



Date: June 20 2011 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
crushed by his best friend. ouch...





Date: August 14 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 3
Nice story, and nice how you involved the reader into the scenarios. I especially like how three of my favorite shrinking scenarios are involved: 1) trapped in a girl's shoe as she wears them; 2) avoiding being stepped on; and 3) FINALLY being crushed underfoot like a bug. And especially that the girl who snuffed "me" out wore flip-flops, my favorite kind of footwear for girls, and my "killing shoe" of choice, if you will.
Another favorite from me. :)





Date: July 04 2007 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ooh. Short, but you make good use of every word you've written. I very much look forward to seeing this continued; it's not often you see foot-play in this much delicious detail.
Date: July 01 2007 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic! Please continue! More feets ;)
Author's Response: cheers, will do, im just trying to remember everything i had in my head when i first thought of this one