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Reviewer: Naoru Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2017 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think you are a bit misguided here. When someone says that a character has two years in titan years, that character is a human. Is like saying that in human years, my dog is 3 years old, but in dog years thats 21 years. A titan that has two titan years is a two year old toddler, not an adult. Everytime the scale has been used on the stories is like that, and this comes from someone who has readen almost all of them.



Author's Response:

I see what your saying.. I'll make an adjustment back to Earth years to eliminate confusion.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2017 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 3

Very interesting development. The patience someone like Glendoria must have with political scum.

For me there is no greater reward when that sort of scum is put in their place by their own mistakes and the moment they realised they are fucked. The look in their eyes when they realise it is priceless. It will hit hard mentally. Gleebo is like Angela Merkel with the difference that the latter hides her evil.

The glowberries are like the spice melange from the game Dune. ;)

Curious what this Fayaa person is up to.



Author's Response:

Thanks again for another great review.  

I agree with your statements about the glowberries being akin to the importance that spice was to Dune. :)

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2017 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 2

Chapter 2 already, what a treat.

New interesting characters are introduced and we get a glimps I see of how this world works. And it seems somewhat peacefull overall, but I have a feeling that a storm is brewing seeing how those humans are treated by some.

I could see how one could worship such beauties. Glendoria and Lauria seem have very attractive personalities.

Good eye for details again of all that is happening there. There is much going on. :)

Hope to read more soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks a l ot Barrowman.. It's nice to get a review from you. :)

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2017 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. A Titan Federation story. This could be very interesting indeed for we now so little about it, but enough to want to know more about it.

Love the start too were we get a detailed look about 50ties 60ties Russia or Soviet Union life. Yegori's trip seems like an escape from those KGB types an his new exciting adventure begins.

I love how Mara captures the space ship. She's cradling like a mother would a child. Very beautiful imagery here.

Very good eye for deatil and history.
The lay out of that moon/planet his an interesting design too. Cool places like Venice, Rome, Paris, Rotterdam, etc are on the map.

Hope you continue this. There is just to much fetish posted here without a story in it that ruin the quality GW once had.
This story is a very pleasant surprise.



Author's Response:

I will definately continue this.  I'm bringing it over from Deviant Art so that I can become more sexually explicit with it among other things.

 

Thanks again Barrowman. :)

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