Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2022 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 3

This is more a comment regarding your past three chapters than just your last one.

Fantastic story.  I love the easy control yet total dominance of Ashley over her teacher "Bunny".  Though he resists, she has complete control over him to be whatever she desires.

I especially like "Mr. Jones, or like, Mr. Brent" both for Sasha; and "Ethan" for Britney as being no problem for Ashley to shrink and give to them.  That is so cool.

The replacement of Ashley's pet hamster with her teacher is so hot.  I hope she trains him further into sub-servitude and compliance.

The time spent between Ashley's thighs and against her panty thong was great.  Hopefully you will have "Bunny" spend more time there.

Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2019 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 2

This is the best story I've read recently. I really like the way that you dropped right into the action. The situation, so perfect, was well thoughtout and the fast pace is literally 'Breathtaking' 

I hope that this isn't a short story. This one has got some merit. I would love to see this girl and her friends use her shrinking stuff over and over again.  As for the 'Teacher' I'd say that once she has broken his spirt and he succomes to her overwhelming power and size, and starts being a good little pet... she'll just squash him! 

 The way she casually takes him is such a turn on, I love it! The rating should be at least fifty stars! * * * * * * * * * * *

  Please keep it going, I can't wait for the next update! *.*  

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2018 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a great story. I love when he first shrinks and he looks up at how high the desk is. Then he sees that suddenly the desk is only as high as her waist. How insignificant he now is.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2017 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Darn! I was hoping she'd already be wearing her cheerleading outfit.


It's so erotic reading about shrunken men being swept up by a giant cheerleader's pom-poms. ;-)

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2017 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really great to see another story from you! It's certainly been a while. Lollipop is still one of my all time site favorites, so it's good to see you back. 

 

Anyway, this started off great. I love when first chapters get into the action right away like you did here. I am looking forward to seeing the butt tag on this story get used soon.