Reviews For Lana's Laboratory
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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2017 8:05 AM Title: Lana's Laboratory

Great story. Loved Lana.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2017 3:21 AM Title: Lana's Laboratory

 Amazingly detailed. Your 'spot-on' imaginative descriptions, creating this terrifying, yet extremely realistic view. The perspective told from her hapless subject's new reality, made her appear so real - I felt it.  

 The mystery of her other victims lingering in the background, and his journey across the great tile plain, ...taking him beneath her chair...

 Awesome story!  ;`)

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