Date: February 23 2018 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm liking where this story is going. Will the incest tag come into play next chapter?
Author's Response:
Basically yes, but in a different context than one might normally think
[Report This]Date: February 23 2018 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ariel seems lovely.
Author's Response:
If only her brother saw it sooner
[Report This]Date: February 19 2018 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice beginning of the story. Not very nice of them to make Ariel feel miserable for having sweaty feet. Especially not at the beginning of a story on this site!
Thank you for writing and see you next time!
Author's Response:
It's generally a bad idea to make jokes about any potential giantess's body parts on this site.
Date: February 18 2018 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent start, this sounds like it's gonna be a good one (as usual).
Author's Response:
Thanks; more to come soon
[Report This]Date: February 18 2018 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice story! Sibling stuff usually turns me off, so I pop these into Word and make some small character alterations for myself. This is great. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
After this current section, the majority of the story will be spent with people other than David's sister
Date: February 18 2018 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ah, now this sounds like it's gonna be good. I hope the commissioner asked for him to be trapped in some high heels
Author's Response:
Not quite, but there are several fun surprises to come