Reviewer: Plasmids22 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 10:38 PM Title: How Mrs. Ryder ate Peter

I must say after reading this story that you capture everything that I have ever imagined a giantess predator to do! I short I love your story!

I loved the way you made character Mrs. Ryder just so seductive, gentle and predatory. I fell in love with this character. And as for Peter, his willingness to be eaten by her brought me willingness as well. I so wanted to trade places with him!

I really like how in the story she gave him a week to decide, instead of just eating him right there. The suspense just killed me and I just had to find out what happened next.

And when she told him to speak up nd state why he was here - Peter: "So you can eat me, Mrs. Ryder". Was something I wasn't expecting a predator to ask of her prey and I loved it.

All around great story, the sequel was also good too. However, I really like the willingness of the prey and I would love to read a sequel to the stories with another willing Vore prey item.

Great job, please keep up the good work!

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2009 1:21 PM Title: How Mrs. Ryder ate Peter

So far this is my favourite of all the stories I've read on this site.
The older experienced woman subtext is very appealing. I like the puns for the names of the chemicals too.

Author's Response: Thank you timescribe, that's incredibly kind! I'm (very slowly) working on a story about another middle aged woman who has similar tastes in young men as Mrs Ryder.

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2008 3:38 AM Title: How Mrs. Ryder ate Peter

Hello again. Many thanks for your reply to my review. I am also English, and as you can see on this marvellous site, I've written quite a number of stories, but those are not my only subject. Perhaps you also write or think of other topics.  I'd very much like to share our interests. They are, of course, primarily of the Femdom variety that includes cannibalism.   I'd gladly let you have my email address if you are interested.

Reviewer: girlfood Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2008 1:20 PM Title: How Mrs. Ryder ate Peter

Great story bro! I love willing vore.

Reviewer: tuyulboy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2007 1:54 PM Title: How Mrs. Ryder ate Peter

thank's for sharing this story. just few stories i found, about willingly prey, like this one. many vore stories i found, the prey always scream "please don't eat me".

But this story 

He raised his voice a little "so you can eat me mrs. Ryder"

i love your story. But development too fast. i prefer slow shrinking, Peter could play with mrs. ryder ..longer

may you make another story, willingly prey, slow shrinking version?

thank's alot 

 

Author's Response:

Thank you tuyulboy and jujubee. A second chapter?!! These things don't write themselves you know, but as you've asked, and as I enjoyed writing it so much, I have now started a part 2. Hopefully I'll finish it by the end of the year.

Must warn you though tuyulboy that the prey may not be quite so willing this time. As for slow shrinking, I don't know how I'd write that. For me, it's the swallowing that matters most.

Your English is very good for a non English speaker. Try writing a story youself: Slow shrink and willing prey. I'd certainly read it!