[Report This]Date: December 26 2018 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
This has been a truly amazing story so far. I can't wait to see what's next for both our heroes. Thank you for writing such an amazing story <3
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words! I forwarded them my writing partner as well! I Promise we aren't done yet! Just waiting on them to get back from overseas!
Date: December 23 2018 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is really good! Very unique fantasy world you've created. I enjoyed the descriptions of the Orasha and Bunuboi races and their culture. And the mouthplay and interaction between the characters was very sexy. I'm interested to see where this goes.
Author's Response:
Thanks Pixis! We have things planned out through the entire story arc.. just gotta put the ideas into words!
[Report This]Date: April 18 2018 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really liked the first chapter. I was wondering when the next chapter would be released if there is going to be one.
Author's Response:
I'm polishing it up right now! thanks for your support and patience!
[Report This]Date: January 28 2018 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this story is amazing! It has everything in it. It's so we'll written I'm speechless!
Also nice to see you writing again!
Thank you for sharing this story with us and I really hope a second chapter will be there soon!
Author's Response:
Raziell is such a great partner and these characters so interesting and dynamic that I couldn't help but dive in head first ; ) but dont worry! She is also going to join with me to help make Edovan's adventures as exciting as possible for all future chapters! We are both full committed to seing both stories through to their conclusions!
Thanks so much for your kind words and get ready for more soon!
[Report This]Date: January 28 2018 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the start of this story, and I'm looking forward to its continuation! The swapping of POVs really brings it to life, and holds one's interest. Please hurry and continue...
Author's Response:
Soo glad you enjoyed it! And we have the major story arc planned out and are writing the next chapter right now! Glad you like the different perspectives as well. It's reminicesnent of online RP writing, in a way but I think it really helps you to get close to and learn all you can about multiple characters and how they related to each other very quickly!
[Report This]Date: January 27 2018 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Woah! Not a super long chapter but I already have a good picture of this world, it's players, and the conflict that was established here. You guys have a knack for being able to generate an almost movie like picture in my head from not a lot of words. I was on the edge of my seat the whole read! And unlike most GTS stories where only the giantess is interesting and the tiny is a boring, dull character here Rabi himself was VERY interesting and a fiery personality! It's not often I find myself rooting for the tiny instead of the sexy giantess in these stories.
Rabi, to my surprise is the star here, his inner planning, the way he is confused about his own sexuality and how he never gives in, this guy is such a trooper! Loved his character! Narreyel was pretty interesting too. She seems like a dumb, barbarian full of lust and hunger at first but reading the section from her perspective gives her a thoughtful outlook that I wouldn't have had otherwise. Sure she's also a ball of muscles and sex but at the same time she's intelligent and thoughtful. A well written character too!
Author's Response:
The one major thing that Rabi and Narreyel have in common, is that neither one of them let their species' tradtional strengths and weakness define or limit who they are! Both are very much individuals who carve their own path. Both are also highly intelligent, cunning and sly, which is going to make for a pretty epic battle of wits and survival in the very near future xD
[Report This]Date: January 27 2018 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is actually incredible. Compelling, funny, steamy, and with a surprising amount of depth to the characters considering the adult content. Lowkey I didn't read the rating and didn't know it would go there until I was already invested. Great writing full of sexual tension and well, just regular tension. I didn't know if I wanted Rahbee to survive or get off for the first time in his bunboi life! Definitely didn't expect that ending and now I wanna know what happens next!
Also just loved the smaller worldbuiling moments like Rahbee's almost swears or Narreyell's race being constantly ready for action because males are so scarce. There's a bit of duality there since bunobios seem to have the opposite structure.
Author's Response:
ahahaha you are ON TO US xDDD
We are both old D&D hands and approach our world building from that perpective. Lay out the macro and let it filter down to the micro!
Their respective people's social structures are indeed almost opposite of one another.! We really wanted to play around with different species' evolutionary paths and how that might affect the development of their societies! I am also obviously a sucker for opposites attract, and couples who couldn't possibly be more different from one another and still physically be a couple xD
When you think about it, pred and prey concepts are areally just mataphors for sexual attraction and interaction, so I LOVE the idea of mixing things up and making them more than hungry lady and food, but for that you will to wait and see!
We are both old D&D hands and approach our world building from that perpective. Lay out the macro and let it filter down to the micro!