Date: September 12 2017 5:00 AM Title: What Happened To Alli?
Pretty good short violent story. Descriptions are your strong suit, I could picture the grisly details. Don't know how well this would work if you decide to continue this story tho, I'm of the opinion that violent gts works better in short stories, whereas gentle in longer ones.
Basically since violent gts almost always dictates that characters will be fodder the story needs to be carried by ONE character, namely the giantess. So if she's not super interesting besides being a killing machine or you someone find ways to keep tiny characters alive long enough to develop them the story doesn't keep my attention generally speaking. But I'm sure I'm in the minority here...
BTW, I get a DNS error when I try to access your Patreon page, the link in your Author info isn't working. Make sure it works, alot of people (myself included) might donate on a whim but are too lazy to look someone up on patreon, not to mention patreon's search is terrible.
Another tip, if you're gonna direct people to your patreon page in the chapter end notes anyway, why not put a link to it right there too? Remember, people are lazy, the less excuses you give them to not look you up, the easier it'll be to get more patrons.
Author's Response:
I had thought that was a link, did it fall off?
Have you read The Realm of Haile? This is a short side story from that main story, currently 120k words strong and I've been getting a lot of good reviews about my version of a violent giantess. ^^
Thanks for the review, advice, and such. I'll have a look at the things.