Date: September 12 2018 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
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[Report This]Date: September 08 2017 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
On the bright side, whomever buys Wanda will probably treat her better than her Ex Friends. Relatively speaking anyway.
Author's Response:
That's basically her only hope now
[Report This]Date: September 08 2017 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
This story was sickening and amazing. This story is why I read macro stories.
Author's Response:
This one definitely seemed up your alley
Date: September 08 2017 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the concept and writing but damn the ending is so unsatisfying. Please, the roommates need to get what's coming to them.
Author's Response:
Hehe. Well, when a story is commissioned to go a certain way, your hands are pretty much tied. Glad you liked it up to then.
Date: September 06 2017 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Wanda, those are some horrible "friends" she has. They don't even seem interested in doing the vlog anymore.
Author's Response:
Minds can change quickly around a tiny.
[Report This]Date: September 05 2017 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi, Jacksmith. When you write continuation of the story "Time-Out-7"? I miss Judy.
Author's Response:
I'm currently pretty focused on commission stories, but Time-Out 7 will probably be the next of my regular stories to return.
[Report This]Date: September 05 2017 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
Hi there :}
I really like this story so far, has lots of potential. I hope to see it continue, will be checking for new chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks. There will be more of it soon.
Date: September 03 2017 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sure would be a shame if Wanda snuck a dose of the shrinking drug into her roommates coffee
Author's Response:
If she can get high enough to reach it, anyway
[Report This]Date: September 02 2017 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I must say I am really enoying the casual conversations the girls are having and how they are leading into the interactions with wanda.
You're writing is superb, but it is always is so it almost goes with out saying. I'd rank you up their with DX Machina as some of the best wordsmiths around.
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks. The ignorant, passive conversation taking place while Wanda suffers was definitely a big part of this one's intention.
Date: September 02 2017 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ooooh, last straw! Would love to know what form Wanda's rebellion could possibly take.
Author's Response:
Given her size, it may not be much
Date: September 01 2017 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love what you have done so far Jacksmith. I cant tell too much just from the intro but what I'm seeing so far is fanastic! :)
I love the tiny details sprinkled all over, what her friends were wearing and their expressions it really allows you to get a picture of the whole place.
The characters themselves seem awesome as well. You didn't just make them all roar stomp and evil but made what you intended them to be. Desperate people who wanted to use shrinking to get some free rent basically so they dont come out 1 dimensional.
Great work! Keep it up :)
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks. A lot of the intention here was to create a casual environment of semi-believable individuals, at least for the opening.
Date: August 30 2017 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great so far. Love the quick setup and dynamics, and I think it's a really fun idea. Curious where it will go, and if there's any vlog at all.
Author's Response:
Thanks! More of this will be up soon
[Report This]Date: August 30 2017 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start! But...the game was rigged. Somehow. I think we'll find out later they'd planned on Wanda shrinking all along!
I wonder if there's a way to reverse the effects. Perhaps Wanda should've spent more than 15 minutes on research.
Author's Response:
There's a bit of this one left up to the reader's imagination, but there are some bread crumbs to be spotted. You're right she should've spent more time looking it up