Date: February 17 2018 10:32 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro
This was outstanding, gonna mimic what someone else said, very Holly the freshmen vibe to it. And thats a very good thing, manage to get the size factor in just right. GJ look forward to more.
Forgot my rating >.<
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm glad everyone is enjoying the story so far!
Date: February 14 2018 5:48 PM Title: Hyde's First
Really great story 10/10!
Date: February 14 2018 11:40 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro
Just one small sugestion. It would be really great if the large person would have undressed the small person, probably in a forcefull way, and if she would have pleyed with the smaller girls body for a bit.
Other than that it was perfect. I look forward to seeing other stories you create :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment! And yeah, don't worry, I've had something like that planned for a while now, and it is likely going to come up around chapter 9 :D
Date: February 14 2018 12:48 AM Title: Miss Hyde
really great job, I enjoyed this story a lot. I hope you will make more stories like this in the future :)
Date: February 12 2018 9:22 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro
I'm really loving this story. It reminds me a lot of Holly the Freshman. Great, descriptive vore.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot! It helps knowing I'm on the right track. Especially being compared to nap25, as they've been one of my favorite authors for some time. I feel like I've had the most inspiration from both nap and observer, as they've heavily influenced my imagination for vore scenarios.
Date: February 10 2018 10:57 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro
I'm liking this story. I like how goofy and carefree Valerie is. She kind of reminds me of Yang from this series called RWBY. It was actually a surprise to see her room was tidy while Crystal's wasn't. Guess the room doesn't always reflect on the person.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've had RWBY recommended to me before, I'll definitely have to watch it now and see more Yang. From the few clips of her I've seen, she does seem a bit similar to Valerie. And yeah, there's more to it, but Valerie does like to look good, despite her personality :D
Date: February 08 2018 10:51 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro
Hey, really like how the story's coming along. One question though, do you think that you're going to transition the story back into unaware? Just curious.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And oh, yeah, don't worry, there'll be more of that to come. It's pretty easy to lose track of the tiny people, after all :D
Date: February 07 2018 12:05 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro
great work! keep up the unaware stuff for sure
Author's Response:
Thanks! Will do my best!
Date: February 07 2018 8:15 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro
I wait to be continue this story
Date: February 07 2018 4:10 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro
This was a good start. Your writing is actually quite good, and the setup was fun. I look forward to seeing more interaction with the size difference
Author's Response:
Thanks very much :D I'm hoping to try out some different things, too, with the interactions of giants vs tinies.