Date: June 21 2020 5:10 AM Title: Exhausted Breakthrough
I really enjoyed it. Ms. Sato sounds like a beautiful woman to work for. I assume she will find out that the machine works. Then she can begin shrinking people. You should do a second part.
Ms.Sato will wonder what happened to Brian. Maybe she will figure out that he was shrunk. She is an intelligent lady. Maybe she will search for him, maybe she will remember that tiny wet spot on her foot. Either way the project is a success and she can begin the new world of very tiny people with people such as herself overseeing everything.
Loved it,
Please do a part 2,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: January 13 2018 10:20 AM Title: Exhausted Breakthrough
Loved this story - short, sweet, and satisfying!
Date: January 10 2018 11:52 AM Title: Exhausted Breakthrough
I would love to see that.
Date: January 10 2018 8:12 AM Title: Exhausted Breakthrough
First off, I loved it. Ms. Sato was wonderful. A well developed story. I would love to have her find him and put him in a small container on her desk. Maybe a tiny terrarium or aquarium. Any thoughts on that?
Author's Response:
Thank you! <3 I was actually undecided about whether to have her keep him in a little snowglobe on her desk to make sure he never got to the press with his story, but maybe something like that will happen in another story.
Date: January 09 2018 11:30 PM Title: Exhausted Breakthrough
excellent mate! love the characters, especially a workaholic giantess XD
are you going to continue writing other unaware stories?
Author's Response:
Thanks! Of course I am! <3