Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 11

I like it how you constantly in a subtle way raise interesting questions about life, society, and happiness. Happy pet vs happy slave vs freedom. They made a statue of her and she should embrace it. I'm glad she is thinking about how she can use her chess pieces most effectively with the priest. If she can get large groups behind her.... hehehe.

Funny what Yegori is thinking, they can invade the US, both not mother Russia. You have many more of these funny details.
The behavior patterns are of course always up to high standard realistic standard. Love the luxury Yegori's new home has.

Love the drawing with the whole stadium village and the picture of Glendoria with Yegori's luxery prison. 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2017 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 9

Love the planning that is constantly going on. You can just feel the tension in the air. The details are good, but I just can't wait before all hell will break loose. Love the holotech too. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2017 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 10

Poor derrick, the ride in her purse is always tough. You are at the mercy of her sway and the purse hitting her hips. It's a tough mode of transportation.
Greatly enjoyed Glendoria putting that lady in her place after she crushed those little thieves. I am sure their crushing happens all too frequently.
Loved how the veterinarian Dr. Crausey just declothes little derrick with even asking him. He is after all just a pet. The antibacterial dunking is quite logical. Who knows where these filthy pets have been.
Love how Dr. Crausey just rolls him around in her hand to check derrick out. Then she sticks a q-tip up his ass. After that she tells him to lie still. He obeys, well I guess so. Can you imagine disobeying Dr. Crausey?
Then she pins him to the table with her fingers and gives him a shot. Imagine that pain. Wow.
Having Dr. Crausey rubhis but with one finger must have been nice. Love how she talks to little derrick like he was a child. So demeaning.
When Mara or Glendoria bring Yegori in he will be in for a few surprises I guess. This was probably my favorite chapter. The lack of caring what the little people think was evident in a lot of ways. Either they get stepped on or they get a needle in the butt.It's painful.
Greatly enjoyed it,
Diesel

Author's Response:

No I can not imagine disobeying her when she's around 130 feet tall. He, he he.

You will be seeing more of her as the story unfolds rest assured.

I'm very happy that you liked this chapter.    And thanks a lot for the review Diesel. :)

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2017 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 8

We get to meet Ilsa for the first time and her darling daughther with her per Dorgi. ;) Mir with her joint is a nice thouch. :) The render of Mir and her joint is very nice. Love terrarium with al its functions. Their interactions are told in good detail.

Interesting set up and development of those many different characters and factions. All ingredients are there to feel some massive confrontations coming up. :)

Luckely for Earth humans, Titans aren't smart. The fact that Earthlings already have space craft, were as they think they still live in the stone age, should cause some alarm. But they have become complacent.

Please continue the story. Want to see were this all lead up too for Yegori and the this whole moon. :)

Author's Response:

I'm trying to continue it indeed.  It is a daunting affair when what has been already written in the scores of chapters before I decided to give this a try is uniquely challenging I'm finding. I'll do my best though Barrow.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2017 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 7

An interesting relationship between sheega and Lauria. Was not expecting that.

Author's Response:

Ha, ha!  Glad that I surprised you then. :)

Hopefully pleasantly. ;)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2017 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 5

We get a picture and a story of Matilda stomping little mort. He was weak anyway. I loved Mara ripping his steel door with her pinky finger. We are sooo small and weak compared to the titans. I can hardly wait till Glendoria gets him out. He will be terrified.
Great chapter,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Yeah, it would be quite intimidating to watch somebody tear a pressurized steel away like it were tin foil..  Intimidating indeed.

 

Thank you Diesel. :)

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2017 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 7

A very interesting conversation between Sheega and Lauria. For Sheega, her life has more advantages without all those equality laws Lauria proposes or without the chosen path full of peril towards these goals. For most humans there it would be a blessing compared to what they have now.

While this is all being discussed they have a beautiful scene together where size change/difference is being used. Master and pet, Lovers, friends, etc. Whatever they want to lable it, they have a good time. :)

Love render of 2 womens bodies and the most prominant feature, the rubber duck. ;)

Also good to see the area where Sol Posidein lies within the Empire and how close to earth.

Good writing and pacing. Can't wait for chapter 8.

Author's Response:

It will be posted soon.. I'm just spacing them out at regular intervals now. 

You've just reminded me that I've introduced Holotech to the colony so I have to bear that in mind for some of the future chatpers that I have planned.

Thanks a lot for the detailed comment Barrow, as I might have overlooked that and made a mistake otherwise.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2017 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter. Glendoria and Laurie are considered gods to the little humans. Now they build a statue. Perfectly logical conclusion for them. Your picture of the Giantess Sandler foot walking through their city really shows the size difference. They are gods, at least compared to the humans.
Lots of fun,
Diesel

Author's Response:

The pretty much are when you get down to it..  Vastly greater technology, more sophistication in industrialization, they live longer,  though on a cultural level that could be called into question..  And they are just massive compared to them.

Thank you Diesel.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2017 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 6

Sounds like animal farm. :) There are a lot of interesting clues in it and that is why I'm re reading it to see if I missed something.

It is those kinds of things that give it a feel of realism. Those small details and touches to the story. You are very good in the logistics of how this world and universe works. I want to know more and see where this adventure goes.

 

 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2017 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 5

There was not much left of Mort. Cool pov render.

An interesting window in whats to come and can't therefor wait for chapter 6. Interesting setting and can't wait for many more big confrontations. 
Lets see what Yegori's role is in all that is to come.

 

Author's Response:

Yegori will be a while in the making.. It's got to seem plausible so therefore the extended set up of many other characters who might play a role later on.

Thanks for hanging in there Barrow man. :)