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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2018 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 04: What Color of Panties

I like this story and my favorite character is Linda. Her attitude and enjoyment of keeping her son in her panties is my favorite part of this story. There's just one thing. I wish it wasn't her actual son, but rather a boy at the same age of Steve.

There is also something about being trapped in the front of a sexy mom's panties. She is more experienced that the other 21 year olds, and knows how to handle men, and especially little boys. Love how Linda treats Steve and I want to see more of that.

As for suggestions. A story with a woman such as Linda finding a young man(not in her family) to keep as her pleasure pet would be awesome. Perhaps, a classmate of Steve is tutoring Steve and he starts falling for this Linda-like woman.

Your writing is excellent and the best part is how you add unique personalities to each character. The girls all have their own characteristics that make conversations interesting. Steve is stubborn which makes his actions quite funny. And of course Linda is smart and erotic which to me sounds like the dream giantess.

I can't wait for the next chapter and perhaps your next story!

Reviewer: bombyx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2018 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 01: Introduction

I love this story and your writing overall. The raunchiness and cruelty of the scenarios you describe are really creative and original, so please keep it up! I also like how the characters behave like spoiled, bratty millennials. I think there's definitely a lot of people out there who enjoy material like this.

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2018 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 03: Trapped in her Pants

Loved the brother part.  I mean he was really glued to her apparently.  Reading that 'confession' on top of a camel toe.  Really that alone would of made a great story!  Looking forward to what you'll come up with next!

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2018 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 03: Trapped in her Pants

interesting story, keep it up

Reviewer: DoctorStrange42 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2018 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 01: Introduction

Loved it. Wish he actually did kiss the ass of the woman in the bathroom. 

Reviewer: Thornton Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2018 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 01: Introduction

Here's a first review for you. Wonderful story, great characters. Yes, it's contrived here and there like Tyler screaming out that he'll kiss the ass of the woman in the bathrooms... but all in all, you're not scared of writing the fun stuff. 

Avery is probably my favourite character. Keep up the great work. 

#bootyislife

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