Date: October 04 2017 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 15
I thought she was going to share him at the office, and I kinda miss that it didn't happen.
Aaand his shrinking spurts are a bit too fast, unfortunately for poor Ms Hoshoku he won't last long.
There, I had to go out of my way to say bad things about this story :D
Author's Response:
It's fair to feel how you feel about the end. Ultimately this was a commission order, so it had a predetermined story path.
Date: October 02 2017 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can we know Hoshuku's final size? :)
Author's Response:
We'll hear in the last chapter
Date: September 25 2017 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
Still no guesses about the outfit? nobody? Well, "chi fa da sè fa per tre", so...
1. gym outfit; would explain the importance of showering himself...
2. some kind of, uhm, "predator" -- tiger, cavewoman
3. something that should be only worn at home, say, nightgown and pink fuzzy slippers
Author's Response:
All possible but none exactly correct ;)
Date: September 23 2017 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
When I opened up the site today, I was hoping to see a new chapter of this story. I like that there was another. I like the focus on ass in this story, relative to the feet that I often see in your works. I hope it continues in this direct, with more interaction between ben and other co-workers. I can see a future where men are the more vied for gender. With fewer of them around, at a lesser stature. Becoming second class citizens, yet, the minority.
Author's Response:
The action focus of this one is definitely much different than my usual. The rest of the story will focus a bit more on solely Ben and Hoshoku, however, though we will get a bit more of the societal alteration as well
Date: September 21 2017 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Totally understand, Jack. I appreciate your response!
Date: September 20 2017 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Jack, I have to say that you are a supreme wordsmith. You know your craft. That being said, I really hope Ben gets at least 1 bone. Mariah is such a bitch and it doesn't seem he deserves all that is coming to him. Relentless abuse can get tedious. Just my 2 cents. Thanks for listening!
Author's Response: I appreciate your thoughts. While the relentless abuse is understandably not everyone's cup of tea, this story was purchased as a commission, and so is following a specific guideline from the commissioner.
Date: September 19 2017 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
After chapter 11 I was tempted to ask about Kendra - is she coming to the rescue? will she notice he looks distressed make him explain what happened? (I didn't ask because it sounded too similar to a previous comment of mine)
Turns out the answer was very surprising - as usual :)
Author's Response:
This story's world is basically a nonstop series of unfortunate turns for Ben and a loss of what small blessings he previously had
[Report This]Date: September 19 2017 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 12
I hope Ms. Hoshuku punishes them for playing with her lapdog without permission.
Also, really glad i got to read the latest chapter before hurricane maria hits tomorrow, i've really been enjoying this one.
Author's Response:
Hehe. Unfortunately for Ben, it may be possible that Ms. Hoshoku can be a sharing person when it comes to her fellow giants
Glad you've been enjoying; I appreciate the commentary
Date: September 13 2017 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
He probably must feel bad if he can't even hold her, but I'm willing to bet
she will congratulate his performance instead (and he will wish she didn't).
Even worse, according to the tags this story is going all the way down, to an inch and below - I can't wait to see that! (and everything before that)
PS "displaying him in the afterglow his own..."
Author's Response:
The majority of this story is definitely spent with Ben at a comparatively larger size, like he is now, but by the ending we'll see him at a size much closer to the usual kinds of stories I write.
And good catch.
[Report This]Date: September 10 2017 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
I've really been enjoying this. I at least hope Ben 's boss takes good care of her favorite lap dog, financially at least.
I really wish i was in a position to ask for a commission story too.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Ben can only hope.
Well, if your position changes, my inbox is always open.
Date: September 09 2017 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm trying to imagine Ms Hoshoku's reaction if she found out about Mariah&Ben in the elevator... mostly because it's less tantalizing than waiting for the marketing campaign :)
If (IF) I remember I'll try to comment a bit less here - I do love the story, but I'm disturbingly close to writing 50% of its comments, and it feels disturbing.
Author's Response:
We may yet get to see how Hoshoku reacts to others "using" Ben.
Ha! I mean, I appreciate getting feedback no matter the number of sources. This one seems to attract fewer opinions than some of the other custom stories I've been posting recently.
Date: September 07 2017 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
A gentleman would hold her weight, but I'll forgive him because he was taken by surprise... seriously, I love this story!
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it. More's on the way soon.
Date: September 04 2017 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
After Judy Stevens I thought her subtle game was the best, but these chapters look like they're proving me wrong.
@AnonymousCommissioner I owe you a drink or something
Author's Response:
Ha! Well, to be fair, Hoshoku's subtle game gets more and more unsubtle with each chapter now.
[Report This]Date: September 04 2017 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is by far my favorite story of yours. Reminds me of another favorite of mine - A Growing Body of Knowledge by Littlemac. Please don't lose interest on this and keep going!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I can see some of the parallel with littlemac's story. I've only posted half of the story so far; the rest will be along fairly soon.
Date: September 02 2017 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
Tune in next time to see Ms. Hosoku use the drug's mind control capabilities to shut him down make him do some other humiliating thing.
Author's Response:
More or less, yes.
[Report This]Date: August 31 2017 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: August 30 2017 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
That final question is probably the most unexpected dialogue I've seen in your stories (and that's after many surprises coming from you)
Author's Response:
It's definitely meant to stop one in one's tracks
Date: August 29 2017 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Jack... just wanted to say I'm a big fan of your work from way back. I don't think that there is a more accomplished writer on the site. Liking the story so far and I'm looking forward to seeing how the plot develops.
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks very much. There will be more of this one very soon.
Date: August 28 2017 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
You need to write faster. It's well done
Author's Response:
Thanks. The new chapter is up now.
Date: August 28 2017 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
I have a thing for powerful businesswomen (and lawyers), so this will be great.
Author's Response:
Well, this one's definitely all about power in the business and the women.