Glad to see you got back on the writing saddle!

Anyways, I think this is a pretty great story, unabashedly smutty and short and sweet. You do a good job with describing things to keep it all exciting without it being heavy handed or repetitive. It shows you have a very clear understanding of "less is more" in this story.

You also did a good job of packing in different ways for Julie to torment the little ones while keeping the chapters brief. I appreciate that you wrote it so the characters recognized the very real threat on their lives and the raw fear it's bundled with. They're all rather one dimensional as far as characters go but given this is a short and sweet, smut-n-snuff that isn't really a problem.

I often find it a bit silly when macros mistake the tinies for bugs (bugs aren't bipedal) but I think it fits with Julie here because she seems characterized as rather nearsighted, both literally and figuratively in that she so wrapped up in her own desires to notice small but glaring details.

Overall, great story! Good to have you back.

Oooh, this is sadistic, I love it!

My only thing would be to let them be broken more psychollogically. I think the fear is extremely important but in this story it moves a little too fast and though it's said it's not felt.

Looking forward to the last bit, though!

Brilliant. Asian younger sister is truly the best genre.

I'd be excited to see the last one be dumped down the back of her panties, and perhaps for her to try to play the still-running video game, unknowingly reducing her brother even further as he struggles against the creases of her asshole.

wonderful start