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Reviewer: Tinyscopic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 07 2023 5:39 PM Title: Mark - Part Two

Oh man. After seeing the bigger races abuse the smaller races, its nice to see one of them turn the tables on their giant tormenter. I can see a couple of scenarios happening in the future. They could make good ideas if the author ever returns to this series.

1. After Julia gets used to being a Prodigan, she decides to use her size to protect the smaller races so no-one will ever go what she went through again.

2. What if when Julia was drenched in Mark's semen, she ended up getting pregnant? It could lead to an interesting story where Julia is conflicted over raising her kidnapper's child. Does she decide to give it up for adoption because it brings back memories of torment or does she raise it with love and kindness in spite of that?

Reviewer: FriedNova324 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2022 10:08 PM Title: Lucy - Part One

Lucy's attitude towards tea bags is enough to give this story the highest rating, impressed with writing and fantastic construction of the new world order!

Reviewer: MegaFan4217 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2019 2:02 PM Title: Lucy - Part One

Very awesome set of stories.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2019 9:08 AM Title: Sophia

Would love a follow up to this chapter :)

Reviewer: nipotapov2 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2019 4:51 AM Title: Lucy - Part One

Extremely cool story! All chapters are exciting but one which shows Camila's superiority over a tiny guy is my favorite!

I have one idea. What if some Prodigian takes several hundreds or thousands of micros and declare something like that: "Now you will form a new race!!!! You all will be Nanoputians!!"

What do you think about that?

Reviewer: McProky Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2018 6:43 PM Title: Lucy - Part One

This is one of the best GTS stories ever! Very well written, love the variety of sizes and scenarios too.

 

If I may suggest, you could do one that is hair related? Homeless tinies living inside the hair strands of Prodigians? 

Reviewer: microjim Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2018 2:44 PM Title: Lucy - Part One

Love this stoy so far. Espcially the extreme size differences such as Camila. Hope to see more like that. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: SHRUNK LIFE Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2018 2:03 PM Title: Lucy - Part One

Amazing story. Even i began writing something like this and now i am really inspired.Would really like entrapment and lesbian couple story line.

Reviewer: Arkcrono14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2018 9:55 PM Title: Lucy - Part One

Love your work Dogface123,
Your description of the extreme size difference is so well done and creative I can imagine the scenarios you’ve created vividly, I love the characters you put together, with amanda,lucy and so on. Not really interested in male content but looked past it, cant wait to see Julia have the tables turned on mark. Good stuff and will follow it to come.
-Arkcrono

Reviewer: Stepbonk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2018 8:43 PM Title: Lucy - Part One

Some very interesting concepts going on here. I prefer to see everyone starting on the same scale and size changes ensuing thereafter, but the Jenny dynamic makes things exciting for me. I suggest making her transformation occur in stages, like maybe she spends her first week at 9 feet tall, then week 2 she's 30 feet tall, so she's given time to gradually get used to her new status in society and humiliate all her former Gulliverian friends as she gets bigger and bigger.

 

I think it would also be an interesting twist to see a couple of male Prodigans shrinking down as student ambassadors to the Microputians and have them gradually going through various stages of humiliation as they get smaller every day/week, perhaps they cross paths with Jenny a few times along the way?

Reviewer: teradonk Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2018 12:39 PM Title: Lucy - Part One

great story. i love the super size difference. i see the butt tag, and not sure what that implies, but it would be awesome to read of a couple of brobdingnagian women having some cruel and naughty butt fun with a handful of lilliputian men!

Reviewer: tylw456 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2018 6:10 PM Title: Lucy - Part One

LOVE THIS, especially the couples parts! Be even better with even bigger  size difference sex fun, like Brobis & micros. Please update this! 

Reviewer: faaaks Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2018 9:28 AM Title: Lucy - Part One

This is amazing, please continue.

Reviewer: rygar300 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2018 7:01 PM Title: Lucy - Part One

Looking forward to a Lucy part 3. Cant wait to see her react to a giant Jenny



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2018 7:16 PM Title: Lucy - Part One

Loving it so far.

Any plans for a gentle story arc?


Also agree with Leylagts that a story set in another part of the world would make for a great sequel; India or China could be interesting.

Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Yes, I'll write some Gentle stuff, not to worry. And Leyla's idea has been put on the list; I used to write stories under a different alias, so common practice with every suggestion was that I'd book them and try think of a way to use them sooner or later. It's a good idea for sure.

Reviewer: atherfeet Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2018 5:52 AM Title: Lucy - Part One

Amazing story so far! I love the size differences. Keep it up :)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, glad you enjoy it!

Reviewer: MadeSpain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2018 1:08 PM Title: Lucy - Part One

Nice story men.

I've got an idea for a story

How about a prodigian or Brobdingnagtian restarurant than ad to their meals microputians or lilis as a spice to their food And the customers eat it unaware of the tiny people in their meals

I always have an idea around my head of giant restaurants using Tiny people in their dishes.

(Sorry for the bad english)



Author's Response:

Thanks! That sounds cool, I'll see what I can do with it.

Reviewer: LilBeni Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2018 12:01 PM Title: Lucy - Part One

Awesome work, my friend! Especially loving the Giant Couple aspect. Could you inject a bit of Political dynamics, as in the Lilis and Micros being more Conservative, while Biggers are kinda like 'SJWs'?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words! I'll shove your idea on the list, see if I can mix it in a bit.

Reviewer: Leylagts Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2018 10:50 AM Title: Lucy - Part One

Whats amanda's ethnicity?

Also i have an idea

Maybe in some other countries

Like russia or india or china or middle east of this world
The bigger races are more harsh
And you can do some scenarios about them
Maybe about a few micros being tortured
Amd one survives and escapes to the united states embassy for asylum

Author's Response:

Hey there Leylagts!

Great suggestions, I think that other countries would be better for a sequel though. However, I will throw a foreigner in one of the new arks for you when I start writing them.

As for Amanda, that's up to you ;)

Reviewer: microscopic boy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2018 2:32 AM Title: Lucy - Part One

Very goooooooooood story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, glad you are enjoying it!

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