[Report This]Date: March 23 2018 5:36 PM Title: Unfortunate spy
Vio was in the right here.
Author's Response:
Glad you think so! Hope you enjoyed the story :)
[Report This]Date: March 23 2018 12:29 PM Title: Intro
I love your stories and agree that these short, unrelated stories will be easier for you to manage. I am a huge fan of sons and brothers being beyond tiny and utterly dominated by the feminine stink of their mom or sister’s feet. It just extinguishes their self-respect and self-worth. You do a good job of this. I do have an idea, one that is cruel and taboo. But, since your tales are incest-related, you might like this. A mom discovers her son’s foot fetish and decides to shrink him to punish him. The son is also bullied by a guy in school and the mom makes her tiny son smell her and the bully’s feet and socks. Just decimating him. He’s half an inch tall and just flooded with stink. A cruel send-off would be for his mom to tape him just under the toes of one of her feet and gives her son’s bully a slow footjob.
Author's Response:
Thanks I appreciate it. I'm glad we share a similar interest and although future volumes won't be focussed strictly on incest there will be some here and there. I do really like the idea, I am partial to taboo themes and cruel and unusual punishments, but I think I'd be best sticking to f/m content without a death ending because I feel like I write better when it's a topic that aligns with what I want to see. Would you still be interested if the bully was female? And if the story continued on after the death, into some kind of hellish afterlife? Thanks again for sharing your thoughts and I hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters!
[Report This]Date: March 23 2018 4:33 AM Title: Intro
Oh wow! Chris in in for a world of trouble. Would be funny if he got put in Angela's shoe, the slave of a slave. I've actually had that fantasy regular size. I hadn't thought about the GTS aspect of that scenario. Feel free to use this idea for a possible chapter. :) Great work so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I do like the idea however it won't be in this volume, I already have the stories outlined but I will definitely try to work it into a future piece since it's a fun idea.
[Report This]Date: March 23 2018 12:21 AM Title: Intro
Another great story, and I like the twist where this is a girlfriend reading to her boyfriend for the new open.
Author's Response:
Thanks again! I'm glad you enjoy the addition of the frame narrative, I thought it might make the collection as a whole more interesting.
[Report This]Date: March 17 2018 8:04 PM Title: The dangers of hypnosis
Duck super smal criticism, but you should change it when His mother is hypnotized to when you hear the word blue, not when I say the word blue. Otherwise is doesn’t make sense when the blue cheese salesman says it, because only the Grand Debbie can say it for it to take effect currently
Author's Response:
Fixed, thanks for spotting that :)
[Report This]Date: March 17 2018 7:14 PM Title: The dangers of hypnosis
So glad to see you back duck;)! Love your work!
Date: March 17 2018 2:35 AM Title: The dangers of hypnosis
Loved it. The Grand Debbie idea was great. Loved the idea of the word blue making her react. Terrific idea and story. Very much enjoyed.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm hoping I can write plenty of isolated shorter stories like this and explore a variety of ideas. I try writing longer stories and end up losing interest or starting on other ideas. Stick around and I hope you'll enjoy future installments.
Date: March 16 2018 6:50 PM Title: The dangers of hypnosis
Hello! I have posted a couple of stories in the past, one finished and one annoyingly unfinished, and I thought that perhaps a collection of shorter stories might be easier to write rather than rely on myself being able to pump out chapter after chapter of a longer story. Mostly inspired during a painstaking marathon of Black Mirror (that show makes me crazy anxious) I present you with a bunch of unrelated short stories. I intended the subjects to be varied however they turned out to be all incestuous in nature so I labelled this as the theme of this particular volume. I will be updating weekly as not every chapter in this volume is finished. Enjoy, and I hope to be releasing more soon! All criticism (and any praise) is appreciated.