[Report This]Date: July 01 2023 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
Shame Teg couldn't get more time with her little bro over the course of the story.
As for the ending I definitely have an idea who it was attacking him but I'll leave that up to you with the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I enjoyed writing her character, only because at the same time I didn't want the same stereotypical little sister character that pops up in so many of these stories. Just someone who is a percieved threat, but is generally disinterested in being an antagonist because it would be too easy and because someone bigger than her constantly keeps her in check.
[Report This]Date: June 29 2023 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 21
Really interesting story. I loved the initial premise of it but I’ve also loved all the developments and characters you’ve introduced. I’m looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: May 30 2023 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
What do we have here...
Nice to see him get it off his chest and gain an ally at least. Not too bad a night depending on how things progress.
[Report This]Date: December 02 2021 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 19
Well hot damn...
Zoey is the bad penny of the giantess world it would seem. Or perhaps the Mr. X as she shows up no matter where you go.
Teagan seems rather fun but likely less dangerous than Zoey will be.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I won't likely go down the "evil little sister" road, because it's been done ten thousand times, but I hope to write another solid character with Teagan. The story isn't too much longer though either.
[Report This]Date: March 04 2019 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
Into the fire indeed!
Great chapter and tremendous cliffhanger.
[Report This]Date: December 14 2018 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 17
Keira becoming a redeemable character seems to have full circle now. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: December 14 2018 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
It took all afternoon. But, I read it all the way through. And I've got to tell you. None of the giantesses are coming across as sympathetic characters to me. Even Cadence (btw: is that supposed to be "Candace?") is starting to take the "fun" out of "dysfunctional relationship."
[Report This]Date: November 25 2018 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
That was unexpected...
Though it ratchets up the tension quite a bit.
[Report This]Date: November 09 2018 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
Edith would be fun with a tiny of her own.
Author's Response:
Haha. Maybe I'll write an adventures of Edith side story or something. Right now Preston is the only tiny guy around and he has other places to go, but I think it would be a cool concept with her personality.
[Report This]Date: November 06 2018 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: every little battle.
Love the new chapter! Edith's my favorite in this, by a long shot. Too bad there isn't a plan c where she keeps him for herself. Either way, great story, looking forward to the next update as well as ASMR.
Author's Response:
The good news is: the next couple chapters involve Edith. The bad news is: I lost the spark for MaddieMayASMR. Usually I figure out how the story is going to progress by this point, but that hasn't happened this time so it's done for the foreseeable future.
[Report This]Date: October 28 2018 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
I have a feeling Keira wil meet Zoey officially soon.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2018 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
Candi is a powder keg of emotion the more time she's in charge of him.
It was nice to see him catch a break with Tess though.
Author's Response:
That's true. I don't know where I'm going with Cadence yet, but she is getting more emotional.
[Report This]Date: October 20 2018 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
Interesting to see Zoey meet Kiera...
Also hard to explain the broken ribs to Candi.
[Report This]Date: October 14 2018 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
God I LOVE Candi!
[Report This]Date: October 10 2018 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
I feel bad for the guy but I do love how you craft a big gal.
I do love redheads too.
Author's Response:
Thank you. He has a little bit of revenge in the next chapter or two if I remember correctly.
Date: October 07 2018 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: every little battle.
I hope this means more is coming.
Author's Response:
I have a few more chapters stock piled anyway. And a few more scenes and ideas I want to write about. There is more to come, but I don't know at what pace.
Date: September 02 2018 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great story. The degradation of the tiny is nive.
[Report This]Date: April 16 2018 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: every little battle.
I really like the interaction and dialogue between the characters depicted in your story. More so, I really like how Candi is taking a liking to being a giantess. I can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: April 10 2018 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
Candi really is awesome, I could see her eventually ruling over him intentionally or unintentionally.
[Report This]Date: March 31 2018 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 5: help is on the way
A nice little surprise, Candi seems like she could help the little guy get some revenge if he wanted or cause more mischief of her own.