He, he, he... Yeah I guess in that respect that puts a good light on his predicament..   I suppose there's a positive way of looking at everything..  I'm glad that you've found it too ColdAtlast! :)

Probably not... Well he'll have to cross that bridge when he gets there, he he.

Powerful therapy indeed though I agree. ;)

Thank you very much for the comments Kane. :)

I'm very glad that everything doesn't have to be a orgasm fest for you as I suspect it does have to be for some others too!!

Thank you Diesel as always. :)

And I think the size that I had him pegged at for that particular scene was 3.25 inches. :)

I'm glad that you liked the scenery.. I seldom if ever hear about it and now it might interact with the main shrunken protaganist..  

Thanks a lot for appreciating that and voicing it too Logan!!!  :)

I was wondering if anyone was going to catch that..  Glad to see that it definately did not escape your attention Kane..

I figured that some people would just callously assume that he was owned or possessed by a legal gaurdian of some sort..   Humiliating as that would be. 

Thanks a lot for the comments and the good eye Kane. :)

I'm glad that you liked the mother..  There will be more with her of course..  And not to worry as there will be another chapter soon. ;)

Thanks for the comments too..   Please try to realize that most people here do not speak Spanish, so if you could review in English then others will know what you are talking about.

Thanks again. :)

And yes, both girls are very much dangerous to somebody John's size at that moment.. I'm glad that you noticed and pointed that out.

Thanks again for the great comments Diesel. :)

Thanks for briging up the random order issue ColdAlas..     Because this is the core of the engine of this story.

I wanted to get away from the very slow methodical grind that most of these shrinking stories must give service to.

I wanted to have the freedom to get an inspiration and present it to you all that very night and not have to leave it in the notes for weeks on end and risk it becoming stale or impractical by the time that I got to it as has happened to some of my other story ideas due to the chains of chronological rules.

The problem with this is remembering what came when and is the trade-off that I've already noticed..   But that's my cross to bare on this particular writing style attempt.. 

I'm liking it a lot though as it allows me to nail things right out of the starting gate which is so liberating I am finding.    A word of note to some of you other writers who might be readig these reviews. ;)

Thanks a lot for bringing the random order aspect to the forefront with your comments ColdAtlas. ;)

I would imagine rougher, ha, ha!  I figured that I'd let the motives of her sexual advances travel on the breeze but should have known that observant readers like you Kane would not overlook that and bring me to task on the issue.. He, he.

My big hint wasn when I said that she had not had any contact with another human for over 2 years..   But one can not rule out her inclination to bestow mercy either so perhaps she chasing both alternatives at the same time as I've known some smart ladies who could juggle multiple motives as one time.    

If I were to vote, my ballot would be cast for both motives. :)

But that does not mean that she will not allow carnal desires to crush the good intentions eventually either. ;)  I don't know if that will happen either.. I'd like to show off and say that I'm three steps ahead on her nature but sadly I am not.  

I will think on it some more though Kane.. Thanks a lot for bringing that subtle point to the surface. :)