It's a cute short story. I tend to like the short ones, though I have some longer ones of my own brewing. However, with the brevity of this one (it's VERY short), I think that you lose some of the sensuousness of thicker description of the act of consuming the prey.
I think it is a nice touch that later in the story, the giantesses swallow their prey knowingly, and without the surrounding food.

Author's Response: Yeah it was kinda fun but I do agree; a few good scenes but noting great. I was considering taking it off the sight. Thanks for the review! :)