Date: October 02 2017 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really love this. Please keep up with it you have a faithful reader in me! :)
Date: October 02 2017 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very cool story. Loved the fear that pod showed. Loved Natasha and that she wears heels. Most mature women do. pod is very lucky.
Will Natasha set up a safer place for him to live? Maybe an aquarium or a gerbil cage? Will she have rules that he must follow for his own safety? Does Natasha have neighbors who may not be as nice?
Love it,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: October 02 2017 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely LOVELY !
I loved every paragraph, how you describe Pod's feelings, but even more how you describe Nataha's ones. She seems like such a caring person, finding him helpless and fragile only seems to enhance her desire to protect and nurse him.
I've already noticed that in the end Pod is less affraid of her than at first. But he still has a long way to go, and although his psychiatric condition's evolution is slow, it is already progressing and that is nice to see.
I think her reaction was the best she could have, between acquiescence and authority, this is purely adorable. Also, she's gorgeous, it appears that she is everything he could have dreamed of. Except she's a giant to him.
I am really looking forward for more, it'll be awesome to see how the two of them will adapt to the other. Will their behavior evolve in such a way that they'll get along well ? Is he going to fully accept her, or entirely freak out ? Will she continue to support and help him, or is his lack of cooperation going to upset her ?
I already have an idea, but I'll wait to see what you want to do, I don't want to influence you. Just know that this first chapter was fantastic, and I hope to see more soon. Take your time and make us enjoy it !
Thank you again !