Mother-in-law did show to John she's law and Order haha Brillant chapter !

I enjoy the psychological but I also enjoy the encounters. For instance there's a knock on the door but he can't reach the door knob. His Mother InLaw sees him for the first time. She knew he was small from talking to her daughter but when she actually sees him, she gets a smile or smirk that she can't hold back because he's smaller than she thought he would be. Knowing he's 2 feet tall and having him stand beneath you are two different things. Same with him looking up at her for the first time. It's hard not to feel like a child when you look up at her.

Author's Response:

Well there should definately be a balance which means that they both get incorporated into the story at the appropriate times..  One without the other is kind of flat in my books. He, he.

Chapter 3 was very exciting. Right from the beginning Mrs. Pedriason sets the tone by slightly knocking and then entering. She doesn't need permission to enter. She just enters. Love that She's very intelligent. I am sure she looked down on him when he was tall, but now even more so. Now John is baby size. Will she wear heels in the future, maybe when he's even smaller?
Her walking past him also let him know that he will get out of her way and not the other way around. This also is good advice for his inevitable future. Her comments about eventually moving into her house also sound like a prophecy. I wonder who in the family eventually buys him a dollhouse to live in? Love her calling him little johnny and other belittling terms.
Her patting the sofa with her hand was authoritative. Come here little one is what she meant. His pitiful attempts to climb the sofa just further show how he needs adults. Having her Massive Hands grab him so easily is frightening. I hope at some point her Massive Hands lift him up and lay him belly down across her lap. Then she pulls his little pants and underwear down for a spanking as only Mrs. Pedraison can give.
Her releasing him was a treat. How lucky he is. She can show kindness, if he is obedient. She controls him now.
Loved Mrs. Pedraison's explenation of how things will proceed. I expect you to obey me. Her threat of stepping on him later on was scary and real.
I greatly enjoyed her, the I will not ask you again statement was Awesome. He is being treated as a child. john had better learn to obey her the first time she says something. Will he answer her with Yes Ma'am to show respect to her?
I really enjoyed this chapter so much. I can see the Mother In Law will be a phenomenal character. You have set the stage and you have so many different Women in his small life.
Love it,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Everytime you give a review Diesel there's not need to have anymore. He, he, he.

There goes the last lingering piece of John’s manhood. I'm curious to see how this plays out. Especially since she's pretty much threatened to step on him. 

Wow! This chapter felt very complete and real. The first chapter was a great tease as we see Sarah take John upstairs. I wanted to see what happened upstairs tho. You just had to leave us hanging.

In this chapter, I love the setting. The nuclear disaster of Fukushima causing the shrinking which might make us mutants one day. Some of us become xmen, and I wish my power would be to shrink and become indestrutable.

Also, you used San Francisco and Sacramento. I been to both cities, so it felt close to home. Perhaps, I might get hit with this disease.

I loved this chapter. It broke stereotypes. Usually the cable guy is a guy, but this time it's a woman, and not just any woman, but a pretty college girl. Also, as this girl just stares at John, it's similar to how guys stare at girls. I mention this becuase I had a female friend who kept having problems with her apartment and the same guy kept showing up to fix it, but he kept complimenting and staring at her instead of doing his job in a timely manner. She thinks he also half-assed the job, just so he can return back to "fix" it again. So it's kinda cool to see everything flipped in this scene and through John, I can understand how my friend was feeling.

This scene was sexy regardless of the moral story. If I was in John's position, I wouldn't mind this girl having her way with me. The way he described her was pretty positive. Still, Sarah was super sexy last chapter even though it was just a tease. I want more of Sarah's intimate moments with John, but this chapter was also quite nice.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Well, you will get more of Sarah Mr.Speedy, he he.

Cool chapter. So the Mother in law left him home alone. Interesting. I can see why he enjoyed her being away. I am sure to the cable lady he looked adorable in his baby like clothes. I liked that she bended down to at least try to not be so imposing.
I wonder if he will get on the internet and write some things about his Mother in law. Maybe she will see what he wrote and take the controls and his freedom away.
I wonder if he will try to stand up to her only to have her act as the adult and punish him as a child.
I am loving this story. So many possibilities. The fact that so many others are experiencing what it's like to be small is fascinating. Slowly reducing in size all over the world. I know you will explore him at every size. I do love the baby size. He's an adult but so weak and helpless. His not being able to reach the doorknob shows how he really needs a full size adult there. Will he answer his Mother in law respectfully and answer her with Yes Ma'am?
Loving it,
Diesel

Author's Response:

You've touched on a lot of interesting aspects here Diesel...  I wanted give the story more possibilities for interactions on his scale than the original story allowed, although it did have him falling for a midjet lady in it's defense. 

keep up the great work! 

Haven't seen you in a while Crocodile. Great to see you are back to writing!

I love the Sarah/John dynamic. However, Laura is kinda annoying to me. Little kids trying to be bossy just makes me want to shake my head.

I love how Sarah is getting used to John's new height and treating him like a child. Especially when she picks him up at the end and carries him upstairs. Looks like we know who will be in control in bed.

I'm also interested in Karen and Sarah's mom. Maybe Sarah's mom is into John like her daughter. Could be fun.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I don't know what made me start typing.. I honestly don't.   But we'll see how far I can go with this.

Awesome set up. Loved where Laura towered over him. Having the babysitter be his sister in law and her Mother is fantastic. I am sure neither will respect his feelings. I am especially looking forward to the Mother. Will he answer her with Yes Ma'am?.
The Incredible Shrinking Man is my all time favorite. It really shows what happens when you slowly shrink. The more you shrink, you not only lose size but dignity and respect.
You have set the stage for what looks like a memorable update on the classic.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

I've worked on this scenario a lot in other avenues of Art over the years and think I might be able to give this a whirl..