Date: May 23 2022 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 24
"Dark clouds packed together and low rumbles became more intense gradually.in the sky when two insanely powerful females were about to clash with eacht other."
"But that wasn't Siren's desire, though."
The end was a little more nebulous than I thought but given it was about absolute universal powers it may be par for the course.
Author's Response:
Hey thx for pointing out the typos!
I have no idea how those slipped through the grammarly check.
And thanks for following the story to the end. Hope it was entertaining for the readers.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2022 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
"[...]she was the only one who stood between Lizzy and total domination over the entire planet. Nothing could oppose her" - Well that ain't true. Granted, Christi doesn't know that. One would think a City-spanning Battle wouldn't go unnoticed but if Siren wants to be unnoticed she probably instantly is the most forgettable person ever.
I didn't expect Siren to show up and stop the "Battle". But maybe it wasn't all that interesting to watch after Emily had been utterly bested like that. "Infinity Girl" surprised me though. Wasn't she decidedly NOT the Power-hungry Type?
I wonder whether Christi would raise to supreme deity status if the other three ended up destroying each other or would the Amulet end up giving its power to another girl yet again? (It seems like the amulet cannot be used by men for some reason. Why that might be... :P )It is still very enjoyable how you write these superpower fights. Even if a flurry of punches and kicks with literally earth-splitting force behind them isn't all that creative. Granted, it probably gets the job done more often than not.
Author's Response:
Christi was not aware of the existence of Siren at that
moment. So yeah, it was logical for Christi to assume that both Emily and Lizzy
were the most powerful beings on the planet at that moment.
And power corrupts anyone, even someone like Emily. So it was not hard for her
to come up with a name like that.
Yup, no male can drain power from the amulet. You know why?... I have
absolutely no idea.
I never bothered to write more specifically about the properties of the amulet.
To be honest, I was already done with this story when I finished chapter 8.
But for some reason this story stayed quite popular on my patreon page. People
kept asking for more chapters. So more chapters I wrote, even though my heart
was not in it anymore.
But the end is nearing. Only a few more chapters before the final chapter.
Thx for your extensive review and for liking this story, and thx for the
compliment about the fights 😉
[Report This]Date: November 28 2021 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 22
I completely forgot that this story existed, albeit I quite like it.
It's still enjoyable enough to read six chapters after one another at once.
I didn't expect so much flip-flopping as far as power goes, but it's interesting to see the powers used for good for a change. (If Lizzy, Emily and Christi were equal in power they would have the typical archetype relationship Supervillian "the Demon" Lizzy, Superheroine "Infinity Girl" Emily and Christi is the character who chooses and changes allegiances as she feels like and changes the outcome due to the immense scale-tipping she brings to the table. Granted, that's obviously not the case.
(I do NOT want an answer whether that's true or not-)
I have the suspicion that Siren is Lizzy's Future Self by now.
Author's Response:
Hey! Thanks for still liking this story!
And don't worry, I won't spill a thing ;)
Date: April 03 2021 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow what a role reversal this is !!!
Lizzy, the once almighty goddess is now nothing more than a speck of dust on her sister's toenail I love it !!
Lizzy seems to be at her rightful place since she has lost the amulet. I hope she will worship christi's feet at microscopic size too. And why not involving her at micro size deep into the confines of Siren's boot ? Siren clearly said she would kill her if she didn't claim the amulet back. So maybe Lizzy will have the same fate like the shrunken city in her boots ?
Author's Response:
Haha, yeah, I bet Lizzy didn't see that coming! Siren will definitely return in the story later on. For now Lizzy will have to deal with being stuck on a toenail.
Thx for the review!
Date: January 30 2021 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wouldn't it be more natural to compare Siren's Combative Prowess with a "skilled MMA Fighter" instead of going for a specific brand?
That may just be me as I had to google UFC first though.
Interesting that Siren acts like Lizzy's the focal point of some prophecy as that normally includes a savior against something you cannot handle. What could Siren be up against that she just isn't able to beat? The Q-Continuum perhaps?
Given her threat Lizzy needs to get way stronger and that fast.
Either that or unlock a some (fairly potent) kind of time stretching.
Author's Response:
Thx for the review!
Actually, I find a common term like 'mma fighter' a bit boring to write.
I do know what you mean, though. Using a term like that makes it more
Reader-friendly as most readers know what an mma fighter is.
I always try to find a good balance between readability and the terms I use to describe something or someone as good as possible. To compare Siren with a skilled mma fighter gave me the feeling I was selling her short. I wanted to compare her with the best of the best. And that's where ufc comes in.
As for the story; there is only one thing that Siren cannot beat, but that will be reveiled later on in the story.
Date: January 05 2021 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
Save for the end that chapter really reminded me of the short fight between Mary and Hancock in the Movie Hancock.
I've a question though. I Christi now in the boot of the unknown Super-Woman as well?
Author's Response:
Hancock! :)
I definitely did not had that movie in mind while writing this, but now that you mention it...
What made you think that Christi is in her boot? This is a random city where the two girls are fighting, not their hometown.
But no, Christi is not in her boot. She's probably still having fun with the other shrunken cities in the meantime :)
[Report This]Date: October 30 2020 4:46 PM Title: Shocking news
Great story, absolutely love it. Hope that Lizzie achieves everything she has plans and becomes truly omnipotent
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Hey thx!
Glad you like it!
We will see.... :)
[Report This]Date: February 17 2020 6:44 PM Title: We will meet
More chapters please! Love this story!
Author's Response: Thx! And more will come!
[Report This]Date: December 09 2018 3:28 PM Title: Shocking news
A true giantess materpeice! And I really hope there are still many more chapters to come! :)
Author's Response:
Hey thx for the review MacroGod!
Appreciate it!
Well, this is my first story, so it will always have a special place in my heart.
But, I also want to be honest with you.
My main focus atm is the Brobdingnagian birthday story, so I will mainly updating that one the upcoming time.
However, I do not wish to rule out the possibility of future chapters for Power Corrupts.
Many thx again for the kind words!
[Report This]Date: November 16 2017 2:02 PM Title: The Game
Finally, I was waiting anxiously for a continuation :)
Evil and playful as I love, the scale is Ok. The plot is unpredictable and unexpected.
Thank you for writing :D
Author's Response:
Glad your so enthusiastic!
Your welcome!
[Report This]Date: September 05 2017 1:06 PM Title: Lizzy's rampage
One of the most exciting story I have ever read!
Perfect balance of (almost) gentle and evil, really interesting their ability of shrink not just whole cities, but also planes, cars (and ships, I suppose :D ) at their will.
Interesting the episode of unaware destruction of small things by other women.
Thank you for writing this story, one of my favorites!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for those kind words! Appreciate it a lot. Your welcome, but the pleasure is all mine. I realy enjoy writting this story
[Report This]Date: September 04 2017 7:37 PM Title: Lizzy's rampage
Holy crap what can be done to stop Lizzy?! Will the president give in to her demands? What are her demands? Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Aight thx man! Glad the story carries you away! You will soon find out
Date: August 31 2017 7:38 AM Title: Shocking news
This is getting so good! The part about the little man seeing the buildings in Lizzy's cleavage is just genius... And the way she treats the tiny people is delicious.
But most of all, I'm really excited about where you've taken it. It sounds like maybe Lizzy is going to grow with the amulet now? I'm really rooting for her to grow to several miles tall, fight the military old school style, and then take over the entire world. Also looking forward to some interaction with the mom and the tiny city, as well as more with the other two girls.
Really glad you've found your inner author. The world of literature is a beautiful world, and nothing against video games but I believe that reading/writing can open your mind in ways that on-screen entertainment cannot.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your kind words Hongo.
glad you like the personality of Lizzy. I'm happy that readers experience her in the way I intended to while writing.
As for the next chapter, I'm almost done with it. So you can soon find out what will happen :)
I can say that all girls will have their gts time in the whole story
Yeah, I definitely agree with your statement about the world of literature.
As for gts material, I lately prefer reading a good gts story above watching or even buying a gts movie/clip.
A movie can be great, but there is no more room for your imagination, everything is already filled up.
Date: August 27 2017 4:11 PM Title: Accidental discoveries
Great story. Please let Lizzy grow
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the compliment!
[Report This]Date: August 27 2017 1:15 PM Title: Accidental discoveries
Oh boy Lizzy is becoming my favorite. Christi still my favorite, but Lizzy is loving all of this haha
Author's Response:
hey thank you very much for posting a review!
glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: August 27 2017 1:12 PM Title: Things become serious now
Oh boy Lizzy looks like she might get a little carried away with the power!
[Report This]Date: August 27 2017 1:11 PM Title: Shocking news
This story has a lot of potential. I cant wait to see how emily and christi act more with the little people and what the sister is going to do!
Date: August 07 2017 2:50 AM Title: Shocking news
Lol omg!
Im so Sorry Hongo i was replying on you review and i accidently erased it. Wtf!
I copied the text below here. Hope you dont mind.
Reviewer: Hongo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2017 2:39 PM Title: Shocking news
Just read the story as it stands so far... There seem to be a lot of these types of stories being made now, these being ones where shrunken cities appear in the houses of giant girls and are subjected to their evil whims. Incident at Grove View Apartments, Mega Mom's Mini Metropolis, to name 2 of my recent favorites.
Yours is so far one of the best. I love the concept, and I love the characters. They are acting exactliy how they should until now. I'm hoping that either Lizzy or Christi do end up gaining even more power and shrinking more cities. Also hoping to see some giant foot massage/pedicure scenes as well as placing the people on their boobs and thighs and things. Including the mom could get fun as well.
Also want to comment about your language, because you keep mentioning it. Sometimes authors who are late to the language come up with very interesting styles. Their prose can even become poetic, especially if they have a good vocabulary but aren't exposed to contemporary English vernacular and speech patterns. I find that you fit into this category. So no complaints from me on that agenda.
Thanks for contributing and keep up the good work!
-Hongo
Author's Response:
Just wow! I could only dream for a review like that. Many thanks there. I must say, i was realy insecure to write a story and post it. I thought 'who am i to think i could post a story next to all those brilliant writers here like Topmilenko, Hedin, Chozo. Just to name few. Funny you mention those two stories. They are actually one of my favorites to. I allready read them multiple times and probably will do so in de future 😊 Especially the writer of Incident at grove view. I respect him a lot as writer and i allready send him countless of credits with my other account lol. Its more than a honor that you compare him with me. Im glad that there are actually people that enjoys my story. Thats enough motivation for me to continue. Its also great i finaly seemed to have found a hobby. I realy enjoy writing and to think its only since a couple of years i started reading books. Its better then playing Street fighter and battlefield all the time lol. Havent gamed for more then a week now and thats a rarity. As for the story. I dont want to give away to much, only that you wont be disappointed 😉
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Date: August 01 2017 11:44 PM Title: Shocking news
I liked the story. Looking forward to more. What will happen to the city? Will we see another city get shrunk? Maybe go through the process of it shrinking. I hope the Mother finds it. Maybe she will enjoy peering in at the tiny people. That would be cool. I'd like to see the Mother get involved.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
thanks for the review, I appreciate it!
lol, nice to see you're enthusiastic about the story.
No worries though, the process of it shrinking, is also on the agenda ;)
The three girls are the main protagonists of the story, but the mother will definitely get involved
many thanks for your review ;)