Date: October 25 2017 1:03 PM Title: Dethroning A King
Miss Blaine will crush them under her shoe. Never bother a teacher or this will happen yo you.
Author's Response: Is that prose? Your little couplet may envisage the future,.. or it may not. You'll have to wait and see...
But to be fair, you aren't wrong. You never know when your teacher may have the power to shrink you down to size.
Date: October 25 2017 9:50 AM Title: Dethroning A King
Pretty good to see you back! Sorry for abandoning critics on Jo's Mouth by the way. Hopefully I'll be more aware of giving feedback this time.
And hopefully someone gets digested in this one ^^
Anyways, as always, big expectations from your very first chapter. Can't wait to see what you're up to. Hyped 100%.
Author's Response: Heyyy, it's been too long! Don't worry about disappearing; we all have our own lives to lead and stuff to do. Hell, I haven't written anything since Jo's Mouth concluded in June, and this is what I'm dubbing my Grand Return to writing, at least for the moment. As for someone getting digested, I know I play around with the Vore tag, but this story may just meet your desires... or maybe not. You'll have to wait and see, ;) Thank you as always for reviewing! I hope not to disappoint.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2017 6:48 PM Title: Dethroning A King
This has got to be the best description I've ever read in a giantess story, as far as the reaction of the protagonist when he realizes he's been miniaturized. This has taught me to try to do the same thing in my stories, your prose is amazing, you've definitely got the knack for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you! If you've read my other tales, you'll know of my penchant for description; especially when it comes to the intricate and often grisly or gross detail. It really helps to immerse the reader into the story, especially important in this genre, and I feel like a lot of writers sometimes don't do it as much justice as I'd like them to. That may just be personal preference speaking, I don't know; either way, I thank you for your kind words. It means a whole lot to me, and keeps me wanting to write. Stay tuned for more soon! :)