Date: January 11 2024 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: The First Domino
Really miss reading your newest creations
[Report This]Date: October 19 2021 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 11: A Helping Hand
Love your writing, can't wait to see what happens during the photo shoot.
[Report This]Date: October 19 2021 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: The First Domino
Glad to see this back, one of your best stories!
Hope to see more updates!!
Date: October 19 2021 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 11: A Helping Hand
MY MAN! You DELIVERED! guess i owe ya that $10 and the gas station burrito afterall, I know this whole chapter was dedicated to that! ha! jk
Thank you so much for continuing this one! hope you can make some time to continue it but anything from your mind seems to be gold.... so ... KEEP ON MININ'
Date: September 16 2021 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: The First Domino
SOLE WRITER! Yeah, Im talking to you! Look, you see this crowd?? They love you, cant get enough! Take a bow! really, your on stage take a bow.
But much like the crowd loves you i love this story!I havent left a review yet, but i should have much sooner. I LOVE THIS STORY, like forreal i have read it prob like 10 times or more, who knows when this mind wanders.
Anyway i wont bore you too much longer, Just make sure you give yourself a pat on the back. The delivery, pacing, the foot content, I MEAN COME ON! it doesnt get better then this! the hot wife then the sneaky deal making friend. Just do me a favor... pat yourself on the back.......
Im waiting....
Did you do it?
Dont lie to me
Ok Ok i believe you!
But all jokes aside, i hope one day you can continue this story, I like it, I love it, I WANT SOME MORE OF IT
did you just sing that, cause I did.
Listen, i got $10 on 2 chapters and a gas station burrito, but i know all you really need is that burrito but cash helps too right?
Ok, Its late and im delirious talking to myself, AGAIN love this story, hope you are doing well in this crazy world and have time to do what you love.
PS HMU fam, the burrito is frozen but only keeps so long
Author's Response:
Wow, haha! You know how to get an author hyped to write a story. Given your enthusiasm, I will try and start another chapter for this. I think I have scrapped some prior ones in the past since they didn't seem to turn out right. I actually really enjoyed writing this but need to work on outlining the rest of this story and where to take it. Honestly its been so long, I think I forgot my original plan. Thanks for the review - things like this don't go unnoticed by authors.
[Report This]Date: January 07 2019 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 10: Land of Amazons
Darn, what a tease haha. Excited to really meet Anya in the next chapter. Great to see you post again!
[Report This]Date: January 06 2018 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 8: Indebted
Great stuff as always! I can only imagine how Janica is going to make him pay the debt. Can’t wait for more.
Date: December 08 2017 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 7: A Strange Awakening
Please don't give up and keep writing
[Report This]Date: November 14 2017 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 7: A Strange Awakening
I figured Kyle’s shrinking was all Velma’s plan, but I can’t say I’m very surprised about this revelation either. Janica is quite the master manipulator as well haha. Good work!
Author's Response: Originally that was the plot, but has since adapted haha. I’ve made Janica a bit more evil than intended. Glad everyone is enjoying it. Thanks again for reading. I look forward to your future installments.
Date: November 13 2017 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 7: A Strange Awakening
Kyle should run away if he can. Janica can be tough and persuasive. Nice chapter. Greatly enjoying your story.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response: Kyle definitely put himself in a precarious situation. Good for the drama! Thanks for reading.
Date: October 11 2017 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 6: Boy Toy
Ugh oh.
[Report This]Date: October 11 2017 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 6: Boy Toy
Janica really enjoys messing with Kyle. Looks like things are gonna get steamy in the next chapter. Looking forward to it!
Author's Response: Yes she does! I'll try to get the next chapter out as fast as I can.
Date: September 19 2017 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 5: A Lesser Man
Love this story. Love his slow shrinking. Manila will get him. I like situations where an adult treats him like a child.
Author's Response: Awesome! Thanks for reading. I like a little dominance myself.
Date: September 19 2017 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 5: A Lesser Man
Love this story. Love his slow shrinking. Manila will get him. I like situations where an adult treats him like a child.
Date: September 04 2017 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 5: A Lesser Man
Somehow I failed to notice this story until now, so I read five chapters in one gulp. TOTALLY WORTH IT!
Author's Response: Well better late than never 😉 Glad you like it!
Date: August 01 2017 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 4: Keeping a Secret
Good for kyle but he's going down a dangerous path.
Date: July 29 2017 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: The First Domino
This is such a good style of writing! I love the ratio of gentle, to feet, to good storytelling. Awesome.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading! I'll try to keep the balance 👍
Date: July 28 2017 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 3: Trying to Be Normal
Loved that he sat at a small table. Emma protecting him is cool. Love the shopping. Will someone confuse him with a little boy?
Soon he will be treated like a child. Emma is slowly already doing this.
Pretty soon he will be small enough that he needs to be babysat. I hope the babysitter lets him know who is clearly in charge and treats him according to his size.
Love it,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: July 28 2017 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: The First Domino
Good story so far. Will be interesting to see if Emma continues to see Kyle as her husband or if she begins to see him as more of a pet. Maybe have Emma and Janica go for a night on the town whether he likes it or not.
Date: July 28 2017 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 2: Six Under
Nice chapter. I can see his frustration. Understandable. I would have liked more between the nurse and him. Maybe more when she towers over him. I liked the doctor will see you shortly. Nice using short with him.
I also wanted more from the doctor. Maybe blood tests, X-rays? She sounds like a fine character to look up to. Will the doctor start talking to Emma and ignore him like he was a child,
Great story,
Diesel