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Reviewer: Rude Zude Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2021 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is great, her attitude towards him is by far my favorite part!



Author's Response:

Thanks for giving it a read! I'm glad you enjoyed. Her attitude is probably my favorite type of attitude for a giantess to have. Playful but total domination is so great. 

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Screw the contest, you've got to keep writing this! Absolutely amazing, loved it!

Reviewer: sm7in Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2017 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was a really neat way of getting to the action quick while still making it a really fun piece following a relationship evolve. Loved the correspondence and the fun little ending tease lol. Sequal looks like an awesome idea ;)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the way I handled that. I tried to "millenial" it as much as I could even though I'm well out of that age group now. 

The idea of a girl sending laughing emojis at me right after farting on my entire existence is unbearably hot though.

Reviewer: Stephen1000 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 06 2017 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved it. Is another girl gonna take him to tennis practice with her cause that sounds like fun. Hope u continue this story

Author's Response:

Hmmm I hadn't even thought of that. If Rachel has this power, can she make him materialize anywhere when he shrinks? Could be interesting. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: curttehmurt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2017 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

this was so rad, but I feel somewhat cheated that we didn't get to see him experiance tennis practice, or maybe her taking an emergancy dump while he's stuck down there. my point being there's alot of potential for another chapter and I hope it happens



Author's Response:

Ahahah, sorry for leaving you feeling wanting. Like I said, this story was a submission for a contest where we had a 2,000 word limit. Trust me I could've kept going with these two forever. I'll try and add more. I'm glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2017 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

As an ass man myself I really enjoyed this. Doubt it's in the cards but wouldn't be opposed to another chapter or another story with these two characters.

 

Also what's the deal with the butty July submission things? I had never heard about it. Is there a site that has a collection of stuff for it?



Author's Response:

High five to a fellow ass man! I'm glad you liked the story. Who knows if I'll add more, I really liked writing Rachel. That whole thing is basically one of my biggest fantasies. 

 

Butty July was a writing contest we do based on Twitter. There were quite a few submissions. You can find them all here.

 https://sites.google.com/view/buttyjuly17/home

 Follow @SizeRiot on Twitter. Our next contest is going to be Unaware October. I'm going to try and do two submissions for that as well :)

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