[Report This]Date: December 16 2017 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Extra-terrestrial
Now thats a very intressting turn in the story, from a simple tiny in giantland to the opposite. Still despite all the nice ideas and story like events, i do hope that the story doesnt entirly loose its erotical content. I know some stories here where it happened. Like "The final frontier" for example, with one giga woman arriving, a single buttcrush and from then an only a scifi story with absolutly zero sexuial content :>
Author's Response:
Don't worry, erotic content will remain (the main reason I began this story is to depict Zava and Mark's sexual exploits). Not in every chapter, though, as I like to build up some drama in between sexy episodes, so the erotica feels like deserved payoff. Stay tuned!
Date: December 15 2017 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 17 - A real Goddess
Thanks for the break from that last, steamy chapter. The erotic stuff is incredible, but it's nice to get into their heads as they contemplate the nature of their relationship.
Seems like there might be magical stuff going on in the 'women only' woods.
(You know, as Mark pondered the difficulties they face on this world, I had a thought that they might find a way to get back to Earth, where Zava would be an impossible-to-keep secret in a world where she's the only giantess. I think Zava would find her new home absolutely adorable!)
Sorry. Random thought. Maybe I'll write that version.
On second thought, didn't Zava have some kind of dream about being surrounded by little people? Maybe I dreamed that.
Author's Response:
Hold to your seats RainMan... you're on to something... wait till you see the next two chapters (catching up to that teaser)!
Date: December 15 2017 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Invention
Ha! That was awesome! Very inventive love-making by Mark. Maybe Zava needs to up her own game now. I guess she's lucky in that it's mostly pretty easy to get a guy going.
Oh, learned a new word here: ciurass. I thought it might be something nasty, but it wasn't.
People may think it odd that I review this story, since my name is on it. I hope everybody knows that paisalandia is writing this part solo.
Excellent stuff, as usual.
Author's Response:
Thank you RainMan. If it was not for the way you fleshed out Zava in your other story, this one may have never been written and I'd remain a lurker in GC. Just so you know, you seem to have some kind of ESP as per your other review...
Date: December 14 2017 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Mark
Yay! It's back!