[Report This]Date: May 15 2018 10:00 PM Title: Preparations and Plans
Really enjoyed this. I especially like "unhappy" endings like these for the protagonists. There is a lot more fun to be had here if you want to keep writing, I was surprised where it ended. I expected Tiffany to be Jugg's daughter and to see some more debasement of Yuri and Mary.
Thanks for the story, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm happy you liked it! I could definitely write more, and plan to at a later date (still have some other things to finish first lol). I was thinking of making Jugg's Tiffany's mother, but then realized that it wouldn't make sense for Mary and Yuri to have met her before hand so I didn't go with it.
[Report This]Date: December 26 2017 7:55 PM Title: Her Big Day
Please write a sequel
Author's Response:
I likely will, just not in the near future :)
[Report This]Date: December 24 2017 9:32 PM Title: Her Big Day
Awesome! Love that she gets to own Mary. Not sure how long she will last though.
Need a sequel so we can read all the delicious things Jupiter does with Mary *weg*
Great story!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Your the first person to tell me they liked the ending lol
With how popular this story seems to be I just might make a sequel, but I'm not sure just yet.
[Report This]Date: December 24 2017 3:23 PM Title: Her Big Day
Kind of a downer ending for the season but room for a rescue sequel if you want to go that route.
Good story though.
Author's Response:
I donno, I think Jupiter is happy lol
But yeah, who knows. I don't have anything planned as of yet but could very easily write more for these girls.
Thank you very much for your time, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: December 24 2017 2:00 PM Title: Preparations and Plans
I must say thank you for posting the chapters in such rapid succession, I didn’t have to wait too long to read the next segment. The only bummer is that it’s over, though I’m sure Mary will be well used by Jupiter for quite some time. ...One can hope for a “behind the scenes” short of her next film set, perhaps? *wishes upon a star*
Once again, another amazing story of yours, thank you!
Author's Response:
Your welcome! I had actually planned this to just be a one shot story that would have mostly been the shoot and what happened after it, but it grew more and more so before I knew it I had the entire thing done lol
I have nothing more planned for Mary, Yuriko, Tiffany or Ms. Juggs at the moment, but that could easily change. :D
Thank you for reading, I'm happy you enjoyed your time!
[Report This]Date: December 24 2017 9:21 AM Title: Her Big Day
Huh, i thought Mary played the role or a prop but not that she turned to become one in real. Anyway as much as i am jealous with Mary for being stuck between a driver seat and such an ass, i still hoped Yuriko somehow tried to still rescue her or the story continues with Mary gone or something. Sad that its already over.. now that Mary arrived where the "real" action starts ^^
Author's Response:
In the contract Mary was signed on as a prop, not to play one, so Jupiter was legally allowed to take ownership of her. Honestly I'm not versed in the intricacies of writing legal documents, but Jupiter's agency was about to word it as such without anyone else realizing it.
While this was intended to be just a one shot story it already grew to be four chapters long so the possibility of revisiting it isn't out of the question, just nothing planned as of yet.
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: December 24 2017 4:04 AM Title: Lights, Camera, ACTION!
Another great chapter for a butt lover like me, but i wonder why Mary is so audible when burried under a rear or even stuffed deeply into a vagina or asshole. speaking requires air surplus while she should have barly enough their to keep her body working, means barly enough to breath in the first place.
And even though you didnt add the unware tag to your story index, i would love Yuriko to obliviously sitting or stepping on Mary sometimes to then with big regret once she gets aware and such^^
But its ok if not, unware isnt everybodies think i assume.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm also very partial to da booty too :D
Mary's lines while inside Jupiter weren't suppose to come across as something anyone else could hear. Her tiny voice is most definitely muffled beyond any hope of someone hearing her (though Jupiter can feel the tiny vibrations) but in my haste to write and post this story I forgot to write those details in. For that I apologize. However, because Minimen are so small, their bodies are proportionately tougher than Humans and require less air, so she's good in that respect.
The only reason I didn't add the 'Unaware' tag to this story is because the cases of Yuriko accidentally doing something to Mary are only spoken about and not detailed in anyway, which I don't believe earns the tag, though I do like unaware stories if done right lol
[Report This]Date: December 23 2017 6:04 PM Title: Lights, Camera, ACTION!
I half expected her to decide to go anal instead
Author's Response:
She already got a taste of that lol
[Report This]Date: December 23 2017 2:04 PM Title: First Impressions
Well, I was going to say that you just needed a bit of sexual harrassment to make it like the real Hollywood, but after reading the second chapter, I see you’ve taken care of that already.
Author's Response:
Glad to make it feel authentic!
[Report This]Date: December 23 2017 1:09 AM Title: First Impressions
Hmm i really start to love this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks! It was fun to write :D
[Report This]Date: December 22 2017 8:40 PM Title: Preparations and Plans
Having grown up in Hollywood, I have always enjoyed stories on here set in the show business realm, and this one is no exception. Love your style, and the play on words with the title.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I'm glad to hear that I'm not misrepresenting the show business realm too much :)
I love clever word play, so I try to use it as much as possible when appropriate.