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Date: December 24 2024 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi Aborigen

I don't understand why such a beautiful story gets few comments. For my part, At first the reading was tedious but I ended up enjoying the story. If you want to take it up again I will make you some suggestions. I could even collaborate if you accept. Thank you

Reviewer: Mouseyman99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2019 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

There's more to this right?  please tell me there's more!



Author's Response:

There will be more, but I have to write more of the other story first. This will always be the tiny man's perspective, so more action has to happen elsewhere.

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