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Reviewer: curttehmurt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2017 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love it, I love it so much

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2017 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

loved this story, hope to see more. I enjoy unware plots the most.

Reviewer: pete445 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2017 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you so much for this epic story. It was a bit short, and you shoult shorten the double rows to a single empty row, but this story was fantastic. FINALLY a great unware plot with mirco and scat. The plot idea is so unique and fantastic. I LOVE unfortunate plots more than anything, where something goes horrible wrong. Please continue! and write more! you seem to be a great author.



Author's Response:

You're very welcome, thanks for the kind review! 

 

The story is short because it was an entry for a contest that had a 2,000 word limit. Believe me I had to do some serious editing to get it under 2,000 words. 

 

I should probably do the rows edit, but I am very lazy. I'm sure Word or Scrivener have an option to do it for me that I haven't figured out yet.

 

Thank you so much for the praise though, I'm glad you liked this. Butts are my bread and butter so I'm sure I'll write more in the future.

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