[Report This]Date: September 28 2024 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is one of my all-time favourites. It pushes all of my buttons.
It could use a grammatical edit. But other than that, it is perfect.
Thank you, Scruba.
Date: May 24 2018 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
i love this story and how Beth gets off having the men in her ass and covered in her shit. it would be so hot if paula got a tiny white man less than one inch and did nasty ass things to him. good story.
Date: May 05 2018 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 32
lo primero de todo,es darte la enhorabuena por este maravilloso relato y decirte que estoy deseando que hace Paula con Matt
[Report This]Date: April 27 2018 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was hard to get through. The story was amazing but it was hard to read because im battling depression.
Not tring to come out rude but depression takes enjoyment out of everything so its harder to enjoy fetishism which sucks because I love being fetish. sigh. I feel trapped.
great job on the story though.
Author's Response: Thank you for the response, I know exactly where your coming from.
I’m glad you thought my story is amazing, I hope you enjoy reading it as I put more chapters up.
[Report This]Date: March 27 2018 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Why did she shrink Steve, not this bitch Kellie? Anyway i like it. Publish chapters more often.
Author's Response: Beth gets more enjoyment out of stealing Steve and using him as her very own fuck toy right under Kellie’s nose then she would punishing Kellie herself, Beth wanted Steve and Kellie stole him from her and now she’s taken back what she deserved. And I’m posting a couple of chapters once a week so I can keep in front with my writing, I don’t get a great deal of time to write and if I post more often then you’ll be waiting even longer for more chapters and this way it just keeps you in suspense, but I’m glad you like it so far being my first ever story, but I will warn you, it gets very nasty in some chapters, I just hope it still appeals to you all, I’m just writing fantasies that I’d like to happen to myself, but Thanks for reading and Thanks for your feedback.
[Report This]Date: March 26 2018 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Always good to see a new author post on this site, welcome! :D
Not many people do a story with a BBW giantess, but you’ve done pretty well with Beth so far. The only thing I’d suggest is to work on breaking up your paragraphs more, such as when a different person speaks. It’ll make reading it easier.
Hoping to see Beth move Steve a little further back in the future. ;) please keep up the good work!
Author's Response: G’day, Thanks for the feedback, i’ve never written a story before, so i’m Just winging it, it’s taken me a while to post it because I wasn’t sure if anyone would like it, I like BBW Giantess stories but they are hard to come by, I put up a challenge a while ago but no one accepted it, so I thought i’d write my own, I have a lot of idea’s that I will hopefully get around to writing, but at the moment I’m just working on this one, i’m actually up to chapter 54 and i’ll just post a couple of chapters every week, I’m just finding it hard to end. Once again thank you your feedback is greatly appreciated.