Love the story! Is there any chance Shannon could ever develop something to make her grow? If she likes Chris under her toes, buildings would be even better...

I wanted to say that I'm still reading your story and stil like it, even though I have nothing to add or complain about!

Thank you for writing!

Hmm. Realistic. But also balanced and playful.

Let's see. Noreen will probably have several major questions for both Shannon and Chris. She will ask Shannon about Chris's condition, what she does to Chris and how to take care of him. She could ask Chris about how Chris ended up under her foot and he can detail his journey.

I think Noreen could go full nurse mode and tend to Chris's health since Noreen is a big fan of being healthy.

Shannon will assure Noreen that everything is fine and want to take back Chris asap. But also want Noreen to keep the secret safe.

Chris, like you said will want to be kept in safe hands and might even think of sticking with Noreen since Noreen doesn't seem as aggressive as Shannon.

I can see Noreen being curious about the whole situation which includes the shrinking, size of Chris, who else knows and so on. Then they soon decide that she needs to help Shannon to keep Chris safe. Then after that, Noreen think of ways to deal with Chris, perhaps playful and try to make it fun.

But yes, I Think a realistic approach would be some form of shock, but also questioning both of them to know the scooop of what's going on. Then she will start to think of the "fun" aspects for Chris.

I don't see Noreen as a mean type, and yes I guess she could be playful. I would like a naughty vibe from her, but I doubt you would include that since Shannon acts the same way. Perhaps, Chris and Noreen needs to spend time together as friends and then they can find some fun things to do later.

I do like the thought of Noreen trying to find a guy so I do hope she gets somewhat sexual with Chris.

Lots of possibilities!

Author's Response: Most of what you’re saying is aligns with what I’m thinking, too. The problem is in the execution—finding the right balance. There’s a lot I have planned for the next couple of in story days and not a lot of extra time. Spoiler: Chris will start growing back soon. Thank you so much for your thoughts and feedback!

Author's Response: Most of what you’re saying is aligns with what I’m thinking, too. The problem is in the execution—finding the right balance. There’s a lot I have planned for the next couple of in story days and not a lot of extra time. Spoiler: Chris will start growing back soon. Thank you so much for your thoughts and feedback!

Yes! Noreen finds Chris! I'm so excited!

I understand you are not sure where to go with this. Perhaps, I can help with some ideas.

-Noreen realizes that Chris felt nice on her foot and decides to keep him to play with.

-Chris explains his side of the story feeling embarrassed and Noreen can't help but feel horny thinking of what Chris went through.

-Noreen decides to hang on to Chris and also tells Shannon that she will keep her secret as long Noreen gets some time with Chris.

-Noreen realizes that she never really wanted a man, but instead wanted some pleasure which Chris can provide.

-Shannon explains Chris's shrinking and how she lost him during their meeting outside. She is reluctant to tell Noreen about what she does to Chris, but Noreen brings up some naughty ideas which allows Shannon to openly share her methods.

-Shannon tells Noreen that she will take Chris off her hands, but Noreen seems excited and decides to hold on to Chris and let Shannon relax.

-Both Noreen and Shannon talk about what to do with Chris, while Chris is shaking his head "no" at each idea they come up with while the ladies smile in agreement.

Yeah, most of these ideas are similar and I might come up with more. I just want to see Noreen play with Chris.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I will definitely take your suggestions under advisement. My take on Noreen is that although she and Shannon are good friends, Noreen isn’t mean by any sense, so I don’t think she would knowingly torture Chris. It is possible that if she can understand the situation, however, she might be a bit playful. I want her reaction to Chris’s predicament to be realistic, I mean how would a real person react to seeing someone tiny, something that never happens in real life. Their reaction would probably be a mixture of disbelief and confusion, possibly wanting to know more about how it happened. You also look at things from Chris’s perspective: Now that the secret’s out, and since Shannon has put him through Quite a bit, he probably admit several things and hide others about what Shannon’s done to him, and beg Noreen to keep him safe until he gets big again. I want this next chapter to be as realistic as possible as far as how each character would most likely react: Noreen’s disbelief, Chris’s anxiety about her intentions and his eagerness to be kept out of danger, and Shannon’s fears about Chris being discovered. I think the key will be finding the right balance of caring and playfulness, if it’s possible.

The noreen section is so good its definitely worth shannon failing in finding the protagonist at noreens house for a while and getting a few more types of unaware chapters out of it!

Nice chapter. Hope Chris ended up inside Noreen's Womb, especially if he starts to grow back inside her womb (I know it's not a true unbirth, but I really do love unbirth stories especially with male to female unbirth and ones with people trapped inside wombs), If he does grow back inside her womb, I hope for several funny moments trying to get him out with him being to big by then, maybe even have to find a way to shrink him again, and get to continue the story.

Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback. I’ll take your suggestion under consideration.

I hope you didn't skip my review because the review above mine got a reply.

Author's Response: Oh no, definitely wouldn’t skip yours. Just had to think about my reply. Short and sweet.

This was an awesome chapter I can’t wait to see the next.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Stay tuned for more.

At first I was disappointed that Sue Ann would not be taking care of Chris as she was beautifully decscribed in the early chapters. As these chapters go on, however, I find myself more enticed with Shannon and her desires to the point that I want to be in Chris' shoes. 

Fantastic story, keep up the great work!

I didn't review the last chapter becuase I just wasn't into that kind of content. I know other readers may enjoy it, buts it not exactly my cup of tea. It's good to have some variety, so I don't mind. Better than me just complaining about it. Lol.

This chapter was more fun to read. The creativeness about the car ride and where Shannon got the shrinking stuff. That was good.

Isn't this the second time Shannon is going to eat him? At this point it seems kinda predictable that she won't eat him. Especially since you used the same cliffhanger before.

Also, it's been so long since we saw Sue Ann. She was there in the first chapter and that was the best part of this story and I keep scratching my head, wondering why won't you bring her back into the story. Then in your response to another review, you mentioned her being a combo of Star Hughes and Shailene Woodly. I had no idea who Star Hughes was, but wow, she is georgeous. Now I'm very anxious for Sue Ann to make an appearance soon.

Well, I'm not sure if I'm going to keep reviewing this story without Sue Ann, becuase these last few chapters seem very repetitive. If it was Sue Ann doing these sexy things on repeat, I probably wouldn't mind, but I think personally I'm getting a little tired of Shannon, especially when my favorite giantess hasn't even shown up to play with Chris lately.

Author's Response: I wanted this story to have a little bit of everything, something for everybody to enjoy. This does mean that there may be some chapters that some prefer to others, but that’s just how it is. While I do like the end of my chapters to have some kind of cliffhanger, sometimes the chapters start getting a bit long, so it’s hard to find just the right place to end them. I will say that this is the part of the story that will be the hardest for me to write: Shannon and Chris both want to keep his shrinking a secret, so neither is motivated to seek out unwanted attention. For that reason, I want the next several chapters to go through the next days somewhat quickly. As you can tell by the reviews, many people want Sue Ann back, along with other characters; I’ve been reluctant to give away too many details, but if it will increase readership, I’ll give you a slight preview. SPOILER ALERT: I said in the beginning of the story that initially Sue Ann was supposed to watch Chris this week, but she had to cancel. The reason was hinted at in that same chapter: Sue Ann runs several side businesses and one of them came into conflict with watching Chris, she will show up later in the week once her business is concluded, along with Rachel AND her mother (for those who like the 40yr old giantess type). This is why I want to get through the next couple of days quickly, those are going to be the really exciting parts. I want to give as much time with each character as possible while still staying true to the heart of the story. For now, I thank you immensely for your feedback and urge you to keep reading. Hopefully, you’ll have a positive experience in the end!