[Report This]Date: September 12 2017 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
I feel like being sick, so while it's taboo, I'd love for the sister to tape him to the bottom of one of her feet and give her other brother a nice, slow footjob.
Author's Response:
Not gonna happen. I'm not doing any incest stuff in this story. I'll keep the idea in mind if I ever write a story with a couple and a tiny that are not related in any way, shape, or form.
[Report This]Date: September 12 2017 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 2: Meet the Family
Awesome chapter! The family's smug attitude in handling Adam is great. You're an excellent descriptive writer.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you like it and smug is what I'm aiming for!
[Report This]Date: September 12 2017 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 4: Flattened Fry
amazing chapter! keep it going. wouldnt mind seeing mom and dad take their tiny boy into the bedroom for a lil sexual play. maybe put hiim in a condom and see how good he swims in a man size load:) def more feet stuff is welcomed. best story i have read on thise site
Author's Response:
Thank you, I appreciate it. There won't be any incest stuff in this story like that but I'll keep the idea in mind if I ever write a story that doesn't revolve around family members.
Date: September 11 2017 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
What do your think about the idea that the family abuse adam sexually with their feet? I don't know if your want incest in this story but i think it Will be a nice bonus
Author's Response:
Will the family abuse Adam with their feet? Yes. Will they sexually abuse him in anyway, using their feet or otherwise? No.
[Report This]Date: September 11 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
Yessss!!! Keep this going just how you're doing it!!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! How you do the FM/m is perfection! It's a masterpiece. The only this that would make this above perfect is if the mother or sister would use their 🔥🍑🔥 giantess butt to punish him. I can NOT WAIT to read more! Your score can only go to 10... but if I could I'd give it a 20. The only thing I want is for it not to end hahaha 😅
Author's Response:
Thank you, I appreciate it.
Date: September 10 2017 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
Why do you write the brother as if he is another sister? You may benefit from making it just a F/m story which will also boost your audience.
Otherwise your writing is good and interesting
Author's Response:
???
Not really sure what you mean by that...
I know FM/m and FM/f stories aren't the most popular and that I am limiting my audience and who this appeals to but I wanted to write something different. If you want to read a F/m story (not tring to sound like a d**k here), this isn't the story for you. I'm sorry about that. It will focus mostly on F/m but there still will be some FM/m going forward.
Thank you though for the compliments!
Date: September 09 2017 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
i cant wait to see where thise goes and how many family memebers get involed! love the feet parts and being stuffed in shoes! keep it going
Author's Response:
It's going to center around feet so plenty more experiences with feet and being stuffed into shoes are coming up.
[Report This]Date: September 09 2017 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
Awesome story
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: September 09 2017 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
I personally would love it if you shrank Eric down as well and let the mother have on and the sister the other. That would be an enjoyable way to keep everyone involved!
Author's Response:
I'm not sure about that happening in this story but I'll keep it in mind and who knows what might happen. The story will most likely focus mostly on the mom and sister going forward.
[Report This]Date: September 09 2017 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
I love your story and your awesome chapter contributions at Writing.com. Your stuff involving a tiny son being engulfed by the powerful and stinky feet of his family, especially his mom, is great. I'd love to see this son eventually shrink away to nothing from smelling his mom's feet. He'd just be sweat and scrunched away.
Author's Response:
I think you have me confused with someone else. I do know what you are referring too though. This story was inspired by some of those chapters but with my own twist on it. I had read Writing.com and (with that author's permission) wanted to bring a story like that to here as I had noticed there weren't really any like it here.
Thanks for the review!
Date: September 09 2017 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 2: Meet the Family
Good start so far. It's a very capable take on this hyper-specific subgenre within a subgenre. There's definitely a tonal commitment which keeps the reader from questioning the actions of the antagonists, so it's a nice action-focused read.
A couple little points. The foot action is fun but leans on a lot of the same couple of adjectives a lot of the time. Nobody's saying you can't do that in bursts (God knows I do it a lot myself) but if the story is foot focused, you'll probably want to find a couple more ways to keep the descriptions fresh. Also, unless the all-capitals dialogue for giant characters is something you personally really dig, I'd advise switching it back to lowercase; it never comes off well in other stories.
Again, solid beginning. You obviously have a firm grasp on the direction of this thing.
Author's Response:
I really appreciate the review and feedback. I really enjoy the stories that you write.
I'll make sure I'm more conscious about same adjective usage going forward. It was something I was aware of initially but I hadn't realized how much I relied on the same adjectives. I got a bit carried away. I'll try to find different ways to describe the descriptions to keep it fresh as you said. The all caps dialogue is supposed to be just when he is near one of the giants' faces but I can see how it can kind of throw off the story and I'll probabl refrain from doing it in future chapters.
Thanks again for the review!
[Report This]Date: September 09 2017 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
Please add some giantess booty!! Lol and I LOVE how this story is going and how it's set up! FM/m is awesome. And it's his own family. Since he's so different from them it would be even better if he found out he wasn't related to them at all 😂😂😂. But please add giantess butt 😍🍑
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're liking it so far. We'll see, haha.
[Report This]Date: September 08 2017 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
Really great start. Keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: September 07 2017 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
Wow man. Just Wow. I like this kind of stories so much when someone becomes the tiny of his family. Love the footplay so much! I hope he Will be the slave of all the family members ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. The whole family is going to get involved with him soon as I plan to have him encountering all of them.
Date: September 07 2017 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
Love this already. I hope you don't just concentrate on feet bit this is an excellent start. Bravo.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, glad you like it. It's probably going to center around him at his family's feet but I'll try my best to include more than just feet.