[Report This]Date: January 24 2018 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Death of Thomas Waldo
Amazing story so far!
I love that you made Thomas a person that we can care about so it makes every action much more enjoyable.
You are a good story teller. Things made sense and I felt the emotion and reasons behind each character so far.
The young woman glowing inside the old woman seems interesting.
I was thinking if there would be a sexy giantess in the future. There's the woman from the shop but she seems nice. Would be interesting if there's a naughty woman out there for Thomas too.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Well thank you! I'm trying pretty hard with this one. Not that I haven't been trying with my others, but this one is more complex and fantastic. Partially why I'm endeavoring to draw more.
I can't really say much, but this is a giantess story at heart even though it may take a bit to get to the meaty content, but here's hoping Thomas finds happiness and a giant lady!
Date: January 24 2018 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Death of Thomas Waldo
Very intersting first chapter. I feel really bad for poor Thomas, I hope things won't go downhill for him from now on (then again, I guess that it's kind of hard to go more downhill than dying like that, but still). I wonder if we'll see Jenna react to this death, I think she would feel bad about it.
By the way, now that I know you're deviantart name... be prepared to be pestered by me when I'll write ly newt Major/minor spin-off ^^
Author's Response:
Well there are worse things than dying. Thomas will soon discover those things and more. How will Jenna take his sudden death? Probably pretty hard, but lucky for her she has a strong, young, military stud to console her!
Your characters are actually on a short "I need to draw them" list. Hopefully I'll get to that and do them justice.
Date: January 23 2018 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Death of Thomas Waldo
Hmmm, this is an interesting premise you set up. I do have to say that I got a bit confused near the end, and I wasn't sure if the old lady that almost got run over had been mentioned before, or if she was the homeless lady. That aside, everything else seems fine, and I can't help but feel sad for poor Thomas.
Author's Response:
It's the same woman, but I'll look into it and edit if I feel it isn't clear enough. There is supposed to be a hint of uncertainty though. Thanks for the feedback!