Date: July 03 2019 3:18 PM Title: Meeting the Ballerina
My complete stories are all on https://www.patreon.com/user?u=21572194
Thank you for encouraging me.
Date: November 10 2017 11:12 AM Title: Meeting the Ballerina
That was a great chapter, can't wait to see where the story goes next
Date: November 10 2017 1:57 AM Title: Meeting the Ballerina
Oh wow. Sure wish I could be like a rejuvinating insole for Annie so that maybe her legs will heal enough to walk if I spent enough time in her shoes. :) Great story so far and can't wait to see where it goes.
Date: November 03 2017 7:58 PM Title: Meeting the Ballerina
No No, I mean just like how she was trapped in the boots or the flats, but instead it's 6 inch stilettos
[Report This]Date: October 28 2017 11:40 AM Title: Meeting the Ballerina
Really enjoying this, the last chapter with a but of full size foot worship was a nice touch. Looking forward to more when you get the next chapter posted
Date: October 26 2017 6:59 PM Title: Meeting the Ballerina
Loved the shoe sole cleaning. I'd love to see more of that.
Date: October 21 2017 6:32 AM Title: Meeting the Ballerina
I absolutely love, love, love this story!!!! All your f/f theme stories are fantastic
Author's Response:
Thank you! Still a few more chapters to go on this one.
Date: October 13 2017 11:16 PM Title: Meeting the Ballerina
Awesome start
Date: October 13 2017 2:24 AM Title: Meeting the Ballerina
I like how this started out. I am sure a chapert on boots, maybe tennis shoes or what about a dinner party for work and Annie tags along under Marilyn's hose covered feet? Keep up the good work!
Date: October 12 2017 7:05 AM Title: Meeting the Ballerina
You’ve got a good premise here. It’s a fun contrast to the story you’re basing this off, where the main character enjoyed her torment but not externally; this character enjoys it and is willing to make it known. We’re pulled in quickly.
I like the attitude you give to Marilyn; I easily buy the characters in this odd world. However some of the dialogue maybe felt a bit awkward/formal or not realistic to human characters. Also, just be careful of verb tense consistency; I’d try to keep everything in past tense, but that’s just me. Good luck in continuing.
Author's Response:
Yeah I'll go over and do some corrections. English is not my first language so it's harder but I learn every day. Glad you like it so far! I do like all your stories by the way.
[Report This]Date: October 12 2017 5:29 AM Title: Meeting the Ballerina
Fan fiction of the insole gitl? Xmas came early this year!!!
For the record, I was thinking of commissioning something in the opposite direction, ie someone goes from some big city without shrinkers to some place where they are common, but this story will do - 2nd time in a few weeks that someone writes something akin to something I wanted to commission, can you believe it? :D
Author's Response:
I do! Glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: October 12 2017 12:28 AM Title: Meeting the Ballerina
really glad to see you take on this world. Very exited to what Annie has gotten herself into. Alwaye exited to see a new story from you.
Author's Response:
:) My latest story called "forgetting amy" was a hard one to write this one is more positive.