New Power Couple", at Deviant Art as You Commanded Goddess-Lucy. It is a terrific set up for your lunchroom chapter.
I don't want to give away too much here, especially since you were very clear with your command for us to go read your amazing work at D.A. With that in mind I will say no more here at this time regarding the next chapter, though I did leave a comment for you there. I hope it is to your liking.
BTW, you never have to thank me for doing as you cammand Goddess-Lucy. Not simply because you just don't have to; but the truth is it is my honor. Perhaps I should not be saying this, I have an Obediance Fetish, maybe Obediance Cumpulsion is more like it.
If you don't mind me asking, I understand it's just easier to write "bug", but do you ever call tinies "insect"? It's simply a matter of opinion, I know, but "insect" seems more demeaning than "bug", as though you would have less respect for an "inect". Actually, no respect at all for an "insect". Again, it's probably just me and my imagination.
Thank you again for another great chapter Goddess-Lucy.
Oh, I might be posting one of my own stories soon, finally.
Author's Response:
No problem, I'm glad you're enjoying my stories you pathetic little insect <3
I actually do enjoy using insect sometimes, but bug is easier and insect has a feel you just need to get right.
And don't worry about talking about the other chapters here, I just finished chapter 5.5 on the same day as 5 so I wanted to wait before posting it here, so I can stay on top of recent stories for longer ;)
And good luck with your story!
[Report This]Date: April 09 2018 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Exchange
I have created a Deviantart account for the express purpose of commenting on and viewing your glorious works, goddess. Thank you for creating an extra avenue by which we may witness your glorious skills.
This story is continuing to be a wonderful experience. The ease with which she crushed the winner of her competition should be enough to prove to any bug that she is superior to them in every conceivable way.
My humble request is that she could deliberately dirty up her shoes on the way to/from school and make it the job of her classmates (if you can call the bugs that) to clean their undersides with their insignificant little tongues. Maybe she could spit some gum out there and really tread it in to give them a truly insurpassable obstacle and a potentially deadly hazard.
I look forward to any further additions, my goddess.
Author's Response:
She IS superior to all of them~ they should learn to love their queen though.
And I'm glad you went to such lengths for big ol' me~ so sweet.
Hopefully I can give you what you want soon enough in another chapter~
Date: April 08 2018 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Crushing Climb
Another great chapter. I am in a bit of suspence however, what became of the gym teacher trapped between the wall and the heels of her gym shoes?
I agree with the previous comment, the winner getting squashed as Samantha casually walked out is a sexy display of her power. I noticed you did something similar in the last chapter when Samantha licked up a boy and swallowed him without care. It's a behavior of Samantha's that brilaintly highlights her power and tyrany, LOVE IT.
A question, did Samantha crush the eighty students under just one foot or both? I ask because you wrote "Whoever doesn't reach the top is going under them" towards the beginging, then "Samantha's foot landed with a thud...", then "...put her full weight on her feet...". Believe me, it's fantastic either one or both feet; I'm simply trying to imagine what your vision is because so far it's pretty hot.
Two other things. I did as you asked{??? Hmmm, as YOU COMMANDED sounds better, but perhaps that's just me.} and went to Deviant Art and commented on "Homeroom Havoc" that you posted {under HERToering}. I hope that is what you wanted from a bug who wants under your feet ; )
Second, thanks for calling me "little bug" in you responce to my last comment. That was very kind and extremely hot of you. : )
Author's Response:
No problem, bug~. Thanks for another great comment. And for doing as I commanded (you're probably the only one so far to actually listen).
As for your comments. Samantha doesn't really crush teachers, if she did they would have all been stomped on by now, her main prey are all her classmates. Though she did have a little fun trapping the gym teacher between her shoes, he looked just like a cornered ant!
And Samantha is pretty great with her shows of power, she is the Queen of the school after all. Every bit of torture she deals out barely takes any effort.
As for the feet thing, because there were eighty of them climbing that would take up both of her feet, but if I was giving detail I'd primarily focus on one.
Date: April 08 2018 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Crushing Climb
I love that she casually crushed the winner on the way out. There's nothing better than a merciless giantess like that.
Date: April 07 2018 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Warming Up
DAMN!!! What a fantastic story. I have to be quite honest, I don't know what's hotter, your incredible story or you calling us bugs and tinies in your intros. I think it's the later.
Your writing style is very nice. Aside from a few grammatical errors, repeated words, and the paragraph spacing that throw off the easy reading flow of your story, your writing is quite good.
My favorite line, Chapter 3: "it only got worse for them as she pulled her gigantic panties out of a wedgie and covered them with it, sealing them in for good." SO HOT! True I'd rather be IN the wedgie, being stuck in the back of her panties is a close second. By the way, did she take these panties off for gym class?
All I can say is please keep this story going. Or as Samantha's Bree would say "I HAVE A GIANT FETISH AND YOU ARE THE ABSOLUTE BEST I'VE EVER READ!!! P-PLEASE KEEP WRITING GODDESS_LUCY_tinyCrusher!!!"
Author's Response:
Awww, thanks so much little bug~. I honestly love how detailed your comment is, and I'll try to work on those things you mentioned ;)
I'm glad you're loving the story, and lucky for you I was just posting the next chapter. I hope you keep reading, and keep up that lovely praise you're giving me~.
Hope to hear from you again. Thanks! <3
Date: April 01 2018 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Locker Room Doom
Great chapter this story is one of the best i’ve Read in a while
[Report This]Date: March 30 2018 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Exchange
Loving this story. Its like all the nanos exist to just to amuse her. Can't wait to see what she does during P.E., and would love to see more later with her Mary Janes.
[Report This]Date: March 29 2018 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Locker Room Doom
I am really enjoying this story. Expecting poor little nanos to be drowned inside her gym socks and shoes, looks like she is not gonna hold back during this PE lesson and work really hard.
Date: March 29 2018 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Exchange
They are all so lucky to simply exist in the same space as a goddess. To be accidentally stepped on or otherwise interacted with I'd too great an honour for them.
Date: March 27 2018 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Exchange
Hoping for more foot content love the story
[Report This]Date: March 26 2018 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Exchange
Excellent work, goddess. It would be good to see more nanos become entrapped by her, in her socks, to her shoe soles, in her clothes, between her toes... Not that she would or should notice.
Author's Response:
Oh don't worry little Toku, I'll be sure to add plenty of that. Try the second chapter I added last night. I'm so glad you're enjoying it~<3