Date: June 05 2018 12:49 AM Title: Catching Up
Awesome chapter as always but... How van Veronica just pop up back into the world ? She has disappeared for quite some time, right ? Also, the end seems near for our main character... I was surprised that his escape route wasn't killing himself, because I can't see how he could have survived in the wild, but bow that he has lost his only friends, I don't see him keeping his will to live..
I may be too dark, however...
Author's Response:
Gina has a plan for re-integrating Veronica into society. Whether it's convincing or well-thought is up to the reader. As for the option of suicide, I just don't see it as viable for the protagonist after he survived six years through force of will. His story won't end for a while, as you'll discover in the coming chapters.
[Report This]Date: June 04 2018 10:35 PM Title: Apotheosis
Great stuff as always
[Report This]Date: June 03 2018 12:35 PM Title: Catching Up
I have the idea, how can I send it to you?
Author's Response:
At the top of my profile is a "Contact" link which will send a message to the e-mail I use for this site, just ID yourself so I know who it is.
Date: June 02 2018 6:46 AM Title: Aftermath
Glad to see that the other girls finally got a boost in height. I can't wait to see what happens next. Any chance that we see Gina trick a really tall girl into believing that she has a shrinking disease? Basically shrinking her bit by bit throughout the year.
Author's Response:
I can see doing something like that, but as a stand-alone rather than part of this story. If you want, send me a message with some details fleshed out and I'll have something by the end of the month.
Date: May 28 2018 11:40 PM Title: Aftermath
After this chapter I kinda want Gina and her friends to get what's coming to them
Author's Response:
Without spoiling too much: something along those lines is planned, but it's going to be a long time coming. Like, not even in this story.
[Report This]Date: May 28 2018 4:12 PM Title: Aftermath
Props on sanctimonious.
Also a great read.
[Report This]Date: May 05 2018 5:15 AM Title: Catching Up
Nice to see that at least somebody resists Gina's reign of terror. These evil people wipe out and bully tinies way to easily. I wonder if these egoist bullies have a conscience at all.
I really hope Kristie doesn't get crushed because of this.
Thank you for writing and until next time!
[Report This]Date: April 18 2018 11:06 PM Title: Catching Up
Really great to see an update on this story. I really can't wait for the next chapter. I also can't wait for the next school chapter as well. I'd be content about a story with Gina shrinking and growing people because she wants to or becaise of jealousy
Author's Response:
Always nice to read your enthusiasm. I'd like to do some one-offs about Gina terrorizing people, but I've had to put my other story on hold as it is. It really does sound fun to write though, so I might make some time soon for one.
[Report This]Date: March 28 2018 6:37 AM Title: Relations
This chapter really surprised me. It was a very good read and very well written. It was surprising to see Gina acting gentle and a little caring towards our main protagonists. I can't wait for the next chapter and to see what school is like along with these so called HUGE changes
[Report This]Date: March 19 2018 4:32 PM Title: Relations
Great to see Gina back.
[Report This]Date: March 19 2018 1:26 AM Title: Relations
Thanks for continuing this, its a lot of fun and I can't wait to see these huge changes to the pecking order.
[Report This]Date: March 13 2018 2:14 AM Title: Betrayal
Great to see this back.
[Report This]Date: March 08 2018 11:07 PM Title: Sorcery
My favorite part of this story is Gina's interactions with other people at her school. I'm wondering how many more towering girls are out there thanks to Gina's magic. I also want to know if there are any girls that are short because Gina kept them that way. Also the one thing that I want to see the most is how would Gina react to a new girl at school that just happens to be 8 feet tall naturally. Would she shrink her down because of envy? Would she grow her friends to outmatch her? Or would she shrink her to only a speck?
Author's Response:
Some of these ideas will be explored in the next school chapter, while others might get their own short story.
Date: February 06 2018 6:59 PM Title: Sorcery
Oh I thought this one had died o.O Actually kinda hyped to see it return!
Hi it's me again Vin!
Author's Response:
It's not dead, just resting :) I have a really hectic first few months every year, and updates should be a bit more regular now.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2018 6:19 PM Title: Sorcery
Great to see this back!
[Report This]Date: December 21 2017 3:17 PM Title: Schoolday
Now it starts getting interesting!
Thank you for writing this very good story! I really enjoy it, even though Gina is a bit mean.
Date: December 20 2017 2:39 AM Title: Catching Up
Or maybe her Aunt?