Reviewer: JinchuurikiJay26 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2019 10:57 PM Title: Coming All Together Now! (Part 1)

You one of the best writers I've ever scene on this site ! 

Your writing of Katie is absolutely perfect! And the best part of your story. She fulfils every perfect detail I love in an unaware gts character. 1. How big her butt is (how it ripples and jiggles just laughing, moving and especially farting) 2. How big her appetite is. 3. How nasty of her body is inside and out. (Mountian size turds, constantly farts, lazly wipes, fart residue, still wearing the same spandex) 4. How she intentionally have the nano people go into other places (on other giantess people)

The amount of detailed unaware content that you put in your story is incredible. Absolutely love how you juggle different pov's from the giantess and her actions to a micro person or city (in or on) one part of her body and how her actions are affecting each of them on different levels or at different times simultaneously.

For example the parts where you wrote of Claire playing with Katie's ass then having Katie accidentally release a small fart that sent a tiny piece (for them) of poop into Claire's mouth, then switch pov that same action to Oliver seeing Claire and it hitting her teeth leaving a stain, then switch it to Rimini, Italy in the colon and how the poop started off as a long strip of poop that was spread across the main street which by the fart rolled up into one giant ball that carried any poor soul caught in it from her ass into Claire's teeth then tongue then down her throat. That kinda of writing it stuff I REALLY love in unaware stories.

This is all to say I'm begging you to continue this story as I see it hasn't been updated since last year in August. Do you take commissions ? Heck I'll even do that if just to get the Part 2 of "Coming All Together Now" and more. Your writing is that good.

As for Ideas what I hope is that we continue on with Katie and her continuing to unawarely/unintentionally spreading the micro people plus poop and fart residue to other people in the party like how she did with Claire having the droplet of fart residue sucked into Claire’s nose that carried Oscar when she took in a whiff of Katie's accidental fart. Even better have Jessica sneeze oscar and snot/boogers into other girls food or Katie having some of the poop remains of Rimini go to girls mouths, thier hair, in eyes, or land on buttcheeks while girls are dancing =D Just my ideas and hopes for things to see at the party

Reviewer: Benja999 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2018 6:06 AM Title: A Snotty Forecast In Seattle

Really nice story!

I love the setting and the nanosize of the citys is just perfect!

Pls keep writing I cant wait for the next chapter were Katie finally takes a real big shit.

 

Author's Response:

It'll probably be out on 8/13 or 8/14

Reviewer: TehZach Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2018 9:17 AM Title: A Snotty Forecast In Seattle

Awesome! Can one city be in a tomboy girls armpit?

Author's Response: Why not? Expect it soon!

Reviewer: bubsboy81 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2018 10:27 PM Title: A Snotty Forecast In Seattle

I really like your writing style, especially the different viewpoints between each chapter. Will the next chapter be a continuation of the vore chapter, or an all new city in inside a different person? Either way I'm looking forward to it! 

 

Reviewer: Dankmeme Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2018 2:44 PM Title: A Snotty Forecast In Seattle

I'm loving this story so far, and all of the sceniarios and crativity!

As for ideas, any city of your choice could end up appearing in a warm bowl of oatmeal and honey. The bowl belongs to an Asian MILF in her 40s/50s who is about to tuck in and eat her oatmeal. Would be great to see an endo scene of the civilians inside of her stomach too, and some detail on the sounds and smells aswell :)

Reviewer: Haloichigo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2018 12:35 PM Title: A Snotty Forecast In Seattle

This story so far has been what I wanted to see for ages. It has been so long since I read a story that takes one of my favorite scenarios, shrunken city and incorporates it into such a well oiled machine. Most stories these days are more interactive sizes, aware and well lacks the destruction I seek. But this is unaware goodness that demonstrates the true might and terror of goddess like being who can't personally interact of conceive the tinies at their mercy because they are so huge by comparison and I love it. I love just reading about the pure destruction that the simple actions that these woman have on thousands to millions of lives. I truly hope this continues for a while, because it will be only 1 of 2 stories currently on the site that I am keeping a close eye on.

As for ideas I wonder if you will repeat ideas because I would love the idea of using feet again. Maybe a woman goes to a Korean spa and not just a city, but maybe a few surrounding islands are transported onto her soles and toes as the woman lays on her stomach ready to be pampered. An attractive woman working at the spa tends to the woman and begins to work by massaging her feet. The cities and islands are in utter terror as the giant woman uses her strong slender fingers to press and grind the tiny city into the relaxing woman's big soft feet. It also doesn't help that the woman is so relaxed the her curling toes crush thousands of people. Some people even get caught on the spa attendant's hands as she oils them up for the massage and many are trapped between her between her black manicured nails only to be violently picked out by her other nails.  An alluring combination of hand and finger crush along with feet play.

Vore is also one of my favs, can have an glasses wearing office woman about to eat a healthy lunch a little cup of creamy yogurt, unaware of the crumbling city laying in her snack. and a couple of spoon fulls turn deadly.

Another tale of a teen picking her ear, unaware of the fact that there is a tiny city crumbling in the deaths of her wax filled ear and her finger becomes a weapon of mass destruction, and to make things worst her girlfriend just wants to fool around and she knows that her ears are her weak spot. the tiny city must not only survive the finger of the woman they occupy, but must try to not be lapped up by her playful girlfriend's tongue that is licking and squirming into the massive ear canal.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I will try to upload daily to this story, so yes, you may want to keep an eye on it. For the foot idea, yes, however realize that it will be a good while between chapter two and the idea you are proposing. The vore idea is already in progress, but is similar to your idea, as it is cereal instead of yogurt. The ear idea is nice too, but may be a while because after vore, I’ll focus on butt/scat for a chapter. Thanks again for the encouragement!!!

Reviewer: Leylagts Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2018 10:53 PM Title: A Snotty Forecast In Seattle

Can you do
Kabul or dhaka or kuala lumpur or amman
On
Lips/ ass cheek / thighs/ hair

Author's Response:

I'll defintly try to include one of those cities on one of those places!

Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2018 10:34 PM Title: A Snotty Forecast In Seattle

I have to say, you are quite my type of guy when it comes to writing.  I'm honestly very impressed with all your workings; they are unique, and they flow smoothly.  Keep up the awesome work.  I'm also excited for digestion!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, it means a lot. I’m good at writing because I write more than erotic. I also write novels.

Reviewer: microscopic boy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2018 4:32 PM Title: A Snotty Forecast In Seattle

goooood story

please set the city in pubic

Author's Response: I like response! Pubic is interesting, but I’m not sure there is enough events to do pubic as a full chapter. If you disagree, email joshkillian656@gmail.com with more ideas. If I do agree, look out for chapter 4.