Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2018 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Carpe Diem

I wonder if Zava could be secured inside an Antonov 225 to fly across the world :>

Author's Response:

I'm sure in 2035 in the timeline they live in they probably have civilian aircraft that could do the job, but it would probably cost too much for Mark (I know a little about this and an hour of flight from a 747 costs about $200 000 US dollars per hour, which with the roughly 3-4 hours it would cost to get from the east coast to LA would be close to a milliun bucks... )

Reviewer: Rainman1131 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2018 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mark

Hmm. I like all the comments your story is generating, though I don't always agree with them. For instance, I wouldn't agree at all that there is a lack of drama. I guess you could say that there is a certain linear progression to the story, with Zava and Mark dealing with the situation as best they can, while keeping up their wonderfully weird, steamy relationship.

I don't think you need to pull a rabbit out of a hat, and suddenly have Zava hurt someone, or have the military or the government make some kind of move on her. I think there is plenty of drama and anticipation about how everything will play out already. My guess is that as we are focused inside the warehouse with the happy couple, there are machinations going on in the outside world about which Mark and Zava are completely unaware.

Anyway, this continues to be a sexy, beautifully-written story, and I look forward to seeing how it all turns out.

I appreciate that you took my story as a starting point to yours, but as far as the erotic content and detailed writing are concerned, yours makes mine look like a tame prologue.

(I'm not putting myself down, mind you. I actually think I'm pretty awesome. :) I just mean I really love your story, and can't wait for more.) 

 

 

Author's Response:

Thank you for your comments, RainMan. I've tried to portray their relationship relatively realistic (with the caveats I've mentioned elsewhere like the limitations in worldbuilding and the necessary handwaving to physics sometimes), as a normal gal and guy in love, dealing with problems larger than them stemming from their size differences and their challenging environment, supporting each other when one of them needs it to make it through without breaking up and without going loopy as they try to enjoy life together the best they can. Neither Zava nor Mark are violent by nature, and things like stepping on a little person or crushing her/him with her body would really, I think, scar her irreversibly (as it would any normal person who ends another's life). Like I said elsewhere, I want them tohave adventures, but I do not want them to go through living hell.

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2018 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Zava in the 21st century

Its a great story from how it evolves and all but i have to say i miss the one element that almost all stories here have in common, more or less. I mean your story would be enough for a movie script with the romance, the intersize problems the travel from world to world but... there is no drama at all.

 

While i often think many stories have to much of it, that often bad things happen only to make anything to happen but in your story literally nothing happens.. sorry. I mean.. there could have been one human gts fan that could have sneaked through the military and get to close to the unaware Zava and get crushes while she role over, or an accident while walking the airport.. she could have landed on somebody right at arrival at the teleporation.

 

You had two or three lines with that mentioned nightmare of her wich at least for me where like the breaze of salt in an overall tasteless supper.

 

The Original story from rainman had it with the mean girl but your sequel so far has nothing even close to it. My no mean overfill your story with it but every now and then a little bit here and there..  some giantess related dramas would be nice.

Author's Response:

Hello. Thank you for the input! This is my first story ever and it shows.  When there is constructive criticism, I can address the problems in the story and I want to please my readers, of course, especially the ones that take the trouble to comment (much appreciated, BTW).  I've grown to love Zava so much that i've become maybe too overprotective with her. I think the story does have drama, of course, albeit perhapts too much internal conflict and not enough physical ones. Stay tuned, I've got a few aces up my sleeve.

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2018 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mark

I wish you best of luck. Im starting a life as a mother so i dont know when i will stop writting but i think soon.

Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2017 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Mark

Ah ok, cool. That was a typo on my part obviously. I fucking hate when that happens...

Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2017 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 26 - The Getaway

I'm curious as to how Zava will fair if she has to stay on Warth indefinitely. You mentioned in a previous chapter that a being as large as Zava couldn't possibly survive in Earth's gravity indefinitely, she'd eventually be crushed under her own weight. I think the dimensional rift will have to come back into play at some point to perhaps help solve this dilema. Then again, part of me doesn't want Zava on Earth, if only for the fact that humanity has a habit of ruining good things.. Part of me think's we wouldn't deserve someone as compassionate as her.

 

I hope Zava's stay on Earth doesn't taint her, I'd hate to see a caring character like her become cynical, jaded, or evn hateful..

Author's Response:

Ha! You just gave me an idea. If you notice, I have avoided mentioning the name the giants use for their own planet.  The earthlings simply calll it 'giantland'. Maybe I'll call it Warth! 

 

Just kidding. That's what Dr. Poole thinks. Let's see how it plays out. It is not in Zava's nature to be evil,so be easy on that count (let's just hope nobody messes with Mark on her watch, trust, me,they'll be sorry they did). 

Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2017 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Viral

Here's hoping for happily ever after!

Author's Response:

Life is going to be interesting for them from now on, that's all I can say!

Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2017 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Sweet memories

I love this couple's relationship so much. I'd like to think if I ever had a girlfriend or wife that we'd be as comfortable around each other too, I wouldn't care about her bodily functions, I'd actually see it as a bonding experience, intimate and sweet.

Reviewer: Rainman1131 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2017 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Larger than life

Mark's got a good idea there. Can't wait to see how it plays out.

Author's Response:

Zava's road to stardom will start to unfold from chapter 31 on.

Reviewer: Rainman1131 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2017 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mark

Very cool developments. Nice to see Betty back in the mix, too.