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Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2022 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: Down the Hatch (Part 1)

Ah I see, thanks for clarifying.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2022 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Down the Hatch (Part 1)

Will you be making the other stories with the giant Judy and Maggie available to the public?



Author's Response: If you mean the ones on my Patreon, most of those will only be there, but there may be some others I post here in the future too.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2021 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: Down the Hatch (Part 1)

It was nice seeing Maggie being their Mom's target for once.



Author's Response: It's probably her turn

Reviewer: steveg17 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 10 2018 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: Down the Hatch (Part 1)

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Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2018 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Down the Hatch (Part 1)

Got to say that the urge to see a giant Maggie terrorising Scott or a Blackmail equivalent to this is strong.



Author's Response: That could be interesting indeed

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2018 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 8: Mother of All Problems (Part 3)

Well, I guess this is the closest to an happy ending in Scott's world - he's probably the only one relieved that the story ends here ;)

Author's Response:

Scott's victories are generally just measured by how little he lost.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2018 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 8: Mother of All Problems (Part 3)

Thank you for writing the last addition, I really liked it.

This makes me wonder what kind of power hungry moves Judy will unleash upon this world that you wrote.

I also find the idea of a giantess Maggie very enticing.

 

 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed. While the events after this what-if are up to the reader's imagination, you can bet giant Judy and Maggie wouldn't just be sitting on their hands.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2017 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1: Down the Hatch (Part 1)

<3<3<3

10/10 - meereten01

This is exactly what I hoped would happen, as if you are reading my mind! 

Thank you for writing!



Author's Response:

Sure thing

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2017 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 7: Mother of All Problems (Part 2)

You grew her?

 

Bad idea for humanity.



Author's Response:

Judy at any size is a bad idea

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2017 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 7: Mother of All Problems (Part 2)

Wow.
I've never truly been an admirer of actual giantess stories. Usually prefer the shrunken aspect of things. However, Judy is the quintessential giantess, so her being an actual one feels right. But that's not why I like this better than most of the other giantess stories out there, why I'm so much so in favor of Judy being giant is because there won't be this endgame scenario where its her versus the military. But with her I could quite easily see the military/government working with/for her without a tedious battle. These are just my thoughts of course and if someone commissioned a battle then disregard.
I can totally see her or at least a woman like her that once she's giant she must have most of her normal amenities like a house of some sort at giant scale, clothes, food and pretty much whatever she's entitled too. Hell she could personally employ servants/personal assistants because she'd naturally be this town/city's empress or whatever gaudy title she could think of that is where her power play could come in... I don't know.

I'm happy somebody commissioned this because I don't have money that isn't accounted for now unfortunately. But if I didn't I would gladly pay to see this scenario fleshed out more.

Anyways I'm sorry for rambling but great story(the mother of all problems, awesome title). Would love it if you take a direction like this in your Time-Out series.

aaron
PS loved how you described her growth and the reactions to it. Also wish she could go up a bit more to 300'-400' so everyone is roughly an inch to her since that's seems to be her preferred size for her plaything/son.
Can't wait to see the third installment

Author's Response:

This is a pretty short piece obviously, but you have a good grasp of the idea; Judy has done this with the permission of the government, in this off-shoot alt-universe scenario.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2017 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 7: Mother of All Problems (Part 2)

Scott is normal size and can say "what the hell?" without Judy hearing him... hope it was worth the long wait :D



Author's Response:

Most likely not worth it

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2017 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 7: Mother of All Problems (Part 2)

I think Scott should exercise his new found agency as a full sized human to move. Somewhere nice like Antarctica...or the moon. Actually maybe not the moon. In this world Judy might just grow herself large enough to visit. 



Author's Response:

Basically any other direction would be preferable

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2017 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 6: Mother of All Problems (Part 1)

So is Giant Judy naked? It doesn't really say and clothes don't shrink with the person being shrunk, so they probably won't grow.



Author's Response:

Her clothes were grown with her here. The nice thing about these little alternate reality stories is I can pretty safely ignore a couple common sense things without much consequence ;)

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2017 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 6: Mother of All Problems (Part 1)

Thank you for the fan service!

I was secretly hoping this would happen.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2017 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 6: Mother of All Problems (Part 1)

Great idea, and I agree with Nostory. It really does seem like the natural culmination of what Judy and her buddies want, and this has potential beyond three chapters. It makes me wonder, what other "professionals and leaders" will also get this treatment, and how and where would they live? Finally, I'd recommend not mentioning anything beyond Scott growing in the description, to make it a surprise twist.

 



Author's Response:

It's definitely fair to say this kind of thing likely has entered the latent fantasies of Judy and company. For now, these three chapters will be the only peek into this reality, though I'm sure there are others in this side canon who will grow. I understand what you mean about the spoiler in the summary, but these chapters are brief and action-focused enough I wanted readers to be able to pick out a short story to read based more on the full concept.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2017 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 6: Mother of All Problems (Part 1)

I feel like this should be made canon,feels like the final step in Judy's plan. Make herself large and in charge, a group of normal sized people underneath and beneath them, little shrunken people to whom she'll be the size of a mountain. 



Author's Response:

Hehe. I'm sure this would be a popular canon, though it conflicts somewhat with what I have planned for the actual series

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2017 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 6: Mother of All Problems (Part 1)

.........Scott.....Scott's had a hard life.



Author's Response:

An understatement

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2017 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 5: Maggie's Turn (Part 2)

@HectorVanDyne Judy would be so proud :D



Author's Response:

She certainly would

Reviewer: sok06 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2017 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 5: Maggie's Turn (Part 2)

the final part is what i've been waiting for for almost a year



Author's Response:

Ha. Hope it was worth the wait

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2017 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: Down the Hatch (Part 1)

It's interesting to see that Maggie copes with this punishment by thinking of what she'll do to Scott. 



Author's Response:

Indeed, albeit a Maggie with the personality she had in the sixth story more than the current one

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