Date: May 11 2022 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 13
Esta historia deveria continuarse sobre todo porque sería una de las pocas dónde las gigantas tengan todas las de perder, ya que han matado a muchas con ese extraño dispositivo y falta la mitad eso y con otros métodos para exterminarlas y verlas morir como paso con esa Giganta que se trago a la mujer rubia con el dispositivo, eso sin contar descubrir cuál fue ese fenómeno extraño y un final feliz paro los protagonistas
[Report This]Date: August 13 2016 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
This was such an intense installment! The beautiful black giantess, sleeping by the river, the thunderstorm, the irresistible current, that was just amazing. I love all the dynamics of the flow of the water, her hair draping in the water, her hand lying just below the surface, and the panicked tiny people feeling their way around, wondering what they can get away with. This was just phenomenal.
[Report This]Date: August 13 2016 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
The first implication of a reason, a comprehensible reason behind these transformations is fantastic. This is very rewarding, so many chapters into the story, to realize this wasn't a bizarre accident without explanation, but something more insidious is afoot. And it seems counter-intuitive that something as large as a giddy, hungry giantess could surprise anyone, but now it makes sense. And because it makes sense, it's that much scarier, that you could be doing your best to hide out and sneak around, and a giantess could zero in on you from out of nowhere.
[Report This]Date: August 13 2016 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
I can't help being seduced by the disaster here, watching (yes, I feel I'm "watching"!) tiny people get casually crushed beneath monstrous body parts, sexuality taken way beyond extremes. The doses of realism really help keep everything perspective, too, like the confrontation as people scavenge for resources, as wary of each other as the new wave of giantesses.
[Report This]Date: August 13 2016 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
It's fun to see people slowly realize how fucked they are, the delight of this seemingly indestructible giantess as she assaults the public, how they cheer at the slight suggestion of retaliation, and how hapless they really are. Good job on the very subtle demonstration of sheer power, not recognizing a tank for its velocity and spin through the air, where it shouldn't be. Very well done.
[Report This]Date: August 13 2016 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
Excellent twist in the action, the first incident that foreshadows the world to come. And even in all this disaster, the horror of being eaten, there's the ever-present oversexuality of the gigantic woman. It's an excellent contrast that sustains, the threat of being eaten with the promise of mind-blowing sexuality. And I like how long it takes for the assembled crowd to "get it".
[Report This]Date: August 13 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love how the tension builds here, the transformation of young women suddenly succumbing to this unknown condition and the bizarre results. Exploring the ramifications of an oversized and unconscious giantess in the middle of the city is especially exciting here. And I love the slowly mounting panic as communication around the world paints a larger picture and pitches everyone into confusion.
[Report This]Date: August 13 2016 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the imagery here. You work very well to capture the surreal massiveness of a normal human grown to titanic proportions. The awe that normal-sized people must feel when these exaggerated features come into view, the anticipation as more is revealed, their incomprehension at their speed and power all comes across very well. I especially appreciate the contrast between how sexy they should be, from a fantastic reader's perspective, and how overwhelmingly lethal and destructive they are.
Date: August 23 2015 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
Any chance of finishing this great story
[Report This]Date: June 02 2015 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Best story on this website
Author's Response:
Ah ah i wish it were true :-) Glad you enjoyed it, Single ! :-)
Date: December 13 2012 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
This is a really fun series and extremely well written. Are you a professional author? Come on over and we can discuss your writing over dinner ;-)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! :-) No, i'm far from being a professional author ! Diner is a good idea, i'll bring the wine :-)
Date: August 18 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 11
You could of have one of the giantess insert a skyscraper into her vagina
Author's Response:
Mmmm... I'm affraid they are not that large ;-)
[Report This]Date: September 05 2009 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
David swallowed by a female Goliath? Seems almost sacreligious, somehow.
[Report This]Date: September 05 2009 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
As I already said in my pm?
Outstanding!
I'm off to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Well, these chapters have been written months ago, CC! i was just too lazy to upload... shame. shame.
[Report This]Date: March 27 2008 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 11
Hey great chapter. I loved the idea of being trapped in a cave with a hungry giantess waiting for them to try to escape w/ her mouth open before them like another cave as you put it. Great idea! Was a little bummed out about her dying before she returned to normal size. It would have been fun to see how our heros reacted to speaking with a former giantess. Great job man. Keep up the good work my friend :)
[Report This]Date: March 24 2008 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
A very good chapter. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: A very late response to your comment, angeloflife. But that allows me to warn you the next chapter is nearly ready for printing, after months of suspension. ;-)
Date: February 06 2008 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was d/loading every chapter and glancing thru the contents until I reached part 4; then it started to get complex and rather boring. I went to chapter 10 and it was still boring. Sorry. BTW Females are blonde NOT blond. Blokes are blond.
Author's Response: hehe, in that case, i'm glad you "glanced thru", my friend, and i did not waste more of your time! :-) rest assured that since English is not my language, there are far more mistakes than you can quote! :-)
[Report This]Date: February 06 2008 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Also adding, I like that you are keeping the language and reasoning for they're presense a mystery.
Author's Response: Agreed again on this, my friend. I guess i wanted the story to be about people, as much as about giantesses, in a strange quirky way. ;-)
[Report This]Date: February 06 2008 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic story, especially the imagery. While reading it, I can clearly in my mind see what's going on in an epic movie monster style of cinematography. Kudos to you for this excellent story.
Another note: I like that you chose to make it just a specific amount of women, and not all women like some other new world order stories. Having men and women share in this conflict together really brings this story to a more believable level of story telling.
Author's Response: thank a lot for the kind comment, jimbob! I don't know if the story can ever be believable, but i still prefer to have all of us into it, rather that just us blokes! :-)
[Report This]Date: February 05 2008 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
What can I say that hasn't been said; great story and of course what makes it all worth while, great vore descriptions. Let's face it, we love the vore.
Author's Response: I'm real glad you enjoy this one, ladyprey! Vore on a planetary scale is bliss, isn't it? :-)